[pecenipicek]

well, since i wasnt here a looooong time, time for an art dump.

Pretty self-exlanatory, NX-01 versus my favourite ship(some of you may or may not remember it...) the NX-01 mesh is courtesy of Axeman.( http://www.axeman3d.com )



a ship i made for a member of SpaceBattles.com(the blue one) vs my huge ship...



self explanatory


2 ships of my own devising...


manuevers of my ships...


and a mug

[Lt.Cannonfodder]

Overall not bad, but your space shots seem to lack shadows and thus lose a lot of their potential. Also, pay attention to your composition. Most of those images are way too crowded. Keep working, you'll get better over time

Oh, and if you used someone else's work on a render it would be nice if you put in credits.

[pecenipicek]

Overall not bad, but your space shots seem to lack shadows and thus lose a lot of their potential. Also, pay attention to your composition. Most of those images are way too crowded. Keep working, you'll get better over time

dont understand, there were always shadows included in the stuff i rendered, but obviously the placement was such that it didnt show it the way it should have... meh...

Oh, and if you used someone else's work on a render it would be nice if you put in credits.

well, i always posted a link to the persons website if i used his/hers work, always, i dont steal art like some people on some other boards

thanks for the comments tho

[Unknown Target]

Your composition definately needs work - it's too crowded and has no contrast, so it's almost impossible to see what's what (for instance, I'm still not sure what your ships look like ), but good renders otherwise Melikes

[FireCrack]

^yeah, on the first one i thaught that disc shaped thing was a small fighter flying over the nt E until i realy examined it.

[pecenipicek]

whee


well, when i dont clutter stuff together, my ability to completely suck at making decent backgrounds comes into play

whee

[Corsair]

Well maybe you should try working on that then... post some backgrounds and get some criticism.

[pecenipicek]

okay.

will do soon, after i complete the scene i'm currently working on...


ahem, a WIP of the scene.

details about it will come when i finish it. deadline is 28th november...
whee.

[pecenipicek]

well, here is the finished scene from above


my current project- a space/atmospheric fighter.


thoughts, comments?

[karajorma]

I saw that fighter over on SpaceBattles. Looks interesting

[pecenipicek]

thanks

[pecenipicek]

a minor update. moved the canards to the front, and am currently trying to get them to look like they have some hard edges...