Really nice man. The render sequences are uber sweet, top notch quality. Some suggestions on possible improvements are:\
- The ships seem to "fade in" to a scene. For example, when you have the 2 ships with the planet in the background, at the beggning of that scene the ships almost look like they're de-cloaking. They go from invisible (or less visible, its too fast to tell) to visible. Maybe this is intentional or maybe it s a bug. This also happen when you get the fly-by of the Rakshasa. Check at 00:12 and 00:22 to see what I mean.
- This is just a personal preference, but I'de like to see the backgrounds made red-er. I'm not sure if you know what I mean, but think of it this way: Instead of having the black background (space) with the red nebula, you should have a red nebula on a slightly reddish background. I think its gives the scene more ambience. Check EVE Online screenshots to see the desired effect.
- The scenes are a bit sparse as-is. The first scene is the exception, and it really stands out. It may be a work issue or a design issue, but more ships would look better, to give that "fleet" effect. Again, personal preference.
You shouldn't interpret this as me knocking the trailer. I think that its very nicely done, including some great music. These are just my suggestion on how to improve an already good thing...All in all,
