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Off-Topic Discussion => Arts & Talents => Topic started by: Tiara on April 20, 2003, 02:10:16 pm
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Been fiddling around a bit... This is my first go at it...
Let us DANCE! (http://www.nodewar.com/calling.mp3)
Its not 100% finished though :p
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Not my style.....
I did last about 10 seconds though before screaming in pain, so good job! :yes: :D
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nice singing :D pruddy (i fyour singing nice voice!!!)
bass should be deeper
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Originally posted by Blue Lion
Not my style.....
I did last about 10 seconds though before screaming in pain, so good job! :yes: :D
I can make slow music as well, more soothing and stuff. Ala that scottisch stuff... whatsitcalled?
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Bagpipes? :p
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Originally posted by Ashrak
nice singing :D pruddy (i fyour singing nice voice!!!)
Nah, not me singing... :p
no not bagpipes...It was something of Celtic Mist or whatever..
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How did you make it? Dance Ejay?
The vocals are good, which seems to be the basis for any popular dance record these days, but I have some ideas for improvement - first add a better drum loop. Or a drum loop for a start. The current one is too slow and lacks any real rythme.
Keep the trancy bit that starts at 19 seconds a bit longer - this should be the main tune of the song.
The base line at the start should be kept through out the song, it changes three times.
The crashes you have (ie where a snare fades up at a point of change in the song) should be louder/longer.
Also it lacks structure. That basic parts of the song fade in and out and change to often. Here is a simpe order used in a lot of popular dance tracks:
- Basic elements of song - this allows DJ's to mix it in easily.
- Queit with only main melody
- Introduce vocals
- Build up song again, with verse, corus,
- Breakdown, just main melody
- reintroduce vocals
- Bring it all back in again, with another element to the song, corus
- Short breakdown
- Keychange, corus
- Vocals fade out
- Whole song fades out, allowing easy mixing into next record.
It works, listen to 'Set you free' by N Trance (the 2001 mix), your song sounds a bit like it. :yes:
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Thx for the tips. :)
This was just a +/- 15 minutes fiddling project to test it out though.
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Originally posted by Ashrak
bass should be deeper
What did i tell you on IRC?? :p
If u want good bass listen to Chemical brothers - Under the influence ... its VERY bassy (with good speakers :D)
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Sounds good in a retro dance kinda way, like some of the euro stuff circa 1996, Culture Beat, Cappella, Corona etc. I do agree it needs a stronger hook though. After it finished I couldn;t have hummed it. Listen to Corona's "Rhythm of the Night" as an example of a track in the same style with a really solid hook (I hate that song but it is a good example). As for the rhythm track, its a bit..well..I hate to say wishy-washy but the rhythm track certainly doesnt hit you in the gut. The vocals and arpeggios are great though. For a first effort its very promising.
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Originally posted by Sheepy
What did i tell you on IRC?? :p
If u want good bass listen to Chemical brothers - Under the influence ... its VERY bassy (with good speakers :D)
lol, one of my friends is very reluctant to let me use her 10,000$ stereo system because of that track :lol: (nearly shook the house from it's foundations... damn, those speakers are nice... ;7 )
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Originally posted by Sheepy
What did i tell you on IRC?? :p
If u want good bass listen to Chemical brothers - Under the influence ... its VERY bassy (with good speakers :D)
heh, seen (or rather heard) i guy in a lime green mazda hatch ('82 121 i think) pumping out DU HAST so loud with the bass so deep i could swear i heard the car's panels rattle :p (true story)
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my PC seakers, make the windows shake in the lounge ....... and thats 2 floors below :wtf:
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Subwoofers and added bass boxes pwn :D
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indeed :D *grins evily* ,also stereo speakers pwn more so :D
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Not bad Tiara, not bad at all, although the tune reminds me of them old C64 & Amiga demo's, but very nicely done :)
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Setting Sun, also by the Chemical Brothers, will give any decent speaker system a run for their money. Skip forward to 27 seconds and hold on to something :D
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hmmm which CD is it on?
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No matter found it - tis on dig your own hole, i dont think its as good as under the influence, its just constant and just gets deeper its like .... sweeeeeeeeeeeeet :D
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meh, got me a pair of old JVC stereo speakers here... attemped to use them while playing halo..... lets just say woah
both of them have a intergrated 12' woofer, and provides more than enough sound... i could probably shatter the windows if i could turn it up all the way.... currently the max sound WE can handle(and it's plenty loud) is about 3/10ths the way across the volume bar..
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I laugh at your JVC ... mission owns you :D
(http://www.mission.co.uk/product/volare/loudspeaker_v63_v2.jpg)
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i wish i could hook my pc up to the big stereo... play avp2 or fs2:drevil:
but they're in two different rooms
oh yeah sheepy mine's older than i am.. and my grandfather's yahmha surround system OWNZ
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:nervous:scary people here:nervous:
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ph3AR OuR l33+ $OUnd eKW1PMeN+! :p
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Oh.