Ok, played it.
I'll comment only on what i saw ingame, as i haven't checked it in FRED.
The Good:
Adding all the VA from the show to the Briefings is pretty cool, gave me instantly a "yeah, the good old times..." feeling. :yes:
Same thing for the ingame comchatter.
The backgrounds are nicely put together.
Very Atmospheric.
The Bad:
The mission is short. Seriously.
Playtime on medium around 1.30min, with no involvement from me whatsoever.
In most cases, Missions based on certain events on TVShows, don't work. This is one of them, this mission doesn't work "as it is". You have to change it a bit, to make enjoyable for the player.
Remove the Missiles from the loadout, for both all the AI and the Player for instance.
The screen is black on Mission start...for too long.
You could make the duration of this shorter and place an Jumpout effect in the middle
of the Jumpgate. That would be a nice touch.
Take what i said as suggestion.
You've put a lot of effort in this, and i'd like to see a polished final version. :)