Grammatically pretty good . . . just some errors and ambiguity here and there.
>Card Types
by the tens in capital ships
Could be changed to "by the hundreds" just for word implication and grandeur . . . effect, that sort of thing.
>Special Cards
These cards can be freely played to modify single unites or !!eaven!!
Just change your "eaven" to "even."
>Game Info.
*5.e
. . . damage recieved from each of these attacks !!stack upon each other!!
Valid, but sounds strange. Maybe change to ( . . . damage recieved from each of these attacks stack.)
*Battle Phase.c
If the power of the armament used is higher from the hull strength of the other unit, the attacked unit is destroyed.
It's okay I suppose, but if I had my way I'd write - If the damage inflicted by the armament is higher than the hull strength of the target, the attacked unit is destroyed.
If the power equals or exceeds half of the HP (rounding up), the unit recieves a damage marker
Just making the grammar even shinier - If the damage inflicted on the target equals or exceeds half of the target's HP (rounding up), the target unit receives a Damage Marker.
*Battle Phase.d
Each unit does damage to its target even if the firepower from the other unit destroys it.
Slightly ambigious from my point of view.
This is my version - if I read your meaning correctly - Each unit does damage to its target even if another unit destroys that same unit.
>Credits Section
GGraphic Design of All Game Contents
A little typo. Simply remove the extra "G" in "GGraphic"
Grammar Cheek of Game Rules and Cards
. . . For Helping with Grammar cheek
Cheek should be changed to "check"
Special Thanks Too
"Too" should be changed to "to."
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Well, I hope this was useful. Sorry about the lack of clarity and I'm sure that there are still some mistakes that I may have missed.
I look forward to playing FCG very soon!