What I like:
Dat Hexagon!
Greebles. Greebles everywhere!
The towers.
Clever translation of texture into hull detail in several different places.
What I'm not completely sold on:
Silver-roofed office buildings on the docking platform. That color just looks out of place there.
I feel an opportunity was missed to add detail and definition to a docking platform element: what I presume to be bulk cargo access, or escape pod hatches, or fighter elevators down to a maintenance level. Probably not the latter, since they were also on a different texture on other parts (residential?) of the hull. You didn't even just copy the original, you made them all glowing white instead of green squares with white outer markings. On the other hand, there's so much added detail to every other part of the hull that that one little thing is really a non-issue.
