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Title: trailer Oleon War
Post by: Nico on April 15, 2003, 06:06:02 am
(http://www.3dap.com/hlp/hosted/ott/renders/OWT02tb.jpg) (http://www.3dactionplanet.com/hlp/hosted/ott/renders/owtrailer1.avi)

hop! it's done, finally ( tho the scenes themselves are over half a year old already :doubt: ).
Title: trailer Oleon War
Post by: Stunaep on April 15, 2003, 06:15:48 am
mmm.... cel shading....

*ejaculates*

anyhow, although some of the character scenes are kinda... slow in movement, I really liked that. especially the part you have screencaped in the link
Title: trailer Oleon War
Post by: wEvil on April 15, 2003, 06:45:41 am
Excellent!

You maybe need to tweak the timing and scene transitions a little and perhaps dub some voice in over the top but its very impressive.

If you're not happy with the voice considering cutting the narrative scenes out entirely - they arent really necessary for a trailer format, which is what you appear to be working to.

Also tweak the credits at the end and it'll be good showreel material.
Title: trailer Oleon War
Post by: Nico on April 15, 2003, 06:51:50 am
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Originally posted by wEvil
Excellent!

You maybe need to tweak the timing and scene transitions a little and perhaps dub some voice in over the top but its very impressive.

If you're not happy with the voice considering cutting the narrative scenes out entirely - they arent really necessary for a trailer format, which is what you appear to be working to.

Also tweak the credits at the end and it'll be good showreel material.


there were voices, but I cut them indeed ( quality sucked horribly, I just don't have the right gear for that ).
Anyway, as my 3d artist career is about to go down the sewer, I'll keep that as it is, I'm just doing it for fun :)
the credits at the end, well, there's not much to put in :lol:
Title: trailer Oleon War
Post by: Stryke 9 on April 15, 2003, 12:39:29 pm
The Olestra wars were the bloodiest in history. With the power of not one, but several fantastic non-fat substitutes at its fingertips, humanity had the power to wreak low-caloric destruction on a scale unprecedented in all of time. But did it have the power to take responsibility for such a burden?

No.
Title: trailer Oleon War
Post by: Nico on April 15, 2003, 01:28:56 pm
riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight.
Title: trailer Oleon War
Post by: karajorma on April 15, 2003, 01:47:39 pm
Nice work there. Good choice of music. What is it originally from?
Title: trailer Oleon War
Post by: Nico on April 15, 2003, 05:50:18 pm
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Originally posted by karajorma
Nice work there. Good choice of music. What is it originally from?


a cd  guess :p
Title: trailer Oleon War
Post by: karajorma on April 15, 2003, 06:05:40 pm
Actually I know it's from Ever After. I just don`t know what that is :D
Title: trailer Oleon War
Post by: mikhael on April 15, 2003, 10:11:20 pm
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Originally posted by Stryke 9
The Olestra wars were the bloodiest in history. With the power of not one, but several fantastic non-fat substitutes at its fingertips, humanity had the power to wreak low-caloric destruction on a scale unprecedented in all of time. But did it have the power to take responsibility for such a burden?

No.


BEST. STRYKE. POST. EVAR.
Title: trailer Oleon War
Post by: Ace on April 17, 2003, 12:48:12 am
Nice ;)