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Off-Topic Discussion => Arts & Talents => Topic started by: shiv on July 17, 2008, 03:05:24 pm

Title: Shiv's playing his guitar
Post by: shiv on July 17, 2008, 03:05:24 pm

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RJnMniVkHHQ
Just tell me what's your opinion and what to improve... ;)

Title: Re: Shiv's playing his guitar
Post by: Flipside on July 17, 2008, 05:39:27 pm

Fretting etc sounded good enough, but it's difficult to tell with timing etc, since you really need a drummer or drum machine going in the background to hear what the timing is intended to be, but from what I heard of it, sounded fine :)

Watch the bends during the solo, it's really tempting, especially when you start on guitar, to try and end every run with a bend, this is not only somewhat clichéd, but you'd be amazed how many people just shunt the string across the fretboard without even considering what note they are aiming for ;) Other than that, solid enough solo, if a little bluesy compared to the rest of the tune, but that's purely a matter of opinion.

Title: Re: Shiv's playing his guitar
Post by: shiv on July 18, 2008, 01:29:52 am

Thanks :) I'll try with electirc drums.

Title: Re: Shiv's playing his guitar
Post by: shiv on July 19, 2008, 04:55:41 pm

Now with percussion :D
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hQIBZXySwUU

Title: Re: Shiv's playing his guitar
Post by: varsaigen on July 19, 2008, 11:51:46 pm

much more bearable! It's nice to hear drums (yeah, i'm a drummer). So far, it's sounds good. Even with the basic drum part. XD