The dialogue is pretty cheesy throughout, there's lines like 'he found his hand clenched into a fist whenever his mind ran through those green fields'. I think it's more a case of translation than bad writing, there's quite a few grammar and spelling and, most notably, context problems throughout, you'll get Galactic News reports like 'The system has discovered a large deposit of gold', but, grammar aside, it doesn't actually say which system, I assume the local one, but it's never really made clear.
It's got potential, but it stops there, at the moment it kind of reminds me of 'Oblivion in Space', but with more wash-repeat and less varied storylines. The 1.1 Patch in development seems to be set on fixing the most notable gameplay problems, so lets hope later ones address the content a bit more heavily.