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Title: Icanus Fiction
Post by: Darius on January 23, 2006, 08:46:02 am
I've been intrigued as to how the construction of the Icanus came about, and the possible reasons that convinced the EA government that, despite limited resources, an overstretched economy and a total upheaval of government, the Icanus Project was authorised. I'm drafting up some semi-canonical fiction about how the controversial project went through, but I need some extra details about the universe so that I can get details accurate.

From reading earlier posts, I gathered that the Icanus began construction before the Nemesis, and that the Nemesis was designed to engage Lucifers. Could both concepts be proposed simultaneously, but for some reason construction of the Nemesis be delayed?

Also, how long after the events of FS1's "Good Luck" did the revolution take place?

What is the EA's form of government? Do they have a security council, a senate, congress, parliament etc? What is the hierarchy of command?

Also, I know people from various regions on Earth still refer to themselves as coming from old 'nation' concepts. You have those people who consider themselves Scottish, Tanzanian, etc. Do we have any idea which countries exist, or is it ok to come up with my own regional names?

If information like this spoils the campaign for R2, then that's ok :) I can do a Sol: A History and present one view of how events went.
Title: Re: Icanus Controversy
Post by: Woomeister on January 23, 2006, 09:31:09 am

From reading earlier posts, I gathered that the Icanus began construction before the Nemesis, and that the Nemesis was designed to engage Lucifers. Could both concepts be proposed simultaneously, but for some reason construction of the Nemesis be delayed?

The Punisher cannon was designed first and was originally designed for planetary defense and was before the formation of the EA. (Punisher is the Icanus super beam weapon)
I can't really say any more than that right now. The Nemesis was designed after the proposal of Punisher.

Also, how long after the events of FS1's "Good Luck" did the revolution take place?
Can't say right now, will depend on what ship classes I would want to use in a campaign of it.

What is the EA's form of government? Do they have a security council, a senate, congress, parliament etc? What is the hierarchy of command?
It would be similar to the old GTA, but with more of a military presence, though not a dictatorship.

Also, I know people from various regions on Earth still refer to themselves as coming from old 'nation' concepts. You have those people who consider themselves Scottish, Tanzanian, etc. Do we have any idea which countries exist, or is it ok to come up with my own regional names?
Probably would be what planet they are from such as 'Earthers', 'Martians' etc since Earth is united as one whole and not individual countries.
Title: Part 1: Ubuntu
Post by: Darius on January 24, 2006, 10:57:46 am
Thanks Woomeister. I'll make use of that info soon.

This is the first part of the piece, really just an introduction to the main character (Professor Martin Mandho, the project leader for the design of the Icanus) and his feelings about the ship now that it has been completed.

It's...a bit darker than usual.

Part 1: Ubuntu

There is no irony quite so poignant as when an instrument of horror and destruction becomes the saviour of mankind, reflected Professor Martin Mandho. Floating one thousand kilometres above the surface of Mars, he looked out upon the dream which had taken most of his life to realise. He could not feel elation. He saw not beauty in the silver lines, but death. He could not reassure himself that his original intentions were pure, motivated by both a desire to defend humanity and a fierce, fierce pride of his people. The Earth Alliance, strength through unity. Compassion for fellow humans.

Humanity had almost turned this weapon against fellow humans!

I did not take leadership of this project for selfish reasons, thought Professor Mandho, yet, I cannot escape my conscience. I am a hero to my people. But I am damned at the same time.

Today was the launch of the second-largest artificial structure ever constructed by humanity. She was second only to the cage which bound her.

Professor Mandho had been invited to the hastily-prepared launch ceremony on the observation deck. He declined the invitation, citing ill health. In reality, he did not wish to celebrate the commissioning of the ship. He wished only peace in the solitude of his quarters.

Yes, he was a party to humanity's most astonishing accomplishment. But at what price was this achievement bought? Blood, thought Mandho. Some of it mine, some of it innocent lives. Now that the project had achieved fruition, he wanted nothing more to do with the ship.

"Professor Mandho." Rear Admiral Carey had looked up at him with grey, steel-flecked eyes. The younger man had aged to such an extent in the past few days that age lines now traced their way across his haggard face. "What I am about to reveal to you is classified information. Unauthorised dissemination of this information is punishable by law. Am I clear on this?"

"Yes, Admiral."

