Mission 14:
There should be more capital ships in Hossel's support fleet.
those are not really his support ships, rather just some of his ships resupplying, suprised by the neointel attack
thats the reason why they are attacked with such haste -> why most of the briefing takes place ingame
If the AWACS can disguise the transports why can't it disguise the fighters? Are the stealth fighters necessary?
The load out and the use of one wing of stealth fighters almost telegraph that this mission is designed to fail. The subach used with a stealth fighter with limited primaries and secondaries almost makes failure inevitable.
You have the Prometheus D in the mission loadout should that be the Prometheus S?
i imagined it that way: not only is the Awacs' disguising range limited (hence why it has to fly near the ganymede rings at all) so the fighters could probably fly out of disguising range, also can't we just say it can not disguise many ships, and 3 transports + a full squadron would be too much? why not just use already stealthed fighters then..
but mostly because i think having to fight in a pegasus is something different for once and i needed a reason to have them fight
oh and it adds to the whole "stealthy" atmosphere of the mission *shrug*
the prometheus is wrong of course, have to cange that!
regarding the language stuff you sent me a pm about:
i can see were you are coming from, but i don't think missions 14 and 15 are that bad, are they? (any particular phrases in mind in those missions? i'm not a native speaker so might regard one or two things wrong)
anyway i will have a look at them, can't remember every exact word right now
in mission 16 you might very well be right, i indeed might have overdone especially hossels comments, they indeed are a bit out of his character in earlier missions - i'm very much considering to change them to some degree
all in all i think you do not really like them missions, do you?
i have to confess that has me worrying a bit, since not only do i like them quite a bit myself (and that is mostly NOT due to the fact that i have made them!), also a lot of time went into getting them right
regardless, thanks a lot for the feedback !