[Jeff Vader]

Necro'd for Great Justice.

I don't know what has happened to griffon67. Or Jake2447. But for those who are interested, the proofread versions of chapters 1-4 are available here.

[Stormkeeper]

I've seen griffon up on MSN. I'll msg him and give him a heads up.

[Metallix]

Yeah ! It's nice to see French work on Freespace 2 !! I'm French, and there is not a lot of french freespace mod...in fact, that's the first I see !! Keep on modding dude !!C'est super 

[ShadowGorrath]

Who made the GTF Vampire btw ?

[pecenipicek]

lovin it so far. up to the mission where you have to kill huge amounts of shiv aircraft while protecting the gtva convoy. a bit silly at times, but reaally pretty.

[MC_Kejml]

Finished mission 1 and 2 -

I SMELL SYNC AND TRANSCEND.

(Boy, at least there's cinema, not school tomorrow... )

[Jake2447]

Necro'd for Great Justice.

I don't know what has happened to griffon67. Or Jake2447. But for those who are interested, the proofread versions of chapters 1-4 are available here.

I sent the proofed tables and ch 5 to griffon back in July
not sure why he never rereleased

Whats a good place to host, and ill put them up

[MC_Kejml]

Hey,  just finished it!

 It was pretty nice to have INF ships at my disposal ( <3 Stentor ) and fight improved shivvies ships. Ancient ships more so, I was wondering if someone's gonna put the AJ Androgynos there.

The story was pretty decent, as I've said, it reminded me of RA's campaigns a lot. I also found the beginning better and more suspense than the ending.

Now, I'm not gonna say RA still got a bit of something more than Ghost revenants, but try some "pros and cons" speech.

Con 1: I found out, after some time, that the missions were  a lot similar, in the "Destroy 40 ships" scheme. It was a bit repetitive and sometimes turned the impression from the story to frustration. 
Example:

Spoiler:

The mission where you find your wingmates disabled and have to endure 2:30 for the ancient capship to arrive

Con 2: As a writer, I'd recommend to replace some words with others. I know you are French, but even I, when I speak english, find the same two words in one phrase a bit ugly.  (Ex: This sentence. Three I's? Dang.)
Con 3: There was this heroes<superheroes<supersuperheroes scheme ... and I mean by it the power of all the new ships, their guns... Also, I could'nt familiarize with any ship, as there was always a lot to choose from. Maybe next time, ship selection may be  thinned a bit.
Con 4, but the smallest of all:   Having some canon systems would sweeten the story a bit


Pro 1: Definitely the story. I got my "play-till-oblivion" syndrome, also known as "one-more-mission-then-bed" disease. The last time I had it was at Sync and Transcend (Sorry, Darius - BP had way much bugs back then )
Pro 2: Some neat, new ideas, such as The Duel,  negative time compression, no-briefing missions, when you are thrown right in the water.
Pro 3: Implemeting new ships! I've never seen SB Kahlan or the fat ship with 12 guns anywhere 
Pro 4: A campaign, that came with the Ancients, which is definitely a plus.

I'd rate this 75%.

[Jake2447]

Alright:
chapter 5 grammar fixed  http://www.megaupload.com/?d=PSSZC3FQ
tables grammar fixed  http://www.megaupload.com/?d=BJILPSGB
hope people use this

maybe i should package all edits into a re-release?

[Alpha1]

Can anybody tell me why FS2 crashes after every of the later missions?! It startet after i have to destroy the STF Icini I guessThere is only a standart error msg like "Freespace has encountered an error and must be closed" (badly translated i guess )

[Alpha1]

The Last missions worked again without crashing ?!?
Very good Mod, i enjoyed playing it! Funny story and cool missions - thx

[Titan]

*SNIP FOR SPACE*

almost all the new ships are from INFR1, though a few are from freelance modders (The alves, which is an INFR1 ship, but the model is called the Ezechiel, and the Vampire, which is nice to see working right)

[DarthWang]

I like the Engrish in this mod. It's giving me the freaks.

LOL @ "Nav Buddies"

[Titan]

ROFLMAO

[DarthWang]

Well I'll say one thing: This campaign is not noobish

(Okay, okay, I'll stop now)

[Jeff Vader]

Well I'll say one thing: This campaign is not noobish

[heavyrussianaccent]You don like it? You dovnload grammar fix.[/heavyrussianaccent]

[NGTM-1R]

[heavyrussianaccent]You don like it? You dovnload grammar fix.[/heavyrussianaccent]

That would be viable only if there was such a fix for chapters earlier than 5 located in this thread. Unless it's been added to the original post and someone forgot to say so, I don't see such a thing.

[Stormkeeper]

[DarthWang]

I do like it. In fact I think it's hilarious.

[Jeff Vader]

[heavyrussianaccent]You don like it? You dovnload grammar fix.[/heavyrussianaccent]

That would be viable only if there was such a fix for chapters earlier than 5 located in this thread. Unless it's been added to the original post and someone forgot to say so, I don't see such a thing.

Necro'd for Great Justice.

I don't know what has happened to griffon67. Or Jake2447. But for those who are interested, the proofread versions of chapters 1-4 are available here.

Sometimes I don't know why bother.

If someone with d4 p0w4h wants to add a link to the first post, help yourself.