[Woomeister]

Mission 1 of the GTVA side of Chapter 1. It's just missing some final but key things then it's done. Finally we're back in business  
 
 
 
 

[Su-tehp]

Very nice stuff here, but I have to indulge in some nitpicking here. Hang on a sec...

DISCLAIMER: EXAMINING/SEEING/READING THE NITPICKING MODE MAY INDUCE SOME ANNOYANCE OF THE ARROGANT TONE OF THE NITPICKING. IF ARROGANT NITPICKING OFFENDS YOU, PLEASE READ NO FARTHER. IF ARROGANT NITPICKING DOES NOT BOTHER YOU (MUCH), THEN PLEASE PROCEED. SU-TEHP (AND BY EXTENSION, FREDZone) CANNOT BE HELD RESPONISBLE FOR ANY BRUISED EGOS THAT MAY RESULT FROM THIS NITPICKING.

*engaging FS Story Nitpicking mode*

Ahem, according to the original FS2 campaign, the 4th Fleet is located in Vega, not Beta Aquilae. I have extrapolated that it is actually the 5th Fleet that is located in Beta Aquilae, although this piece of information has not been independently confirmed by  . I have made a list of GTVA (Terran and Vasudan) and NTF fleet organization, which can be found on the FREDZone forum here:
 http://pub11.ezboard.com/fjtofrm11.showMessage?topicID=23.topic

Of course, you are not bound to using this list (nor do I have any method of coercing you to use this list   ), but I would not mind in the least if you did.  

Furthermore, the "Welcome to the Independence" phrasing does have some grammatical errors (missing commas, run-on sentence, etc.). Perhaps, a better phrasing would be as follows:

"Pilot, welcome to the GTCa Independence, flagship of the Beta Aquilae fleet."

*disengaging FS Story Nitpicking mode*

I hope my nitpicking didn't offend too many people.  

BTW, that animation of the Warlock carrier, is that just one frame or does it have several frames? ('Cause if it has many frames and has the Warlock move, I can't wait to see it for myself!   )

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[Nico]

Couldn't say for sure, but if it was just a single frame, I guess woomeister would have choosen a better angle  

[Alikchi]

It's a flyby shot, I think

[Woomeister]

 

Originally posted by Su-tehp:
Ahem, according to the original FS2 campaign, the 4th Fleet is located in Vega, not Beta Aquilae.

Things have changed in the last 50 years  

The animation for the Warlock is a flyby

[Jon Handby]

 

Originally posted by Woomeister:
The animation for the Warlock is a flyby

Oh ...... FliP!

Ive been trying to work on one for a while now!
How'd you do it?
If you dont mind me asking

 
Jon Handby

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Incidental Warfare
Cappella went nova, the GTVA stuggles to recover the NTF have broken up into two! And the shivans have a surprise in the bag!

[Woomeister]

I use 3DS Max 4.2 to animate it. make a set of pcx files and convert them into an ani file.

[untouchable]

 

Originally posted by Woomeister:
I use 3DS Max 4.2 to animate it. make a set of pcx files and convert them into an ani file.

Sounds about right  

[Jon Handby]

hmmmmm, darn... Looks like im gona have to try to make a verion of the warlock in imagine.
I can do Ani's, but only the ones that give info like... Ive done a few for Inc Warfare.

Thanks anyhow.
Jon Handby

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Incidental Warfare
Cappella went nova, the GTVA stuggles to recover the NTF have broken up into two! And the shivans have a surprise in the bag!

[untouchable]

 

Originally posted by Woomeister:
Finally we're back in business  
 

And with new help  


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"The Darkness shall  befall us all."
-Commander William Wright
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"G.O.D" of Dark Alliance
The Darkness is Coming

[Alikchi]

Yeah, thanks for the ships  

[Woomeister]

 

Originally posted by untouchable:

Originally posted by Woomeister:
Finally we're back in business    
 

And with new help   [/B]

Someone give him an avatar  

[Fineus]

Who? I'll do it....

[Woomeister]

Untouchable

[Fineus]

Done, note that he now has the longest HTML code for titles out of everyone on the forum!

[untouchable]

 

Originally posted by Thunder:
Done, note that he now has the longest HTML code for titles out of everyone on the forum!

[This message has been edited by untouchable (edited 02-13-2002).]

[Fineus]

Gah, only now we've moved forums and all the titles have gone for a while... oh well.

[Woomeister]

Moderators can set their own in their profiles it seems

[Nico]

Originally posted by Woomeister
Moderators can set their own in their profiles it seems

really? let me test that...

oh, yes, it's true

[Fineus]

Well aren't you kids lucky