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Hello felow users of HLP, i am trying to pull out an story to make it in some playable missions and maybe and campaing some day, I am a noob at writing things, but a nice little program named Kabikaboo (a funny name but open source program) its making me the work a little more clean, but never mind. I want to post an eraser or -alpha story-. Here its go, spanish is my first language, so gramatical issues could be present. Criticism accepted. thanks and there it goes.

So It could be an spoiler if i manage to do it some day. But just  read it  ;7

Reinvidication
-Post-Capella Campaign.-
Plot (Summary)
You are Enri Mestorre, a typical civilian of Delta Serpentis IV planet. You live a normal life, running as a Freighter captain withing the planet cities. With a beautifull wife and economical prosperity you can't ask for nothing else. Everything is perfect, but all of that can fall in any time...

M1: Brightfull City

Command Briefing
-There it's 3 o clock and you're finally out of the bed. Do you have to work today?
-Yes I do. According to this message it's something really big. You know monetarily talking
- Scrambled eggs?
-Okey, with some bacon and some papaya juice, please.
-It's so interesting how do we manage to have this kind of fruits around here  having those synthetic fruit packs.
-Technology may advance for ever, but I always will enjoy some classic Papaya juice made from an actual papaya. Somethings can't never change.
* 25 minutes later.
-Time to go to the work, thanks for the breakfast/lunch. Will see you later Honey.
-Take care dear, see you later.

Briefing:
P.1.-
-Good afternoon Mr. Mestorre. We have quite an mission today, its really easy but have a lot of money involved.
-Glad to hear that sir, tell me what is all about.
-Kinda easy one Enri, you have to take this cargo of classified ships to an dealer.
-I think I don't have to say that this involved thousands of credits.
-Always glad to hear about the word with "t" involved sir.
-You never change Enri, you will be using a new experimental freighter now. Just go to the fighterbay.
-Thanks boss.
-Goodspeed Enri.


Scenario [City, buildings everywhere, afternoon skybox]
Actors: Aristeia(Freighter), Escort Bots(bots), Newman (Installation ), FIF HQ(Not Present, Freighters and Fighters Unlimited), Omega Wing(Omega 1),
As the afternoon its already decaying and giving the pass to the night, the GTfr Aristeia is going to Sector 9 to deliver some civilian ships to an really odd Guy.

Aristeia: This is the GTGr Aristeia. I am talking to Newman?.
Newman: Newman at talk Aristeia. You just woke me up, nice one idiot. What are your business?
Aristeia:  -What the...-, Okey I just have to calm down, he is a very important client and this cargo worths like 20k credits. Good Afternoon sir, I am Enri from Freighters and Fighters Unlimited. I have the cargo you requested.
Newman: My ships!. What hour it is -he checks his watch- It's 5 o clock. Just in time. Ha-ha who can believe this, usually this cargo get late.

Aristeia: I request permission to deliver the cargo sir.
Newman: Go on, you Enrique, Enriquetta or whatever you're called.
Aristeia: -Just think in the profits of this delivery Erni, ignore that douche- Understood sir.
Aristeia: -Sensors read that platform as the drop zone. Platform 1-
Newman: I didn't notice those. What are those bots for?
Aristeia: Just escort bots Newman. Robotic Flying Automata's (RFA'S)
Newman: You are really some strange man Enriquetta. Okay then, keep your course.
Aristeia: -I will repeat, at least for my self, he is a big douche- Maintaining course Newman.
FIF HQ: This is FIF command. How are you doing Enri? Requesting mission update.
Aristeia: Just fine Command. I am a few clicks from docking with the Installation. All systems read green.
FIF HQ: Roger that Enri. Keep us informed. FIF HQ out.
*The GTFr Aristeia have reached the Installation.
* Automatic Docking procedure has started (Stuff made with some tricky sexp's)
Aristeia: Docking completed Newman, awaiting indications.
Newman: Await for the scan dude.
* 30 seconds later.
Newman: Wait a little further.
Aristeia: -This doesn't seems right, RFA'S defensive mode-  Understood Newman.
*Ships appear suddenly a wing of GTF Perseus(Omega).
Omega 1: Aristeia this is the Metropolitan police you are ordered to shut down you engines immediately and deactivate those RFA'S
Aristea: - What the hell- Understood Omega , shutting down the engines.
Aristea: What is the problem Omega?
Omega 1: We have been informed of some N.I drugs in your cargo. Scanning is underway just mantain the calm or we will open fire.
Aristea: Neuron Inhibitors. Really?. It can't be. I'am only transporting some ships.
Omega 1: Don't play smart with us, Enri. You are under arrest for possession and trading of an illegal drug. Just play it nice and we will act the same way.
Newman: So, you were trying to mess with me. Planting drugs in my Installation. That was an stupid mistake. Get this damn idiot away.
Aristea: That isn't true, i didn't load that cargo. They are four damn big ships Newman, I am a pilot not a cargo manager.
Newman: Tell that to the police douche.
* Aristeia got captured by the local police, they jump out.
*Mission End.

 

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