This is my very first mission I managed to tape together. I definitely found out what a mess it can be to retroactively add events in a mission. But I think it was a great learning experience. Thanks to Raiderwars, Fortune Hunters, Drums of War, Dark Children and the Black Hand I had a lot of nice examples to learn/steal from.
It's not perfectly polished, but because I put a lot of stuff in there after I finished fooling around, I didn't want to waste any more time and energy on what had been great fun.
Anyway, attaching it here for FRED fanatics to giggle at the cluttered events.
It does have some clues on a campaign I do have in mind, which I eventually hope to see come to fruition. But the most important thing I've learned is to first write a script for both the plot and the fredding before jumping into missions.
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