Hard Light Productions Forums

Off-Topic Discussion => General Discussion => Topic started by: Unknown Target on September 16, 2002, 10:57:17 am

Title: Hehe, I'm baaack!
Post by: Unknown Target on September 16, 2002, 10:57:17 am
Eh, I was bored. This probably won't turn into anything for at least another week or two (BIG school projects: three of them)

Open to a black screen. Begin pulling backwards. Slowly, a form comes into view. Pull back farther, and it turns out the blackness was really a spaceship cockpit, viewed from the outside. We cut to black. White words fade in.

Words: An Unknown Enterprises production.

The words fade out. Cut from black. We open again to an external view of a spaceship, passing through space. Cut to black. Fade in:

Words: In association with Hard Light Productions.

Fade out the words. We cut to the interior of the spaceship. A radar screen is encompassing almost all of our view. A blip comes up. Then once again, closer to the center of the screen. Voices can be heard.

Voice 1: (Whispering) What is it?

Voice 2: (Also Whispering) I don't know...

Voice 1: Let's check it out.

Cut to black. Fade in:

Words: Based on the forums by Setekh and Thunder.

Fade words out. Cut back to the exterior of the spaceship. It settles over a very beaten up and indistinct object, obviously another spacecraft. The rear hatch of the main starship opens, and a small figure emerges, teathered to something inside. He latches onto the smaller craft, and tows it inside. Cut to black. Fade in:

Words: Directed by Unknown Target.

Fade the words out. Cut back to the interior of the spaceship. The giant door seals shut. The figure undresses from his suit, and heads to the now-docked ship. He walks up to what appears to be a hatch. He tugs on it, but it seems to be stuck. Tugging harder, it comes open, creaking earily with decay. He begins to walk inside. We cut to the far wall, and can see his shadow cast onto it as it enters the craft. Suddenly, it reels back in surprise. We can hear a horrible, alien-like cry, then a more familiar human scream of pain. Blood splatters against our wall. A shadow creaps out of the door. Fade to black. Fade in:

Words: The HLP Movie: Revenge.

Play action tribal-type music, then cut to black suddenly. Show preview stuff, etc, etc.
Title: Hehe, I'm baaack!
Post by: Redfang on September 16, 2002, 11:03:04 am
w00t! :eek2::yes:
Title: Hehe, I'm baaack!
Post by: Nico on September 16, 2002, 11:08:42 am
ohoh! second round, ready? FIGHT!
Title: Hehe, I'm baaack!
Post by: Unknown Target on September 16, 2002, 01:45:00 pm
This was just a teaser. Does anyone have an idea that I could use (in part, I hate writing about someone else's idea totally, but I like suggestions)? I'm trying to figure it out. Serious entries only, please.
Title: Hehe, I'm baaack!
Post by: an0n on September 16, 2002, 01:50:04 pm
*laughs evily as both a comment upon the prospect of a second...err.....script (?) and as an idea for the second script (?)*

*goes to grow some flying monkeys*
Title: Hehe, I'm baaack!
Post by: Alikchi on September 16, 2002, 01:51:48 pm
Yes, I think that an0n and his flying monkeys should be the nemesis.

This time based from the Nodewars forum, DNA ships escape into Hard Light Art and wreak havoc
Title: Hehe, I'm baaack!
Post by: an0n on September 16, 2002, 01:55:53 pm
See, everybody loves my antics.

*goes to set fire to the LurCannons*
Title: Hehe, I'm baaack!
Post by: Stunaep on September 16, 2002, 01:57:40 pm
A sequel!!! Cool!!!

I just hope I get an appearance this time.
Title: Hehe, I'm baaack!
Post by: an0n on September 16, 2002, 02:01:12 pm
*demands unfettered access to a major story-arc*
Title: Hehe, I'm baaack!
Post by: Alikchi on September 16, 2002, 02:06:32 pm
Listen! If you destroy this story arc, you sign the death warrant of our race!
Title: Hehe, I'm baaack!
Post by: Unknown Target on September 16, 2002, 02:08:44 pm
I just hope I get a title :D.
Maybe...maybe I'll type this. DNA...hmmmm...any more ideas?
Title: Hehe, I'm baaack!
Post by: an0n on September 16, 2002, 02:12:58 pm
*pins Alikchi to the floor*
*lets a Podâ„¢ clone Alikchi*
*open a small exotic jar*
*laughs maniacally as a Goa'uld symbiote shoots from the jar and enters Ali's neck*
*waits for his eyes to flash*
*injects him with nano-probes*
*gives him a Cylon-StormTrooper outfit and a red light-sabre*
*send him off out into the world*
Title: Re: Hehe, I'm baaack!
Post by: Shrike on September 16, 2002, 02:18:51 pm
Quote
Originally posted by Unkown Target
Words: Based on the forums by Setekh and Thunder.
*coughs*

Sad... you don't even know who's been running the forums since day one.
Title: Hehe, I'm baaack!
Post by: Unknown Target on September 16, 2002, 02:31:24 pm
I've been gone for awhile you know. Besides, weren't they the ones that started it?
Also, Shrike, you still an admin? Where's your picture?
Title: Hehe, I'm baaack!
Post by: Corsair on September 16, 2002, 03:32:21 pm
hmmmm Unkown how about "Poor Setekh"? A spoof........;):drevil:


And where might I get the part that came before this sequel?
Title: Hehe, I'm baaack!
Post by: Galemp on September 16, 2002, 03:35:44 pm
Oooh... maybe I'll be in this one. :devil:
Title: Hehe, I'm baaack!
Post by: Nico on September 16, 2002, 04:16:31 pm
Quote
Originally posted by Unkown Target
I've been gone for awhile you know. Besides, weren't they the ones that started it?
Also, Shrike, you still an admin? Where's your picture?


meh, in the last part, I seemed weird ( couldn't be killed ), turn me into a badass evil dude :D
Title: Hehe, I'm baaack!
Post by: Shrike on September 16, 2002, 04:59:39 pm
Quote
Originally posted by Unkown Target
I've been gone for awhile you know. Besides, weren't they the ones that started it?
Also, Shrike, you still an admin? Where's your picture?
I took it off cause I was bored with it.
Title: Hehe, I'm baaack!
Post by: Razor on September 16, 2002, 05:22:37 pm
Hey I want a part in this one too! By the way UT, it's nice that you are still working on this story or whatever it is.
:yes:
Title: Hehe, I'm baaack!
Post by: Unknown Target on September 16, 2002, 05:25:53 pm
All I have so far is:

wEvil

DNA.

Venom's super-phsycho-ness should probably be explained.

This could be a problem. Oh, and for all of you new guys, or ppl who missed out on the original, the compiled version can be downloaded here:


http://unkown_target.tripod.com/HLPBB_Movie.doc

EDIT: Copy/paste into your address bar.
Title: Hehe, I'm baaack!
Post by: Gortef on September 17, 2002, 05:16:47 am
I could have some mental problems from the last war... :D :shaking:


as for the whole plot, ummm....  as hard as I think, nothing really comes to my mind right now... sorry :(
Title: Hehe, I'm baaack!
Post by: Unknown Target on September 17, 2002, 07:08:09 pm
*Thunks head*

Well, what would you guys like to see?
Title: Hehe, I'm baaack!
Post by: Galemp on September 17, 2002, 08:02:55 pm
You could take a cue from Freespace-- old enemies ally to face a common threat? The VolitionWatch forums, perhaps?