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Offline Colonol Dekker

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Random ten minute type up. N-JOY (Related to upcoming (whenever) TC.



LONG PATROL.
Black marsh system- 23/12/2297

HMS Farringdon –Guardian class corvette with escort

Captain Harrison checked the time on the digital readout above the viewscreen, it read twenty-one forty two. The bridge crew were relaxed and between the low-level lighting and the hum of the engines it was relaxing to say the least. He rolled his eyes and gave them a subtle rub masked with a gesture of feigned deep thought. “Status?” he asked openly, “Nothing on long-range sir” the XO replied,  The XO was walking between the bridge crews stations purposefully and confidently overlooking operations of his subordinates.  “Civilian traffic is steady, all sections report green lights and we’re running steady. We’re on schedule to complete patrol and begin the return trip at zero-one hundred.” The captain acknowledged with a nod.

Captain Harrison was a man in his late fifties; he’d started out as a junior officer, in logistical operations of all things. He was drafted at seventeen shortly after the outbreak of the colonial revolt and shown an aptitude for leadership. That proved to be of benefit as the war dragged on for as long as it did and Harrison rose steadily through the ranks to command level to end up here in command of the Farringdon. The Farringdon was a mid-level patrol corvette, a type 104 about three quarters of a kilometre long used mainly to patrol outlying core systems and escort larger class vessels like the Illustrious and the Oxford.
“Sir, convoy exiting subspace. Two ore carriers, one tanker and a personnel transport. Two klicks out” The XO gestured to the tactical overlay coming online in front of the viewscreen. The holograph showed 3D wireframe models of each craft in formation in relation to the Farringdon. “Order a flyby.” The XO now seated, pushed a button on the side of his ear-mic and relayed the request to the lead escort fighter. “Carry on here; I’ve got some business to attend to.” Harrison got up and made his way towards the exit, there was a bottle of fifty-eight single malt with is name on it, then some shut-eye. “Aye-Aye Sir.” The XO replied. He diligently tapped a few commands into his console and gave a few course corrections. Just to keep the crew on their toes.


A few moments earlier, just off the Farringdons portside, three Jaguar interceptors were finishing some late night discussions. . . “What do you mean? I had no idea she was your sister till I woke up and you were in the next room....” an audible chuckle was heard over the wideband from Baker two. “Weasel, wait until this patrol’s finished and I get you back to base..Wait a sec” there was a pause. The three fighters were holding formation in with the Farringdon and had been for three hours now, autopilot links and the latest in flight computer tech allowed basic manoeuvres like this to be taken care of by the fighters own logic. “Convoy ident guys.” Houdini addressed his wing, quite formally but there was no CAG on this sortie and the freedom was welcome. “Snowman, you stay with the tub, Weasel and I will go and say hello to the miners.” Baker two acknowledged by dropping back the throttle a touch and pulling in just a little closer to the four hundred thousand tonne “tub”. The rest of Baker wing pulled away slowly at first, then when clear of the warship they both pushed their twin Royce-Sumitomo engines to the max and shot off leaving a trail of ice crystal exhaust.


The shotglass, only a drizzle left was put down gruffly beside some old paperwork. Harrison tipped a refill nonchalantly into it and put the stopper back into the dusty bottle then set it down next to the single desk lamp. He was sitting at his desk; he’d bought that old desk with him to every ship he’d been assigned to since the rank of commander. He opened a drawer and took out a photo from under another wedge of papers. That photo was some twenty-six years old now. It showed a woman in her late twenties with a small child. The woman, almost certainly the mother was holding the child and was standing in a doorway with tears in her eyes. Harrison downed the glass in a single go and put his head in his hands and sobbed.

