OK, aside from the spelling and grammer mistakes...
I think the mission is too easy. I didn't lose a single wingman (I'm not sure why you have Beta wing becoming invulnerable), and the Argo and Deimos were in no danger of being destroyed. (Escaped with more than 70% and 50% hull respectively.)
Is it intentional that the Corley does not fire her beams? I think the mission would be a bit more challenging if she did.
I also think that either Taurus or Zeta wings should be set to two waves, not the current one. One wave each is just not enough to provide a viable threat.
If things are still too easy, maybe change the Ateneous to a Leviathan. That might do it.
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