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Offline Mad Bomber

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Mad Bomber's random fiction/backstory thread
Reposting this here, because Sectorgame isn't terribly populated and apparently no one can be arsed to make an account there just to read my stuff. So I'm tossing this out here on HLP, to see what sort of reception it'll get. This is related to the detailed backstory and campaign setting I've had cooking for a while (which includes ETF) but it isn't really spoileriffic.



THE SCHISM

HLI Giza (Former Sahr Corp. shipyards)
Sector 47-66-0
Altair
April 4, 2338


The command structure of the Hammer of Light, such as it was, was in an uproar. Though the so-called Destroyers could be killed, and their flagship was destroyed enroute to Sol three years ago, the Hammer of Light had soldiered on in rebellion against the Parliamentary Vasudan Empire. Pockets of Shivan resistance had been holding out for some time in the outer systems; which continued to provide a slim religious pretext to continue fighting the Terrans and the corrupt heathen Vasudans who enabled them. More and more as time went by, though, the HOL seemed held together only by force of personality.

And now, the last of the old guard was dead. Admiral Gar Tallanis had been killed trying to avenge the capture of his flagship, the HLD Hammer, by GTA forces.

The GTA! Even though both the GTA was all but shattered by the loss of Terra, and by the losses they had taken in their civil war shortly afterwards, the tenacious bastard humans had held on. The rump state of the GTA now only ruled over Beta Aquilae and Delta Serpentis (and, on paper at least, Vega). The Terrans had no military shipyards to speak of. They ought to have been a spent force!

But some bizarre sort of divine providence had shined upon them and saw fit, via a quirk of subspace, to deposit two long-lost, powerful, priceless capital ships right into their hands. And oh, had they used them.

Now, without the commanding presence of the most experienced and beloved member of the Vasudan Admiralty to guide them and inspire their loyalty, the Hammer of Light was without a leader. Already, four different factions had emerged, and all but the smallest were arguing loudly in what used to be a large meeting room for shareholders of the Sahr Corporation.


High Seeker Ulchas'raa, of the Hunter faction, cut in loudly. "It should be obvious to us all by this point, that we were not fighting on behalf of the True Destroyers of legend!" Some shouts of agreement, others of scorn for what would have been a heretical position even a year ago. "The Shivans are False Destroyers, I say! And we must punish them all! Help me hunt down those few who remain with righteous fervor! Those who do not have the will to join me in this holy quest, stay behind and rot like the dvah'nai you are."

"You are a fool, Ulchas'raa!" someone shouted as the High Seeker turned to leave.

Turning back to the heckler, the High Seeker replied, "And what would *you* do, hmm? Waste our time and our holy fervor on the Terrans to get vengeance for the war?" (A sizable number, off to the side, shouted affirmatives.)

The young heckler had a gleam in her eye. It was part idealism, and partly something… different. Amusement, perhaps? "Hardly. But this may not be the only group of False Destroyers. So you hunt them down, what then? It is our destiny to serve the True Destroyers, yes, but other False Ones could still be a major threat."

"So we shall serve as advance scouts for the rest of the Vasudan people, then." The High Seeker replied with a sneer, but he couldn't help he was walking into a verbal trap.

"They will no longer believe us. More importantly, though, think of this: Humans and Vasudans developed at roughly the same time, in the same part of the galaxy. And the Ancients were active only 8000 years ago, recently enough that the first members of the Imperial Dynasty were aware of them."

"Your point, young one?" Ulchas'raa made sure to emphasize the heckler's youth and inexperience with as much of a sneer as possible, and with the most condescending verb tense the amazingly complex Vasudan language had to offer.

"My point is that there are potentially many other sentient species in this galaxy. Species who we could aid against the False Destroyers, and who could aid us in return. Perhaps the Ancients still live somewhere, or perhaps the species they discovered do."

"So, your plan is to take our holy crusade, and turn it into a pointless trek through the endless void?"

"My plan, High Seeker," --she returned Ulchas'raa's scorn full force, speaking his title as an epithet-- "is to build an alliance of species so strong that only the True Destroyers could exercise their holy right to eliminate it. We shall spread the Blessed Prophecy every step of the way, and the Hammer of Light shall become the Guardians of the Galaxy!"

By this point, most of the die-hard anti-Terran revenge-seekers began to leave the chamber, but surprisingly enough more than two thirds of the HOL's commanders were still there, listening to this young upstart, rapt. One member of the crowd asked the young female what her name was. "Takh'maa," she replied.

To Ulchas'raa's horror, several High Seekers began to abandon him and pledge their support to Takh'maa and her philosophy. Most of Ulchas'raa's support was evaporating right in front of him. A few remained, mostly those who valued getting revenge on the False Destroyers, but the vast majority was now chanting Takh'maa's name and pledging their loyalty to her.



