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Off-Topic Discussion => Arts & Talents => Topic started by: Turnsky on June 11, 2003, 01:45:43 am
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Okay since the previous foxfire thread is getting a little large (thanks mostly to yours truly:D ) i kinda figured that'd be a good idea to put the old thread to rest and start a new one for a new chapter in the story (the first four pages were a prologue)..
(wouldn't mind this stickified and the other thread de-stickified)
Here we go..(56k'rs be dammed)
(http://users.bigpond.net.au/turnsky/comic/foxfirechpt1.jpg)
(http://users.bigpond.net.au/turnsky/comic/ffc-c1p1.jpg)
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Now, let's start this off right, with a post by me...:D
Hmm. You're getting a lot better as you go along. Looks pretty cool now, at the beginning it was kinda cartoonish- which made me wonder how you were gonna work in all the "dark" bits you obviously have planned without looking odd.
Anyway, he seems awfully worked up over such a little thing. Hell, I'm abducted by evil scientists, I'm gonna be pretty happy if I don't wake up with skinless, evil snakes that try to bite me for arms, or all my organs removed and put somewhere they don't belong.
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hey i draw, not write...;)
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Stryke's right, your style is definitely developing. Me likes. :):yes: (Nice rain, btw.)
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Ok you fixed the "glow problem" on the cover page, good good.
And otherwise it looks exellent again :nod:
(yep the rain is nice)
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[color=66ff00]Sticky this thread, unsticky old one?
BTW tres good.
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Hmmmm... He seems to catch on very quick that he has been changed into a furry and acts as if it's his worst nightmare come true. He got furry-phobia? :p
If I were him and saw a furry paw with claws instead of a hand I would just be like :wtf: for a couple minutes.
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yeah, I think he grasps the situation way too quickly...
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Originally posted by Cannikin
Hmmmm... He seems to catch on very quick that he has been changed into a furry and acts as if it's his worst nightmare come true. He got furry-phobia? :p
If I were him and saw a furry paw with claws instead of a hand I would just be like :wtf: for a couple minutes.
depends on how many bad SF movies you've seen. if i'd wake up with funny skin, i'dcheck a mirror, if noe were availavble and i was in a strange, unknown place, i'd just go "o crap, why does this happen to me?"
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Originally posted by Venom
yeah, I think he grasps the situation way too quickly...
[color=66ff00]Perhaps he's already went through this in a dream or it's happened to him before???
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I think then it would be more a "Oh, crap. Not again!" sorta thing.
Which, you'd have to admit, would be a fantastic line for there.:D
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Originally posted by Maeglamor
[color=66ff00]Sticky this thread, unsticky old one?
BTW tres good.
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yep
As for the rain, i used a combination of glitterato, difference clouds, noise with motion blur and a massive tweaking of levels to get it to look right..(on multiple layers of course.)
and thanks guys..
and stryke9, if you want to pick holes, please direct them to Blue lion;) he writes these things...
EDIT: Thanks Maeg..
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What do you want? A 6 page panel of him staring at his hands?
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hell strkye9, even you could do that:p
*copy - paste*
*copy - paste**copy - paste**copy - paste**copy - paste**copy - paste**copy - paste**copy - paste**copy - paste**copy - paste**copy - paste**copy - paste*
:ha:
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[sets Turnsky on fire]
Actually, I was thinking more the mirror thing. Something where it takes him a bit, and it doesn't look like he's overreacting based on a glance at his fingers. But whatever, it's fine.
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*rolls across ground*
*gets up and dusts himself off*
thank god i fireproofed my shirt..
well stryke9, he can see his canine-like nose from his POV, one should think he'd assume what he'd look like;)
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Eh, I'll buy that.
[pulls out the electric razor]
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also another thing...
according to him, it's only the next day..
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Originally posted by J.F.K.
Stryke's right, your style is definitely developing. Me likes. :):yes: (Nice rain, btw.)
i can still do it old-style;)
http://www.deviantart.com/view/2147008
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Hmm...
That is a truly disturbing site. I have to go wash my eyeballs now, I was stupid and clicked a link.
Er, uh, yeah, that's something like your old stuff.
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it's not exactly what the url says it's like.. it's more or less an indy art site...my gallery's link is in the sig...
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Dude, whatever it was, I'm not really interested, but images of cartoon bestiality are NOT what I want in my head. I didn't even look at the URL until afterwards.
But anyway...
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what?... where...:ick
EDIT: *Looks Through anthro Gallery*
:shaking: :ick *stomach churns*
be glad to know, whilst i'm quite capable of drawing things like that(yiff,Hentai, furry porn), i won't as a matter of principle..
it's just wrong... and sick..
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Good to hear. Ya didn't seem the perv type, but all these places you link to made me wonder...
Well, it's the internet. What can ya say...
What's yiff?