“This is Baker wing, sixteenth fighter wing Harewood station. Please identify and transmit flight path data.” Bakers one and two were now alongside the lead ore carrier and in escort formation.  “Gimme a sec, I’m just diggin’ it out now” a gruff middle aged voice replied. “Damn navy” although the last statement wasn’t intended to be heard the miner had obviously forgot to turn the mic off in time. “Great, another dirt sucking colonial.” Baker three said over the ship to ship. “Can it Weasel, we don’t need to incite anything. It’s been a nice quiet uneventful patrol. We’ve only got to get these guys cleared to transit to Meadowview and we can get back to base for some well earned R&R, we’ve got a weeks leave don’t forget.” There had been open dissent from the colonies since the rebellion and a lot of people out in the sticks were still unhappy that the core systems had won. It wasn’t an easy victory, but it was an inevitable one. Houdini came from a military family and he’d heard about the Colonial tenacity and doggedness from his father. Everything from using hostages as shields, to guerrilla tactics and sabotage. The royalist forces were no saints but they’d always tried to fight a fair war. “Repeat, identify and transmit flight path data.” By now the convoy was nearing the Farringdon and about to pass alongside. “Sendin’ ya the data now...” The Jaguars centre MFD lit up as a few strings of text appeared dimly covering the cockpit in green light. “Acknowledged, proceed on course.” The two fighters pulled away and moved to take up escort with the Farringdon again. “Stupid miners-“ Weasel was cut off mid sentence when one of the ore freighters made a hard turn, hit full speed and ploughed into the side of the Corvette. “What the hell was that?!?!” Snowman chimed in, “You tell me!!” The other freighter turned away from the Farringdon “What in the name of saint peter was that?” The miner sounded as baffled as the pilots did. 

Captain Harrison stormed onto the bridge “WHY IS MY SHIP UNDER ATTACK?” he bellowed, the crew were now wide awake and the bridge was in full alert condition, red light blanketed everything. The XO was organised and everyone appeared to be doing what they were supposed to. “One of the convoy rammed us Sir, damage reports coming in now.” The fury in Harrisons face was evident. He strode to the viewscreen and pointed at the convoy. “Those damned separatists, they knew we’d be here. They set this up and tried to take us down!!” The Captains cheeks were flushed and he was clearly losing all control.  One of the bridge crew piped up from his console, “Sir, Baker wing requests orders on how to proceed, the convoy is scattering.” The XO looked to his superior officer and awaited a response. The bridge staff did likewise, there was a feeling of trepidation in the air.
Campaigns I've added my distinctiveness to-
- Blue Planet: Battle Captains
-Battle of Neptune
-Between the Ashes 2
-Blue planet: Age of Aquarius
-FOTG?
-Inferno R1
-Ribos: The aftermath / -Retreat from Deneb
-Sol: A History
-TBP EACW teaser
-Earth Brakiri war
-TBP Fortune Hunters (I think?)
-TBP Relic
-Trancsend (Possibly?)
-Uncharted Territory
-Vassagos Dirge
-War Machine
(Others lost to the mists of time and no discernible audit trail)

Your friendly Orestes tactical controller.

Secret bomb God.
That one time I got permabanned and got to read who was being bitxhy about me :p....
GO GO DEKKER RANGERSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Offline Retsof

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and.... AND...?
By the way, as this is about a TC, is it a preexisting universe or one you made up?
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Offline colecampbell666

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Heh, I thought it was about the Redwall book. Sounds interesting, write more.
Gettin' back to dodgin' lasers.

 

Offline Colonol Dekker

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and.... AND...?
By the way, as this is about a TC, is it a preexisting universe or one you made up?

Self invented, same as Nova Imperia, just a bit earlier on in the timeline.

* Colonol Dekker googles "Redwall book"

“What the bloody hell happened? Sir? What are going to do?” Snowman was now in line with the other two escort fighters and alongside the impact site. The wreck of the freighter was now hanging mangled from the side of the Corvette. There was debris flaking away and a massive amount of cargo (in this case a few hundred tonnes of ore) was pouring out of what was left. It was hammering the hull of the warship and the three fighters had to perform evasive manoeuvres to avoid getting pummelled. “I don’t know, I just don’t know guys. Hold on a second, the XO’s on the horn...”