The Hunters departed Altair for Regulan space shortly afterwards, with a rather pathetic force of a dozen gunboats, five Aten cruisers and a smattering of fighters, carried on external docking collars. Hardly the overwhelming crusade Ulchas'raa had called for, but he was too proud to back out now. He only hoped he and his followers would take enough of the False Destroyers with them to make it worthwhile.

The Guardians, meanwhile, wound up with the majority of the war materiel and ships, much to the chagrin of the enraged hard-liners. They would need to make careful preparations in order to survive as a coherent force, which included making sure they could repair damage to their capital ships, and replace parts as needed while on the move. They would also need a population base, and a food supply, but there were still numerous refugees from Vasuda with nowhere to go, and if nothing else the Guardians could always bribe a corrupt member of Parliament, or perhaps the Regulans, to come up with any technology they needed.

The hard-liners remained in Altair, now determined to cause as much havoc as possible (preferably against the Terrans), while the last (and smallest) of the groups decided to move on to Regulus, and began to atone for their past crimes by performing charitable works.


In June 2339, the Guardians' preparations were finally complete. They left Altair for the unknown, in hopes of bringing the Light to the rest of the galaxy…



Comments, questions etc welcome  :nod:
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Offline starlord

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Re: Mad Bomber's random fiction/backstory thread
interesting! any more you'd wish to share?

 

Offline Trivial Psychic

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I assume that following chapters would chronicle the much later return of the Guardians?
The Trivial Psychic Strikes Again!

 

Offline Mad Bomber

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Re: Mad Bomber's random fiction/backstory thread
To answer those questions -- sort of and sort of. It's all going to seem extremely disjointed at first.

Here's a repost of another story snippet I posted on Sectorgame a while back:


STRATEGY SESSION

NTD Moscow
Sector A-181-248-90
Regulus
November 7th, 2367
2021 hrs shipboard time


   "You wanted to see me, Admiral?"
   
"Yes, Thomas. Please, sit down."
   
Commodore Thomas Talmadge did so. He had a sinking feeling that he knew why Admiral Ndenge Kowou had called him to his ready room. After an awkward pause, he decided to ask the Admiral directly.

   "It's about the counterattack, isn't it?"

   Kowou sighed. "Yes, Thomas, it is."

   Another pause. "How bad was it?"

   Kowou grimaced as though the truth left an unpalatable taste in his mouth. "We lost two cruisers, the Amakuni, thousands of marines, the Alsace, and the Corsica. It was all the more humiliating for us because the Allied blockade consisted only of a few fighters and bombers."

   The Corsica! The only one of the new Hecate-class destroyers the NTF had been able to commandeer...

   And now, it was gone. Along with several other warships, and any hope whatsoever of the NTF retaking Sirius.

   The implications were clear. The Neo-Terran Front would be lucky to last more than another two weeks, at most. Guerrilla warfare might prolong the matter, but it wouldn't change the overall outcome.

   "Good God. What are our orders from Admiral Bosch?"

   "Officially, they're still the same as always. Blast any Allied vessels that come into range and try to defend Regulus. However, I'm privy to more insider information than usually gets out. I know more or less what Bosch intends to do, though frankly I've got no idea why."

   That, also, was news to Talmadge. If Bosch intended to make a defiant last stand in Regulus, pure spite would be more than enough explanation, and his troops would go down defending him to the last. But if it wasn't spite...

   Talmadge looked at his commanding officer. Admiral Kowou seemed genuinely confused and vexed by this question. He knew that Kowou had had schooling in psychology before being forced into the military in the late '30s; something as simple as a defiant last stand would have occurred to him by now. Bosch had to have something different in mind.

   Kowou answered his subordinate's unspoken question. "Bosch intends to take the remaining ships of the Neo-Terran armada, blitzkrieg through Allied lines, and make it through the Knossos portal."

   "You're kidding."

   Kowou suddenly looked far older and wearier than his forty-seven years. "I wish I were. But that's not the real reason I called you up here. I don't intend to follow the rest of the NTF armada into certain death."

   Alarm bells rang in Talmadge's head. The man could mean only one thing. "Permission to speak freely, Admiral?"

   "Of course."

   "Have you lost your bloody mind!?! The GTVA would never let us defect back! And surrender, for us -- high-ranking Neo-Terran officers, mind you -- would entail being paraded in front of crowds of angry Zods on Cygnus Prime and Aldebaran! And then we'd be beheaded in front of his Imperial Fracking Majesty Khonsu himself!"

   Kowou was actually chuckling.

   "And just what is so funny?"

   This set Kowou laughing more. "Don't tell me you actually believe that nonsense about Vasudan beheading ceremonies, Thomas!"

   "Well, no, not really. But we'd still be executed for certain, sir. And the rest of the crew would mostly wind up in Vega, working in the mines."

   "Which is why we're not surrendering."