"Good." Carey took a deep breath. "Very good. I received a communique from the Security Council this morning. Our defensive line has been unsuccessful in halting the advance of the Gigas-class warship. As of 0335 hours, the Shivan vessel is en route to this system and is expected to enter Sol space within the next few days. I've been informed by GTVA command that they are unable to commit any further assets to the defence of this system." Admiral Carey, one of the most powerful officers in the EA fleet, looked at Professor Mandho with a haunted, defeated expression. Mandho understood. The objectives given to the Ships of the Line were clear: draw the line, give no ground. If they had failed, Admiral Wright could only be asking one thing.

"Admiral, I have already given you my report. The Icanus is not ready for combat operations. The weapons systems have not been tested, we've barely finished our tactical simulations, and she is still crewed by only one fifth of her complement. If you send the ship out there, it's suicide!"

"I've read your report Professor, but, frankly, we've all run out of options. In a few days every man, woman and child in this system will be dead unless we can stop the Shivans from reaching Earth. I'm authorising the launch of the Icanus at 0600 hours, tomorrow. Your ship has become humanity's only remaining hope."

When the dark news had hit the station, there was a storm of activity. Civilians well aware of the tactical significance of their orbiting home immediately booked seats on departure shuttles. The destination wasn't important: Mars, Io, Titan, anywhere else but Earth or the station on which they were based. The last shuttle left with barely 30 percent of the total population having evacuated. Military personnel were stretched thin between keeping the remainder of the station's inhabitants in order and making launch preparations. Professor Mandho, despite his misgivings, had done his part to ensure that the launch was to go as smoothly as possible. With the completion of everything that had to be done, he had retired to his quarters to brood.

Maybe I'm just an old, old man, he reflected. An old man weary of fighting, and who has lost hope. Maybe, maybe if the Icanus managed to save humanity from extinction, his dream would be vindicated. His conscience would be put to rest. His life's work would mean something other than death.

The mighty engines flared up, died, flared up again. Docking tubes detached from the ship with a hiss of escaping air. With a wrenching groan from the hull that was felt rather than heard, the Icanus edged forward. Unlike the launch of the EASD Nemesis, there was no ceremony to this. There were no flights of ships taking escort, no fireworks, no camera crews. There was just the silence of space, and the stillness of an entire race holding its breath in anticipation.

Mandho closed the blinds of his window and walked over to his private liquor cabinet. He opened a bottle of Scotch whiskey which he had been saving for this occasion. He did not see the ship clear the dockyard, nor did he see the 20 kilometre-long behemoth leap forward and melt into a dazzling circle of blue and white light. He did not hear the sudden cries of jubilation that would have come from the observation deck and echoed throughout the station. He heard instead the sobs of a people so tormented by nightmares thought long vanquished, that it was on the verge of breakdown.

He raised his glass to an imaginary audience. "Ladies and gentlemen," he intoned. "I give you the Icanus."
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: Dave2040 on January 24, 2006, 03:05:30 pm
Wow... nice beginning  :yes:
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: mr.WHO on January 27, 2006, 03:43:05 am
Very good writing, I hope there will be a part two.

BTW you said that Punisher was designed for planetary defence, does EA have some beam sentry guns (with firepower of few Mjolnirs?) ? What is the firepower of those? Screenshot?
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: SadisticSid on January 27, 2006, 08:28:19 pm
The EA has something cooler than beam sentries for planetary defence, implementation pending. :D

Oh, and I like the prose, BTW. :yes:
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: mr.WHO on January 28, 2006, 04:00:41 am
Another question: Does Icanus and it's shipyard are orbiting close to Mars (500-800km over surface) or deep space (I mean still orbiting Mars but far away)?
I'm asking because 2-3 km asteroid can do a planet wide genocide, I can't imagine what could to the crash of 30km warship that have anti-few dozens milions deree beams armor  :eek:.

It would be an impresive view of orbiting SY and Icanus (propably it would looks like a moon) but if I would be a Martian I would move out to Earth or Titan (Saturn over whole sky ) :D.
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: Darius on January 28, 2006, 08:53:13 pm
Glad you liked the writing. ;)  Part 2 will be up soon.

For some reason I had an image in my mind of the shipyard in close orbit of Mars. It must be an influence from Homeworld or something...yes, at night, I expect it would be an impressive view. I'm coming up with a feasible reason why it's in orbit of Mars and incorporating it into the next part of the story.