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another word for furry porn... that's all...
yes... the internet's bigger than us all,
and when i said i was capable of such things, i can draw nudes pretty well (usually happens when i'm trying out new character dynamics) take mary from foxfire for example... she was the first real female character i actually created..(that looked 'right') and i have many a page in one of my sketchbooks filled with just character concepts... mostly without clothing, but usually with clothes just sketched over the top..
i've moved on, needless to say...
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:doubt:
people who plays all shocked and stuff.
rhalala...
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what are you on about..?:wtf:
at least be a little clearer in your gripeing...
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if I wasn't clear enough, I couldn't do any better if I tried :doubt:
bah, I don't care, after all :p
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whatever...
i wasn't at all suprised at it's presence.. just the sheer mass of it all...:doubt:
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Originally posted by Turnsky
whatever...
i wasn't at all suprised at it's presence.. just the sheer mass of it all...:doubt:
uhm, where is it?
i just wanted to know what all you guys were talking about, but i can't find a thing.
i am kinda glad about that, but i'd like to know what you are bashing.
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Originally posted by kasperl
uhm, i am kinda glad about that, but i'd like to know what you are bashing.
lol, all the same :p
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Just because I'm exposed to tentacle-rape hentai, bukkake shots, and scat porn every day doesn't mean it's not repulsive, dude.
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scat porn? huh!
how can you be exposed to that every day? :p
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Originally posted by kasperl
uhm, where is it?
i just wanted to know what all you guys were talking about, but i can't find a thing.
i am kinda glad about that, but i'd like to know what you are bashing.
are you sure you want to look...
well i guess it's like the matrix..
"cannot be told what it is, they must see it for themselves":p
i would show you but i see the creepy green glow of a certain blunt instrument..
and besides.. seek and ye shall find
look up yiff,hentai,furry porn in google i guess..
and have a good look through deviantart's anthro gallery
just stick to the gallery that i have and you should be fine(in siggy)
now if you'll excuse me, i'll have to wash my brain out with some mindless voilence..
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Foxfire may be delayed(again) due to BL's pc kharking it
it's cactus it tell you..:p
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Originally posted by Turnsky
Foxfire may be delayed(again) due to BL's pc kharking it
it's cactus it tell you..:p
:lol: Cactus! Lol! I haven't heard anyone say that word since forever. Makes me laugh just thinking about it. :D
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yeah, sorry 'bout the delay, i was supposed to have a foxfire done this week for wednesday, but alas, no script, no foxfire..
'tis a shame..:sigh:
if this keeps up i'll have to go to baltimore myself and loom menacingly over him until he gets it done:p
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hookay, new script, page 2 is complete already(sketch wise) now gonna ink it and p'shop it and with any luck i might get page 3 done tomorrow and you guys might be in for a double update..;)
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Originally posted by Turnsky
with any luck i might get page 3 done tomorrow and you guys might be in for a double update..;)
;7:yes:
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or not, photoshop crashed on me at 2 am, i lost all the coloring work at that point, i've done it all again, i'll see what i can do though...
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Originally posted by Turnsky
or not, photoshop crashed on me at 2 am, i lost all the coloring work at that point...
Ah man, that is bad, that is very very bad.
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oh well, wednesday's is done ahead of schedule anywho, but i was hoping to get a good start on page 3 already..\
oh well..
UPDATE: Page two done, now sketching page 3
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Turnsky, 2 things ;)
1) Do you sketch each frame in-frame, or as a whole seperate picture, then re-size it.
2) Just from a storyteller's POV: the way the guy is acting (Oh No, then screams out), it's as if he had prior knowledge that this might happen to him. If it was a total surprise to you, you'd probably go "Oh My God", then scream out: "What did you do to me?!"
Of course, if that has something to do with your storyline, then NM ;)
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1) separate sketch, then re-size, i'm currently working on drawing each frame in-frame tho..
2)I have a writer you know.. talk to him:p
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meh, a whole day earlier than i usually would've posted..
i'll stick it on the first post as well;)
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Originally posted by Turnsky
or not, photoshop crashed on me at 2 am, i lost all the coloring work at that point,
Gotta hate it when it does that heh?
I've lost all I have done for page04. Well, the whole PC crashed in the process, actually :p
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gotta love photoshop...:p
oh yeah, a little note on page two, my technique is improving so for page 3 THERE WILL BE BACKGROUNDS that have been inked..
Instead of the crappy airbrushing i've been using lately..:p
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Awesome... :yes:
I like your "FZZZZZT", btw. :D
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amazing what you can do with photoshop:thepimp:
oh, jfk, did you happen to mention this to steak?;)
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I did. :) He's going to pay a visit when holidays begin (about two weeks time). :nod:
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*listens to steak's head explode in two weeks time:p*
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If he likes it anywhere near as much as I do, that's probably exactly what'll happen to him. The poor sod :p
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the funny thing is, i'd probably hear it from here:p
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:lol: I like this stuff, keep it up!