The freighter captain was in a state of shock, his whole crew was. It was no military vessel, they were all civilians. They’d been at the Santiago mining colony for seven months digging up rock and getting it into high orbit ready for transfer back to Meadowview for processing. Hard work, but honest work. There were a few suits from the inner systems back there to oversee the labour, but they left you alone if you kept out of their way. The captain liked that arrangement. He didn’t like the inner system folk much, they were always to prissy, too highly strung and pompous. But he liked the money they bought with them whenever they came down from their “Ivory towers” to play in the dirt. He’d left a wife and children back at the colony, the children were now in their early teens. But he had a young lady waiting for him at Meadowview, neither one knew about the other. He had kissed Mrs Captain goodbye and said “I’ll see ya in three months love.” And laughed silently to himself as she waved him off.  When his shuttle reached the waiting convoy, there was an extra ship in line. It wasn’t unheard of but he usually got some notice about it. Being the important convoy leader after all, he’d been at this racket for years now and deserved to be told about this sort of thing. “Bloody suits” he told himself. That was three weeks ago though, he had more important things on his mind now. Like that maniac ramming an imperial vessel. How could he, WHY would he do such a thing? The war had been over for over a decade and a half now.  Now those Navy boys would gun him down for sure, he had to make keep away until his J-Drive recharged. The heavy freighter buckled sharply as light fire raked its stern.


“Keep a straight bead on the engines Snowman.” Weasel jovially piped over the radio net. Houdini was keeping vigil as Weasel proceeded to flag down the fleeing tanker, meanwhile Snowman; the rookie of the group was anxiously trying to disable the fleeing ore freighter. “Dammit,” Snowman uttered to himself, this is nothing like the academy made out. All the exercises in the world could never prepare someone for the very first time you used live fire in a real combat situation. Sweat was pouring down his forehead; his heart was knotted up in his chest, he could feel blood throbbing in his toes, his fingers and his ears, nose and stomach. He could very well kill these people any moment if the order came through and the reality, the sheer gravity of that very concept had only just hit him. Even after a two year academy stint, he’d always just coasted the theory and got by on bravado without thinking about the implications.  Only twenty years old, he suddenly wanted very much to be back at home on Rosewood with his family. Working for his uncles financial company, guaranteed a job since conception he had thrown it away to become a flyboy simply to spite his parents. He wanted to do his own thing and travel the universe on his rich parents funds, they’d outright denied him and asked him to earn it himself. Be a man they said, earn a wage. No more free rides, he’d packed his bag and enlisted that very evening. Panic set in as he realised he was wasting his life doing something for the wrong reason, he never wanted to do this, he was just too stubborn to admit he was sorry. He thought of all the good times he'd had growing up and all the love his mum and dad had shown him, he wondered why in two years he'd never called to say where he was, or to invite them to his graduation.... He started to lose it completely......hyperventilation, then panic. Rookie error, he took his mask off, this in course caused him to throw up, the loss of fluid and high acceleration cased a grey out, and Snowman fainted.

Houdini saw the previously steady flight of Baker two become suddenly erratic and irregular, “Snowman?” He asked blankly, “What’s happening?”. “OH ****, Boss, I think we’ve got a problem here....” Weasel responded. Houdini just stared in horror as Baker Twos multi billion Pound fighter clipped the side of the freighter, rebounded into the side of it at full speed....and simply crumpled and expired.
« Last Edit: August 30, 2009, 09:55:24 pm by Colonol Dekker »
Campaigns I've added my distinctiveness to-
- Blue Planet: Battle Captains
-Battle of Neptune
-Between the Ashes 2
-Blue planet: Age of Aquarius
-FOTG?
-Inferno R1
-Ribos: The aftermath / -Retreat from Deneb
-Sol: A History
-TBP EACW teaser
-Earth Brakiri war
-TBP Fortune Hunters (I think?)
-TBP Relic
-Trancsend (Possibly?)
-Uncharted Territory
-Vassagos Dirge
-War Machine
(Others lost to the mists of time and no discernible audit trail)

Your friendly Orestes tactical controller.

Secret bomb God.
That one time I got permabanned and got to read who was being bitxhy about me :p....
GO GO DEKKER RANGERSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Offline Retsof

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Well... that sucks.
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Offline Colonol Dekker

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Well I've been up since 7:00am yesterday, I'm tired :p I'm on a Space battleship Yamato binge and I'm starting to hallucinate :lol:

Edit - feedback justifies continuance. So if you guys want more just say :yes:
« Last Edit: August 31, 2009, 06:56:46 am by Colonol Dekker »
Campaigns I've added my distinctiveness to-
- Blue Planet: Battle Captains
-Battle of Neptune
-Between the Ashes 2
-Blue planet: Age of Aquarius
-FOTG?
-Inferno R1
-Ribos: The aftermath / -Retreat from Deneb
-Sol: A History
-TBP EACW teaser
-Earth Brakiri war
-TBP Fortune Hunters (I think?)
-TBP Relic
-Trancsend (Possibly?)
-Uncharted Territory
-Vassagos Dirge
-War Machine
(Others lost to the mists of time and no discernible audit trail)

Your friendly Orestes tactical controller.

