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Off-Topic Discussion => Arts & Talents => Topic started by: SlipStream on March 09, 2003, 06:46:52 am

Title: I finally get to show off some work
Post by: SlipStream on March 09, 2003, 06:46:52 am

I hope you guys like what I have done. I am no renderer. But I am learning to make webdesignes.

I want to show you what I have done with part of my website. Here is my ScreenShaot page. my latest one which you will se is much more descriptive than the first.

I just need to find a backround for my webpage section and one that is nto too detailed so it wont take long for the webpage to load with the background on.

When you get to my site, leave the pop up that you get, it is the only one that shows up and will not bother you while you are on my website.
Better than having adds   :D :D


Well here is my work thus fare.
http://www.angelfire.com/mech/slipstream0/copy_of_index.html (http://www.angelfire.com/mech/slipstream0/copy_of_index.html)



Because Angel fire has a lot of traffic going in and out you might have to click on the link more than once.

I even made a link to my E-mail so that you can tell me what you thought of  it.  I will have a guest book set up there and several other stuff.

My E-Mail address is here as well.

My E-Mail ([email protected])

Title: I finally get to show off some work
Post by: Ashrak on March 09, 2003, 06:55:44 am

well one of the easyest websites iv seen so far ;)

Title: I finally get to show off some work
Post by: Riven on March 09, 2003, 07:23:17 am

check yor pages mate. There's quite a lot of typos. Also USE TABLES. Your text has huge gaps where your pictures are, just put the pics and text in a table. The font is a bad choice, it doesnt display great (although i am often guilty of this so i'll let you off). Also 1 of your pics doesnt display. Could do with a nav bar of some sort to avoid having to hit back a lot. The hit counter increases everytime i go back to that page which is kinda silly. Use scripthost.com for a good one.

Other than that, not bad. Sorry its a lot of critism but the more i give hopefully the better your site will become

Title: I finally get to show off some work
Post by: Turnsky on March 09, 2003, 04:55:55 pm

We have another HW fan here, cool. Me wants HW2

Title: I finally get to show off some work
Post by: SlipStream on March 10, 2003, 01:23:26 am

Riven, tell me more. I need your info znd anyone else that can help me. The more I am told the more i can do.

Thanks.

Title: I finally get to show off some work
Post by: Riven on March 10, 2003, 10:20:22 am

well make the changes i've said so far then i'll see what i think. What are u using to make it anyway?

Title: I finally get to show off some work
Post by: TheVirtu on March 10, 2003, 09:24:49 pm

Something tells me that that was made in that Angelfire Site Builder...get off that thing quick...its like eating a bad egg. Use Frontpage Express.

Title: I finally get to show off some work
Post by: SlipStream on March 11, 2003, 04:45:43 am

Eating a bad egg ?

Title: I finally get to show off some work
Post by: SKYNET-011 on March 11, 2003, 07:00:53 am

Angelfire sucks almost as bad as geocities.

(Oh, and slipstream, I don't think you can use HTML code in your sig^)

Title: I finally get to show off some work
Post by: Sandwich on March 11, 2003, 07:36:13 am

Well, it's a start. :) I highly suggest doing the following for the next week or so, dependng on how often you surf the web:

- Every time you run across a website that you find visually pleasing, bookmark it and/or take a screenshot. Think about and write down exactly what about that site's design you liked - colors, layout, overall theme?
- Do the same with websites you specifically don't like visually - too much crap in one area, too many flashing things, etc.
- Make sure to sum up points for both sides, pros and cons, in relatively general terms. Don't write "The purple background clashed with the light yellow and green text". Instead, write "Color clash between page elements"... that kind of thing.
- Go over all your points once in a while. Once you see a number of points being repeated, you've written down enough. Make note of those repeated points, and do or don't do them. :)

Title: I finally get to show off some work
Post by: Nuclear1 on March 11, 2003, 02:43:29 pm

Hmmm..... HW2.... :D

Title: I finally get to show off some work
Post by: Sandwich on March 11, 2003, 04:58:49 pm

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Originally posted by nuclear1
Hmmm..... HW2.... :D

Oh yeah, thanks for reminding me... ;)

Those screenshots are really cool! I hadn't really seen any HW2 screenies before that, but still. Now I want to get that game. When's it supposed to come out?

Title: I finally get to show off some work
Post by: Xelion on March 11, 2003, 10:22:59 pm

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Posted by Askrak
well one of the easyest websites iv seen so far :wink:

Agreed :D

Usefull site on WebDesign Code (http://www.w3schools.com)