Its got my sense of humor, its funny to me :)
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I can imagine
"some dude: hello! I'm new here, who are you?
-DC: ... - DC starts a geographical restructuration of "some dude"'s face with a baseball batte -
-some dude: aaargh!!!
-DC: oh my, that's cool, let's do it again!"
:p
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Originally posted by DragonClaw
:lol: I like this stuff, keep it up!
Its got my sense of humor, its funny to me :)
hey, i draw, not write, Blue lion's probably gonna skin you alive for that;)
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Skinning is chapter 4
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:confused: :wtf: :nervous: :shaking: :blah: :eek2:
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:lol:
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hush you...;)
BL! you have some 'splaining to do!
(goes off to AG)
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Now inking Page 3... you guys won't get it 'till wednesday;)
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It's......thursday....... next wed?
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yeah, ...;) next wednesday..:nod:
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Originally posted by Turnsky
yeah, ...;) next wednesday..:nod:
Next Wednesday? Aaaaaaaaah.... ;)
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look on the bright side... at least it's worth waiting for;)
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Yeah... delayed gratification. ;) Okay, I'll wait.
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I of course get sneak peeks :) Mainly cause I know what happens
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and i send him what i've done when i've finished them;)
Speaking of which..
BL, check your AG, PM inbox
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It's Blue Lion's (foxfire's writer AKA: Michael Donnely)
say happy B'day to him...;)
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bah, it be wednesday here...
(http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/comics/Foxfire_Chpt1_Page_3.jpg)
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:yes: although i'm not so sure about the last line :p
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cool.
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Um... if they were simply trying to upgrade people, then wouldn't there be a few soldier volunteers?
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talk to Blue Lion...
i Draw not write.... and right now, i don't give a **** about any plot holes:doubt:
they would... but i guess your average "jarhead" would probably lapse into some sort of psycosis or somesuch..
and besides... they're test subjects... more expendible than your average grunt... and less likely to try and kill you..
but still deadly nonetheless, hence those lovely electric shackles..
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Originally posted by Turnsky
those lovely electric shackles..
they make for great sex toys ;7
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see page two..;)
*FZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZTTT!!!*
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allright. I dig :nod:
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Originally posted by Stryke 9
Um... if they were simply trying to upgrade people, then wouldn't there be a few soldier volunteers?
IIRC they have that whole fox team, remember? They'll probably come in later.
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BTW, the bad guy looks like Saddam Hueissein :D
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and saddam looks a bit like walter matthau;)
anyway..
(http://images.deviantart.com/large/indyart/comics/Foxfire_Chpt_1_Page_4.jpg)
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Originally posted by Unknown Target
BTW, the bad guy looks like Saddam Hueissein :D
No no no, he looks like the President of Mexico :p
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Good page again. This one ends this scene I think?
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yeah, and the point at which i ran out of script;)
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:lol:
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sorry for no update...
Writer's sick = No Script = Spend most of my time playing frozen Throne..
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Sweet :)
Everytime I see one of these things, I just want to see another one. Bah, and I still keep coming back :D
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actually i lied, i'm not playing Frozen Throne... i'm playing Inferno..;)
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*Pokes threads corpse* Is this thread dead or just on pause.
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Make a Frozen Throne / Inferno comic ;7
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Originally posted by Deepblue
*Pokes threads corpse* Is this thread dead or just on pause.
Pause... i'm out of script... and my writer's gone AWOL... if this keeps up i might have to travel to baltimore...and bring my cricket bat..:p
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Sorry for the extended Hiatus.... so to appease you..
look at the glowy banner thingy..
(http://users.bigpond.net.au/turnsky/images/banner1.jpg)
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perhaps a bit less glowyness might be in order...would make the text a tad more readable
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that can be fixed...;)
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w00f, glowy :D
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Some good news:
okay first off, a new foxfire should be up by wednesday,
second: a friend of mine has volenteered to put all the other foxfire comics in a single PDF file... :)
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*looks at the last comic*
oooooooooo bondage.
:D
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Originally posted by Charmande
*looks at the last comic*
oooooooooo bondage.
:D
ooooooo Dickhead:doubt:
:p
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Is that another experiment the President of Mexico screwed up? :D
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you just love to pick don't ya?:p
EDIT: in other news Foxfire may be a bit later than promised, but i'm working on that as i type.. sorta..;)
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Nah, that'd make for a good classic horror movie scene... ya know, he escapes, breaks into the basement, and there's this guy in a cage labeled "testosterone enhancement" with a cock for a head saying "kiiiill meee, kiiilll meee, III shhoouuld nooot beee..." down there.
And then he saves him by pissing on the SWAT dudes when they come down. like the fire hose from Hell.