Oh, one more question: where does the name Icanus come from? Is it from the Roman general Afi-Icanus?
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: Woomeister on January 29, 2006, 04:08:51 am
I probably chose the name at random from the big text file of different words I have.
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: Wanderer on January 29, 2006, 04:26:57 am
2 - 3 km asteroid can do planet devastating damage but not only because it has large mass... it also has immense speed, some 10 to 20 km/s or more. Object falling from the orbit, especially from low orbit, has very low 'falling velocity' would first encounter the atmosphere and start heating and slowing down due friction so it would have even lower velocity and mass when it finally impacts to the surface (if it even impacts and just doesnt burn like NASAs shuttle). So it wouldnt do catastropic continent wide damage.
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: Depth_Charge on January 29, 2006, 10:42:33 am
now will the EA join the GTVA after they lost the war, and since the shivans has return again.....and i know i've try playing solar wars...that campaign lost me good....and the the Icanus waxs the hell of the gigas will it goes against the shivans or back against the gtva or i had to wait for the next release and find out??
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: Mefustae on January 29, 2006, 08:52:57 pm
now will the EA join the GTVA after they lost the war, and since the shivans has return again.....and i know i've try playing solar wars...that campaign lost me good....and the the Icanus waxs the hell of the gigas will it goes against the shivans or back against the gtva or i had to wait for the next release and find out??
:wtf:
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: Depth_Charge on January 29, 2006, 10:41:20 pm
never mind...stupid question...
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: aldo_14 on January 30, 2006, 09:59:22 am
I probably chose the name at random from the big text file of different words I have.

http://www.pantheon.org/articles/i/icaunus.html
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: Woomeister on January 30, 2006, 10:06:30 am
Well the name wasn't in my big text file so I don't remember how it was chosen.
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: aldo_14 on January 30, 2006, 10:49:53 am
Well the name wasn't in my big text file so I don't remember how it was chosen.

I chose it; original mesh was made for Reci, 'member?  Same line as the Segomo/Rosmerta ships, etc.
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: Woomeister on January 30, 2006, 10:56:09 am
Ah right, thought it may of been renamed since I got it from your modeldump.
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: GT-Keravnos on January 30, 2006, 11:17:02 am
I probably chose the name at random from the big text file of different words I have.

http://www.pantheon.org/articles/i/icaunus.html

On the other hand, icanus in greek or IKANOΣ means able. Icanus to me seems able enough, especially in the scenes where it shreads luci
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: aldo_14 on January 31, 2006, 07:11:04 am
I probably chose the name at random from the big text file of different words I have.

http://www.pantheon.org/articles/i/icaunus.html

On the other hand, icanus in greek or IKANOΣ means able. Icanus to me seems able enough, especially in the scenes where it shreads luci

Believe me, it's definately the Gaulish/Celtic one.  For one thing, I don't speak Greek.
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: Woomeister on February 01, 2006, 05:45:19 pm
Thought I'd post this in here:
(http://inferno.hard-light.net/Screens/atlantis01.jpg)
Heavily modified mesh from Raas modeldump. 2770 polygons and around 36km long.

I think this will make a great replacement for the old R1 station we had.
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: NeoBasilisk on February 01, 2006, 07:17:58 pm
Whoa, that's huge!  :yes:  :yes:  :yes:
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: Depth_Charge on February 01, 2006, 10:02:15 pm
Ship is too big, if i walk the movie would be over...... :lol:
Title: Part 2: Controversy
Post by: Darius on February 02, 2006, 02:44:23 am
Ok, here it is.

Part 2 is about how Martin Mandho's dream of reuniting humanity under a flagship becomes twisted and warped by the government's desires for military supremacy.

Part 2: Controversy

Fifty years earlier, the Great Hall of Representatives gave audience to a distinguished academic. He was softly-spoken, with a gentle accent that suggested an origin somewhere in East Africa. His address to the General Assembly was brief, but significant.

"Representatives of the Earth Alliance General Assembly, I thank you for your audience and for your charity in allowing me to appear today. I know that in this time of upheaval and disarray there is precious little time available for indulgence. Yet, in these times of change it is crucial that we do not lose sense of who we are, and we must always remember why these terrible events came to happen. I am here to propose a project which will reunite all of humankind in the spirit of ubuntu: the very essence of humanity that binds us."

The lights in the great hall dimmed, and the giant screen behind the speaker's dais lit up in a holographic display. The image of an Orion-class destroyer became visible, a wireframe set against a backdrop of stars. The symbol of the Galactic Terran Alliance was superimposed against the image, inciting murmers from several delegates in the assembly.

"In the years leading up to the Great War, no other ships symbolised Terran military strength to the extent of the destroyer-class warship. Citizens of star systems in which these vessels were based were assured of their safety. These ships of the line were crewed by the finest warriors that humanity could produce. They were a symbol of what all of humanity could achieve if it worked as one.