Secret bomb God.
That one time I got permabanned and got to read who was being bitxhy about me :p....
GO GO DEKKER RANGERSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
President of the Scooby Doo Model Appreciation Society
The only good Zod is a dead Zod
NEWGROUNDS COMEDY GOLD, UPDATED DAILY
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Offline Retsof

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Well I've been up since 7:00am yesterday, I'm tired :p I'm on a Space battleship Yamato binge and I'm starting to hallucinate :lol:

Edit - feedback justifies continuance. So if you guys want more just say :yes:
Hm... I'll have to google the Yamato thing.  As for continuing, when you end the "chapter" like that it should be obvious that more is wanted.
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Offline McCall

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Wow, my buddy Dekker is an author!

Hmmm... how about a bit of writer-riffing, if I may be so presumptuous? Feel free to call me a twat for messing with your story if you like, but I just thought playing off each other might be fun.



"Damn it!" snarled Piller, stalking back from his locker. All along the corridor, the ageing freighter's lights flickered as the power grid struggled to level out. "Stupid bastard just couldn't let us go, could he?"

He fell silent as he reached the bridge, still mentally cursing the idiotic Royalist pilot whose collision had caused the ship's jump drive to scram - just before it could wink them out of here. Given time it would come back online, of course, but time was something they did not have. Once the other side got their act together, this bucket would be hulled; whatever happened now, they were all dead men.

Stepping into the stark, metallic room he pulled a pistol from inside his jacket, aiming it at the skipper. Eyes wide in surprise, the captain had no time to react as Piller rushed right up to him and delivered a stunning blow with the pistol grip, knocking the man senseless. Seeing at least one member of the crew starting toward him, Piller spun and aimed straight at his chest. 'No ****ing heroes today, Mikey. Back off.'

'What the bloody hell are you doing?' demanded Mikey, refusing to back down.

Sensing that he was already in danger of losing control, Piller shrugged internally and squeezed the trigger. The pistol bark was incredibly loud, deafening in the enclosed space. Mikey was thrown back, mortally wounded. In the short silence that followed, his fading, gurgling breaths were all that could be heard over the hum of the freighter's electronics.

'Anyone else?' asked Piller, swinging the gun from man to man. Not one of the remaining four offered a reply, their eyes flicking nervously from the barrel to Mikey and back.

Piller slowly backed up until he was touching the unconscious skipper's console. With his free hand, his fingers danced across the touchscreen, plugging in the commands that would make this the freighter's - and his - last journey. Looking back at the cluster of his former colleagues, he sighed. He was only on this operation as backup; he had fully intended to make it home a hero and might just have done so if that stupid pilot had learned how to fly. Gripping the pistol a little tighter, he took one last, deep breath and firmly pressed 'commit'.

As the freighter began to turn back toward the Royalist corvette and accelerate, he saw realisation dawn in the eyes of the bridge crew. Teeth bared, he began to shoot.



I really should proof-read these things better before I post. No idea how many times I've had to edit the odd word since I first posted!
« Last Edit: September 02, 2009, 03:41:12 pm by McCall »
Contrary to rumour, a mojito is actually the manliest drink around, dammit!

 

Offline Colonol Dekker

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:yes: It's all good :D

I use word off-line and just copy it over and amend the dodgy paragraph spacings. But i'm all for the Mccall / Dekker collaboration.
Expect more soon....
Campaigns I've added my distinctiveness to-
- Blue Planet: Battle Captains
-Battle of Neptune
-Between the Ashes 2
-Blue planet: Age of Aquarius
-FOTG?
-Inferno R1
-Ribos: The aftermath / -Retreat from Deneb
-Sol: A History
-TBP EACW teaser
-Earth Brakiri war
-TBP Fortune Hunters (I think?)
-TBP Relic
-Trancsend (Possibly?)
-Uncharted Territory
-Vassagos Dirge
-War Machine
(Others lost to the mists of time and no discernible audit trail)

Your friendly Orestes tactical controller.

