Fretting etc sounded good enough, but it's difficult to tell with timing etc, since you really need a drummer or drum machine going in the background to hear what the timing is intended to be, but from what I heard of it, sounded fine
Watch the bends during the solo, it's really tempting, especially when you start on guitar, to try and end every run with a bend, this is not only somewhat clichéd, but you'd be amazed how many people just shunt the string across the fretboard without even considering what note they are aiming for
Other than that, solid enough solo, if a little bluesy compared to the rest of the tune, but that's purely a matter of opinion.
