Overall this was a very immersive and quality campaign, great work!
It was interesting in that the campaigns seemed to have a little bit of alternate history in there. Obviously this was present in the HOL branch, but there was even a little bit of that in the first half of the campaign playing as the PVN/PVE:
It appears that the PVN did somewhat noticeably better against the GTA in this campaign than they did in FS1. In that sense it was more than just "FS1 from the Vasudan perspective". I'm not complaining, just making an observation.
One suggestion I might have is removing the "Impressive, for a Terran" line from this game. It's not a huge deal, but it was kind of odd to get that playing as a Vasudan (in both PVN and HOL branches).