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Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: Turnsky on February 14, 2003, 03:51:17 am

bah..

(http://users.bigpond.com/turnsky/images/mph1422003.png)

Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: Petrarch of the VBB on February 14, 2003, 03:53:29 am

I don't really understand it, but the drawing is of high calibre.

Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: Turnsky on February 14, 2003, 03:54:48 am

thanks, just read the punchline thingy...

luke's my persona (the fox)

Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: Shrike on February 14, 2003, 03:58:01 am

Hmmm..... graphically good, but falls flat.

Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: Turnsky on February 14, 2003, 04:02:01 am

script writer i aint'

Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: Ulundel on February 14, 2003, 04:29:52 am

Uuuuh...amen you aren't a script writer.

But the drawings are really good.

Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: Blue Lion on February 14, 2003, 04:46:43 am

Get a witty writer

*cough cough*

Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: Turnsky on February 14, 2003, 05:00:55 am

let's see what ya got.. :D

Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: Blue Lion on February 14, 2003, 06:25:14 am

Don't complain, I haven't slept in two days, so this is the best you get out of me right now

(http://www.angelsgraveyard.com/images/take1.jpg)

and

(http://www.angelsgraveyard.com/images/take2.jpg)

Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: Petrarch of the VBB on February 14, 2003, 06:32:14 am

Meh.

Although I can't do any better.

Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: Barbarian on February 14, 2003, 02:53:16 pm

:lol:-  i must Be Easly Amused - i though the Second Lot where Quite Funny :) :p

Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: Stryke 9 on February 14, 2003, 03:04:02 pm

Hmm. Maybe if I was stoned.


Aah, that's better. Yeah, it's funny now.


You know, if you really look at the pixels, it's like there's a whole ****in' city in there. You gotta get up close, but yeah...

Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: an0n on February 14, 2003, 03:44:08 pm

Never let it be said that I don't always cave in to peer pressure.

(http://www.fattonys.com/images/take1an0n.jpg)
(http://www.fattonys.com/images/take1an0n2.jpg)

The blank version. (http://www.fattonys.com/images/take1blank.jpg)

Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: Barbarian on February 14, 2003, 03:50:55 pm

:lol: :lol: :lol:

* Gasps for Air *

:lol: :lol: :lol:

that be Very Funny

Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: Stunaep on February 14, 2003, 03:54:17 pm

oh, he hasn't even started.

Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: Turnsky on February 14, 2003, 04:50:05 pm

right, i've got an idea, i'll put my wit to the whetstone, and refine it..

and when i post up my attempts, i'll put a link to a blank one where those of whom with a sharp wit can have a go.. how's that..

i'm also working on drawing shivans ..

Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: Knight Templar on February 14, 2003, 05:58:10 pm

where's teh funny?

oh wait, an0n provides. God bless. :D

Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: Turnsky on February 14, 2003, 06:51:51 pm

bah, okay it goes like this:

someone give me a script, i draw, ink etc, and i post..


the characters are mine and i might do a rendition or two of some of the admins and place them as either active characters or sittin' in the background..

in other words, someone provides the funny words, i provide the pictures got it?

oh, and keep them as clean as possible..

Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: Anaz on February 14, 2003, 08:10:09 pm

:lol:

the 2nd and 3rd batch were funny :D

Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: Stryke 9 on February 14, 2003, 08:22:43 pm

Wouldn't the mother of an anthropomorphic, apparently ceiling-crawling fox be expected to be hairy?

Yeah, I'm a killjoy. It's pretty damn good.


Oh, and Turnsky- probably the oddest bit was the "he has a sword, you know". I have a small, rather short-ranged arsenal, all my friends and enemies know it, and it doesn't change much as far as pranks.;)

Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: Blue Lion on February 14, 2003, 09:57:47 pm

It's hard to write a good story when the punchline is a guy falling from the sky

Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: Stryke 9 on February 14, 2003, 10:18:45 pm

Something about a skydiving-on-a-budget scam?

Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: Blue Lion on February 14, 2003, 10:23:06 pm

In a bar? that's a good scam

Title: My attempt at humor mk II
Post by: Turnsky on February 14, 2003, 10:32:19 pm

ok  how about i add a visual cue to it?  in between the 3rd and 4th panels and see if that clears things up.. i'll rework the "punchline" while i'm at it..

thanks for the constructive critisism any way..