Ok, firstly, I'd like to apologize.
I realize my incredible laziness is making this thing suffer a bit, but I'd like to explain why.
When I wrote the first movie, I was writing it during the summer. As you all know, the summer is a time of doing absolutely nothing, so I had a lot of time on my hands. However, I'm writing this one during school. When I get home, I generally play a game, or try to get my latest model finished. So, when it comes down to writing a story that will be critiqued by pretty much the entire community, you could see why I'm just a little bit under-powered. I've still got 10 missions to write (5 for untouchable, 5 for me) !!!!
Again, I'd like to offer my aplogies to the community for my undying couch-potatoesyndrome.