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« on: October 30, 2007, 05:19:59 PM »

This is just a short story I threw together, enjoy!

Memories

   Okay Beta, form up, we've got to scout out this node before we take the convoy through.  As he traveled to the node, Beta 3 skimmed one of the transports, and saw the face of a small boy gazing out at him.  He flashed back to when he was a child, crammed into a transport in the process of evacuating the infested Capella system.
   We're almost to the node, prepare for jump.  The voice came over the comm as he watched the other transports in their group.  A fighter flew by, close enough that he could see the pilot, a tiny figure compared to the machine he controlled.  The pilot glanced in his direction, not a scratch on his fighter, as the Shivans hadn't yet decided to attack.  The pilot waved, and did a graceful backflip before speeding away to join his comrades at the rear of the convoy.  Moments later the view was obscured by the blue/white blur of subspace.
   He never got to meet that pilot, who had turned away from the node at the last minute to save a transport from an incoming bomb that would have destroyed it, allowing the transport to escape into subspace as the supernova shockwave bared down.
   Beta 3, come on, we've got a job to do.  He was jolted out of his ruminations by Beta leader.  He looked over at the face in the porthole and a grim smile came to his lips.  He rolled his fighter into a corkscrew before he powered away toward the node.


EDIT: Some replies would be nice.
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« Reply #1 on: November 03, 2007, 12:45:46 AM »

Took me a little while to separate past from present, but nicely done.
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« Reply #2 on: November 03, 2007, 07:47:32 AM »

[move]Is this just a one-off or will there be more of this?[/move]
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« Reply #3 on: November 03, 2007, 03:05:54 PM »

Don't know yet, if people really like it I'd kind of have to write more.  The problem would be thinking of all the new stuff they have, as it's been years since Capella.  Not to mension names and such. ZylonBane's warp smiley
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"Well, I suppose it's not surprising people are a little nervous about the thing, it'd be bad enough to have aliens arrive in 500 years to find we'd destroyed ourselves through Warfare and Famine, then they'd just be sad and a little bit cynical, if they found out we'd destroyed the planet by the Quantum equivalent of 'What happens if I press this?' I think they'd probably give us the Interstallar equivalent of a Darwin award....."  --  Flipside

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« Reply #4 on: November 04, 2007, 02:41:12 PM »

I'm interested.
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« Reply #5 on: November 04, 2007, 03:16:46 PM »

Don't know yet, if people really like it I'd kind of have to write more.

I always like reading these.
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