[TopAce]

Now that there were words about standalone missions, I was inspired.

I spent three complete hours working on this mission. I am confident I could produce something good in such a short time. The mission's structure is not complicated.

Download here

Feedback is welcome.

[EDIT]Mission updated, following pyro-maniac's suggestions.

[pyro-manic]

I'll give it a spin.

[TopAce]

Before I forget: I did not give it to anyone to grammar check it. You can comment on that, if it's constructive, with examples.

[pyro-manic]

Will do. I'll post my opinion as well as any corrections shortly...

[TopAce]

*is curious to see this 'any corrections.'*

[RED DIAMOND]

Straight forward escort the partially damaged cap ship mission.

I enjoyed it, but the enemy seemed to jump in a bit too close to the damaged ship, but that is just an opinion not a knock.

 

[pyro-manic]

OK: I liked the mission - nice and simple, nothing too flashy, just get on with it. Nicely done. The only thing I picked up on was the timing and positioning of the attacks. Perhaps have the delays between waves a bit longer, but make the waves more powerful? If anything, the Nephilim seemed to be too close to launch their bombs. Make them arrive further away, have 6 per wing, and have slightly longer gaps between the waves.

On to the corrections - I've gone over the messages and brief/debrief quickly, and I've corrected and/or re-written them to what I think is better. I've tried to keep them similar, but some of your structures were a bit awkward so I rearranged them. Bear in mind that these are only my opinions, so ignore anything you don't like. Hope I've been of some help.

http://www.freewebs.com/pyro-manic/Topace.rar

[TopAce]

Thanks for the help, the delays between the waves are usually between 5 seconds and 80-100 seconds, so I don't think making the delay higher is necessary.

[DarthWang]

I like it! But I have a question, how do I upload my own mission so people can download it?

[TopAce]

You need an FTP(File Transfer Protocol) server. I suggest you go to: www.game-warden.com/forum and make a request for an FTP server.

To use an FTP server, you must have an FTP-controlling programme, I have SmartFTP(Search in Google and you will find it, it's free to download). I am pretty sure that is a nice programme, easy to learn.

[DarthWang]

thanks

[pyro-manic]

Or an easier way is to sign up for some free webspace (eg freewebs.com or geocities or something), upload the mission file there and then link to it.

[Spicious]

Submit it to Hades Combine.