"The Vasudans came, and, in time, the Shivans. The need for these beacons of hope became more powerful. Legends were born. Mighty deeds accomplished by these ships and its crew were recited in story to every child, so that they are still remembered today. When the Lucifer stranded this system, we lost so many of these ships. However, the stories still remain. We still remember the heroes of the Great War.

"Times have changed. Because of the terrible cataclysm which forced us into introspection, we as a people have grown. We have become quintessentially human. Because of this, I propose that the time is right for us to create our own stories."

The wireframe representation of the Orion was replaced with a new, sleek design. The GTA symbol disappeared to make way for the arms of the Earth Alliance. Those delegates who were previously affecting a mild interest in the proceedings now stared at the screen with interest.

"Members of the assembly, I present the Icanus. My team of researchers have drafted a preliminary design for a new class of vessel that exceeds the specifications of the current destroyer class of vessel by tenfold. Utilising the most advanced armour composition that is available, she will be all but invulnerable to even the strongest Shivan weapons encountered during the Great War. My team expects-"

"Professor Mandho."

The speaker looked up, his address interrupted and his momentum disturbed. Demetri Al'faid was looking at him, his dark features matched by the dark expression on his face. "I'm sorry, Secretary-General. Is...is there a problem?"

"I apologise for the interruption, Professor, but I must have clarification over a few issues before we proceed." General Secretary Al'faid looked down at his desk, and Professor Mandho realised that he must have been taking notes during his speech. "First item. What you are describing, Professor, is essentially a new flagship for the Earth Alliance. Am I correct?"

"Yes, Secretary-General...well, almost. The impact of this ship is intended at more than just on a military level. She was also designed to harness pride and unity in our race, and serve as an icon of Earth military power."

"Which are all the desirable properties of a flagship, Professor. However, we already have a flagship project under construction. Daedra Steiner's Nemesis has recently been approved."

"It...it has?" Professor Mandho was shaken. Doctor Steiner's project was his primary rival, and his main obstacle in gaining government approval. For her project to have been approved was a dire blow to his project.

"If we are going to approve this project, Professor, then I'm afraid you must outline a new role for this Icanus."

"Yes, General Secretary."

"Second item. How do you propose to resource this project? We are already short on resources, and are in a process of extensive rebuilding."

"Ah." Professor Mandho licked his lips nervously. He was not sure of how his next statement would be taken. "As I was about to mention, General, the ship is designed to be invulnerable to all known forms of weapons, and allowing for more advanced weaponry in the future. She will be more powerful as an asset than her equivalent power in destroyers. Therefore, I propose that funding be diverted away from the fleet reconstruction program into this project."

This remark caused several of the delegates to mutter darkly to one another. Demetri Al'faid cleared his throat. "I'm afraid that your proposal is not feasible at this time, Professor Mandho. We require fleet assets to maintain a powerbase in this system, and there are still rogue elements in the outer rim that require neutralisation. Let us not also forget the possibility of a Shivan incursion into this system. Twenty Orions will provide us with a far better projection of force than a single ship."

"I...understand, General Secretary." Mandho bowed his head in resignation.

"Is there anything else before we submit a motion?"

"No, General Secretary."

"Then I hereby submit a motion to approve Professor Mandho's Icanus project. All those in favour of approval?"

The images on the screen changed to a display indicating the affirmative responses from the assembly. Only thirteen percent were in favour of approval.

"Secretary-General." A voice from the general assembly. A tall, blonde-haired man with severe features stood up from his desk, standing at attention. "Professor Armand Eriksson. I beg leave to address the assembly." Al'faid appraised the newcomer for a few moments, and gave a nod of assent. Eriksson continued. "I'd like to contribute a few points to the topic at hand which may assist Professor Mandho in his proposal."

Professor Mandho looked up at his unlikely ally. He had heard of Armand Eriksson's achievements in the field of weapons research. Eriksson was the head of an old GTA project delving into high-powered Shivans weapon technology from highly-classified data gathered during the Great War and what devices could be salvaged from the shattered Lucifer hulk. The most notable achievement had been the construction of the Punisher: a huge platform-based cannon deployed in Earth orbit should the planet ever be threatened. Mandho had had deep personal misgivings about the prospect of a weapon capable of one-shot, 100% casualty-rate planetary bombardment orbiting Earth.