Secret bomb God.
That one time I got permabanned and got to read who was being bitxhy about me :p....
GO GO DEKKER RANGERSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
President of the Scooby Doo Model Appreciation Society
The only good Zod is a dead Zod
NEWGROUNDS COMEDY GOLD, UPDATED DAILY
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Offline NGTM-1R

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Well I've been up since 7:00am yesterday, I'm tired :p I'm on a Space battleship Yamato binge and I'm starting to hallucinate :lol:

Remember: Don't drink the spring water.
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Offline Retsof

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Hm... so we have a co-authored story.  Interesting.  As long as it dosen't end up like some crappy RP :ick:.  (Seeing who is doing the writing I highly doubt it.)  Looking forward to more.
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Offline McCall

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What's an RP?
Contrary to rumour, a mojito is actually the manliest drink around, dammit!

 

Offline Colonol Dekker

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    • My old squad sub-domain
Rogue pelican
Campaigns I've added my distinctiveness to-
- Blue Planet: Battle Captains
-Battle of Neptune
-Between the Ashes 2
-Blue planet: Age of Aquarius
-FOTG?
-Inferno R1
-Ribos: The aftermath / -Retreat from Deneb
-Sol: A History
-TBP EACW teaser
-Earth Brakiri war
-TBP Fortune Hunters (I think?)
-TBP Relic
-Trancsend (Possibly?)
-Uncharted Territory
-Vassagos Dirge
-War Machine
(Others lost to the mists of time and no discernible audit trail)

Your friendly Orestes tactical controller.

Secret bomb God.
That one time I got permabanned and got to read who was being bitxhy about me :p....
GO GO DEKKER RANGERSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
President of the Scooby Doo Model Appreciation Society
The only good Zod is a dead Zod
NEWGROUNDS COMEDY GOLD, UPDATED DAILY
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Offline Retsof

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What's an RP?
Role Play, refers to when several fans use thier charicters to make up a "story".  As it progresses it usually degenerates into stupidity and flame wars.
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Offline McCall

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Fair enough. No, it's nothing like that. I just thought it would be kinda fun to write a little story this way. Plus I've met loads of people who talk about writing, but never one who actually does it.

Just waiting on CD to write the next little bit now...
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Offline Colonol Dekker

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Coming soon. IE weekend :p
Campaigns I've added my distinctiveness to-
- Blue Planet: Battle Captains
-Battle of Neptune
-Between the Ashes 2
-Blue planet: Age of Aquarius
-FOTG?
-Inferno R1
-Ribos: The aftermath / -Retreat from Deneb
-Sol: A History
-TBP EACW teaser
-Earth Brakiri war
-TBP Fortune Hunters (I think?)
-TBP Relic
-Trancsend (Possibly?)
-Uncharted Territory
-Vassagos Dirge
-War Machine
(Others lost to the mists of time and no discernible audit trail)

Your friendly Orestes tactical controller.

Secret bomb God.
That one time I got permabanned and got to read who was being bitxhy about me :p....
GO GO DEKKER RANGERSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
President of the Scooby Doo Model Appreciation Society
The only good Zod is a dead Zod
NEWGROUNDS COMEDY GOLD, UPDATED DAILY
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Offline McCall

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Righto. Must do beer session again soon too.
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Offline Colonol Dekker

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:bump:

I heartily encourage myself and MCcall to continue this. I just forgot about it :nervous:
Campaigns I've added my distinctiveness to-
- Blue Planet: Battle Captains
-Battle of Neptune
-Between the Ashes 2
-Blue planet: Age of Aquarius
-FOTG?
-Inferno R1
-Ribos: The aftermath / -Retreat from Deneb
-Sol: A History
-TBP EACW teaser
-Earth Brakiri war
-TBP Fortune Hunters (I think?)
-TBP Relic
-Trancsend (Possibly?)
-Uncharted Territory
-Vassagos Dirge
-War Machine
(Others lost to the mists of time and no discernible audit trail)

Your friendly Orestes tactical controller.

Secret bomb God.
That one time I got permabanned and got to read who was being bitxhy about me :p....
GO GO DEKKER RANGERSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
President of the Scooby Doo Model Appreciation Society
The only good Zod is a dead Zod
NEWGROUNDS COMEDY GOLD, UPDATED DAILY
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