   For all his strategic acumen, Admiral Kowou could be exasperatingly evasive from time to time. Talmadge suppressed the urge to shake the man so that he'd get to the bloody point.

   Kowou was chuckling again. "Alright, alright, Thomas. Bosch gave me his blessing on this one. Officially, we're to lead a 'rear guard task force', to harass some of the Allied pursuing units."

   "And... unofficially?"

   "Unofficially, we're taking forces Bosch can't count on, mainly freighters, but also some warships he doesn't quite trust, and as many of our families as we can bring. I've also talked to several other captains about it. I plan to take us as far away from the GTVA as possible, and start a new Neo-Terra. The way it should have been."

   Both of them knew what the way it should have been meant, from previous conversations. No massacres. No brute squads. No Internal Affairs agents spying on people's behavior. No 'need to know basis'.

   It wasn't a terribly detailed plan.

   Lots of things could go wrong.

   But there was still a much better chance of coming out of it alive -- perhaps even free -- than running almost a dozen blockaded nodes and trying to somehow communicate with the Shivans. Assuming they'd even listen.

   "Alright, sir. I'm in."

   Kowou smiled. "I figured you'd say that, Thomas. We're going to need more capital ship support than Bosch is giving us. At the moment, I've convinced the Falstaff and Samawal to join us, and Bosch is sending the Thor, Tonnante, and Revenant. But six ships does not a battlegroup make, especially when two of them are Fenrises and we've got freighters and transports to guard also."

   "What do you need me to do?"

   Kowou counted off on his forefinger. "First, see if you can convince anyone on the ships you served on to join us. Personal pull counts for a lot."

   The answer was immediate. "I can almost definitely get the Dauntless. The Baner's a toss-up. But I'm not at all optimistic about the Pax."

   Talmadge grimaced. If anything, that was an understatement. He remembered his brief, unpleasant tenure on the Pax under Captain Petersen. The man was as fanatic as they came, and was the harsh, paranoid type to boot. Trying to restrain Petersen's sadistic streak proved futile, and had nearly resulted in Talmadge being labeled an 'Alliance sympathizer'. Had Internal Affairs not had its hands full trying in vain to locate the runaway Commodore Atchison -- they never had found any trace of the Victoria or her escorts -- Talmadge would have been in for a rather unpleasant interrogation.

   The admiral continued. "Second, I'll need a report detailing our squadrons, their commanders, and their likelihood of obeying orders I give them. How soon can you get that to me, Thomas?"

   "I can give you an overview right now, if you prefer, sir." Part of Talmadge's job as the Moscow's XO was to keep tabs on crew morale, with the ship's fighter complement at the top of the list. Kowou motioned for him to go ahead.

   "Due mostly to attrition, we've only got 8 squadrons on the Moscow, rather than the usual 10. That and our string of losses has demoralized most everybody, I think. But the squadrons should stay with us as long as the Moscow's still operational."

   Talmadge went on, "There are only a few wildcards, I think. First off is the Moon Hawks, as always. They're damn good, but they're eccentric as hell. Their squadron leader's newly promoted, and one of their pilots is probably insane."

   Kowou nodded. "I think I've heard of that one. He claims he has visions, yes?"

   "That's the one. Ian Quinn. Did you hear about how he joined up?" Kowou shook his head. "Turns out he volunteered. Blew everyone away in the piloting simulations. And then outright demanded to be assigned to the Moscow, muttering about 'completing the circle' or something."

   "So he's a complete nutcase, with extreme piloting aptitude. That pretty much defines 'wild card'."

   "Yes, sir. Although the rest of the Moon Hawks insist that everything he's predicted in his 'visions' has come true."

   "Alright, Thomas. The details can wait for a while. For now, there's only one other thing, which is a private matter."

   Kowou beckoned Talmadge closer to him, and pulled out a small spiral-bound notepad. A rarity, these days, but certainly well within the prerogatives of an officer. On it Kowou wrote:

________________
INTERNAL AFRS
CAN HEAR US.

ROOT THEM OUT.

QUIETLY.
________________


   Talmadge nodded, and showed a predatory smile. "Of course, sir. It'll be done post haste."

   Kowou smiled in return. "That's all I needed to hear, Thomas." The admiral rapidly tore off the incriminating paper, pulled out a cigar -- yet another perk of high rank -- and lit both. "Dismissed."


   I'll be damned, Talmadge thought. We actually might survive this, after all.
"What the hell!? I've got a Snuffleupagus on my scanners! The Snuffleupagus is active!"

 

Offline starlord

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definately one of my favourite fanfics...

 

Offline Rodo

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Ian Quinn?, nice reading..... thanks :yes:
el hombre vicio...

 

Offline starlord

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what do you plan to do, given the different interest to your fiction? did ktistai speak with you about keeping the files?

 

Offline starlord

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any other fanfiction you care to share bomber?