"Professor Mandho's ship concept may seem unfeasible when used in a standard destroyer role, but I see a potential alternative use of the design. If we can amalgamate the Punisher cannon and this new ship, then we may have a new mobile weapons platform. This will substantially increase the versatility of the Punisher cannon, while giving us a powerful fleet asset. The cannon need not merely be a reactionary measure, but will have the potential to be an offensive weapon."

"That is an interesting concept, Professor Eriksson," said the Secretary-General. "It provides an elegant and feasible solution to the first item of contention. However, what of the second? Where are we to find enough resources to build this ship?"

"Current resourcing operations would suggest that there are indeed too few resources to undertaken a project of this magnitude, General Secretary. However, I propose an alternative method to enable the extraction of minerals previously beyond our reach." He keyed in some data into his desk screen, and broadcast the information to other delegates in the assembly hall. "There are currently four privately-owned mining corporations on the surface of Mars that are still active. By implementing advances in resource-extraction, and by combining these corporations into one government-controlled super-corporation, resource mining can be achieved at a much larger scale."

Mandho looked down at the data on his screen, and was horrified. "Professor Eriksson," he said. "What you propose is the complete strip-mining of the planet."

"What I propose, Professor, is the acquisition of badly-needed resources at a time when the Earth Alliance sorely needs them most. Moreso, the choice of Mars is an prudent one, as it is highly centralised and in close proximity to Earth. Security of the project would be easier to enforce than if the project was based in, say, Europa."

"But there are three hundred million people on Mars!"

"Professor Eriksson," said Secretary-General Al'faid, "Your colleague's objections are not unfounded. Has your team conducted any tests to evaluate the extent of which the surface of the planet will be affected by global mining of this scale? I remind you of the terraforming project that is currently under progress."

"Unfortunately, Secretary-General, our study did not find any conclusive evidence on what the effects of the mining will be with regard to the planet's surface. Tectonic activity may increase, but it should not endanger residents currently on the surface. The terraforming process may slow, even halt, but I assure you that it will not be reversed. In any case, I request that the motion be resubmitted." Professor Eriksson turned to Mandho with a sardonic smile. "In the event that Martian residents experience a decrease in living standards...well, it wouldn't be the first time relocation became necessary."

"Relocation?!" cried Mandho in disbelief.

"Peace, Professor Mandho," chided Al'faid. "Professor Eriksson has provided possible solutions to both points of contention, which seem feasible enough to carry out at this time. I will hereby resubmit the motion to approve Professor Mandho's Icanus project. All those in favour of approval?"

The screen at the head of the assembly hall lit up to indicate the assent of those in the assembly. A full ninety percent of delegates approved of Professor Mandho's project.

"It has been decided. Professor Mandho, the Icanus has been approved for construction under the conditions of integrating the Punisher cannon into its design, and basing construction facilities in orbit of Mars. Under these conditions, are you willing to undertake directorship of this project?"

Martin Mandho looked over at the assembly, and at the smiling face of Armand Eriksson. He felt his control over the proceedings slipping through his fingers, and he saw his dream of uniting humanity twisting into something entirely different and sinister. Under these new conditions, the Icanus would be nothing less than a mobile planet-killer.

"Yes, Secretary-General." The only thing he could do now is fight, and try to shift the project back towards the noble ideology that he originally envisioned. No matter what happens, he thought, I will make sure that this ship is constructed for the good of all humanity.

Deep inside himself, he felt the first stirrings of his conscience as it started to begin its ceaseless attack.
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: mr.WHO on February 02, 2006, 05:07:43 am
I'll be damned, it's a masterpiece.

When R2 will be relased you should contact with Blaise Russel, he said that he plan to redo  Sol:A History after R2 relase, with you SaH could be even more deeper.

I think that I don't need to repeat this:  more!
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: Kosh on March 19, 2006, 04:47:39 pm
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When R2 will be relased

IF it is ever released. :p
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: Darius on March 19, 2006, 08:51:41 pm
It'll be released. I've got faith that the team will finish everything sooner or later. :D

While this thread is still active: What is the armament of that huge Icanus cage? I can't imagine the EA government would leave such an asset sitting there, undefended.
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: Woomeister on March 20, 2006, 03:29:16 am
I can't imagine the EA government would leave such an asset sitting there, undefended.
That's what the EA fleets for...
Title: Re: Icanus Fiction
Post by: Darius on March 21, 2006, 02:03:37 am
True...I was thinking that multiple capital ships would be required for sufficient fire coverage, but I realised several wings of fighters and bombers would be able to cover that at far less cost, with one base destroyer.