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................Riiiiiiiiiiight.........
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...And that's when the carnivorous spider monkeys come out.
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you're bizarre individual, you know that?:p
anyway..
(http://users.bigpond.net.au/turnsky/comic/ffc-c1p5.jpg)
Subject to change...
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It's a dirty job, but someone has to do it.
As to the new one- cool.
This same combat drug is a mullet generator, though, ah?:p
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technically speaking it's not a mullet..;)
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Hrm... yeah, I guess you have to have a definable "front" to fit the whole "short on the front, long on the back" thing, but... MULLET!
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whatever man, consider this though, techinally speaking, that's only medium-length fur down his neck, covering his entire neck.. :p
EDIT: I've fixed Panel 3....
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well, it seems Stryke9 is the only one to actually care
:nervous:
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Hi :p
Wheres the next comic.
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wait till next week... ;)
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Oh, so I care now...:p
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Man, why didn't I see this till now? :eek2:
Damn good. Only criticism is, the story (at least so far) is a little muted for a visual comic...
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Originally posted by J.F.K.
Man, why didn't I see this till now? :eek2:
umm probably because this thread was largly ignored when i went on a 3- week hiatus.. ;)
Originally posted by J.F.K.
Damn good. Only criticism is, the story (at least so far) is a little muted for a visual comic...
if it wasn't for me adding the odd bit of dialog here and there, there'd be much less... :p
the dialog on panels 3, 4&5 have been added by me... just to keep the comic from looking too bare...:)
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Originally posted by Turnsky
if it wasn't for me adding the odd bit of dialog here and there, there'd be much less... :p
the dialog on panels 3, 4&5 have been added by me... just to keep the comic from looking too bare...:)
Well, I hope there's more action later... hear that, Blue Lion? :p :D
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(http://users.bigpond.net.au/turnsky/comic/ffc-c1p6.jpg)
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W00t... :) Love his expression in the second last pane. :yes:
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Good one again :)
Maybe a bit too much blur on the last panel but nothing to be concerned about.
Great page
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Originally posted by Gortef
Good one again :)
Maybe a bit too much blur on the last panel but nothing to be concerned about.
Great page
lemme see... it was done with a airbrush... so it needed to be waaaaayyyy out of focus ;)
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So, is the decor because you don't wanna do backgrounds, or el Presidente is nearly blind, or what?:p
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Originally posted by Stryke 9
So, is the decor because you don't wanna do backgrounds, or el Presidente is nearly blind, or what?:p
too lazy to draw backgrounds...;)
that's why i'm getting a wacom tablet:D
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Originally posted by Turnsky
lemme see... it was done with a airbrush... so it needed to be waaaaayyyy out of focus ;)
Yea I know. As I said no biggie, that might be just my opinion :)
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(http://users.bigpond.net.au/turnsky/comic/ffc-c1p7.jpg)
subject to change.. i'm still working out Liegh's color-scheming..
in other news i've applied for a Keenspace Account, so hopefully Foxfire will have a home..
EDIT: typos will be fixed:blah:
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no! no keenspace account! the moment you apply, you will go through the same thing that happens when hosted projects get their forum!
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Originally posted by Analazon
no! no keenspace account! the moment you apply, you will go through the same thing that happens when hosted projects get their forum!
what? they die off..?:p
foxfire's already got it's own forum anyway.. you just can't see it on AG;)
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Awesome. :nod::yes: Now we're gettin' somewhere!
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thumbs up... :nod::yes:
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my wacom tablet finally came in, so expect the coloring quality of foxfire to go up just that little bit.. and backgrounds of course ;)
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there's a foxfire on its way.. i'll post it when i'm done:nod:
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O ((--)) O "yay"
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(http://users.bigpond.net.au/turnsky/comic/ffc-c1p8.jpg)
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:yes: You can smell the Wacom. :D
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Originally posted by Knight Templar
:yes: You can smell the Wacom. :D
yeah.. that new wacom smell... ;)
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Originally posted by Turnsky
yeah.. that new wacom smell... ;)
You can really see the improvement in the art. Very nice.
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thank you, just FYI, the characters are still drawn, and inked the old-fashoned way..;)
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great job, one can really see the improvement ^^
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thnx:)
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nice.
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wacom? Sounds like a fish to me.
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Awesome and a half. :D::yes:
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coolio :)
I really need to get back on mine, I've got some free time this week... but I kindda ****ed up the course of events on the latest page, I'll have to find something to fix it :p
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Originally posted by Krackers87
wacom? Sounds like a fish to me.
it's a graphics tablet..
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hi. this is pretty. i don't get how mary knows it's luke if they were human before. i know if i were suddenly turned into a fox i'd have no other-fox-recognition skills whatsoever, especially of ones I've never seen before...
anyway, that was nitpicking. this is cool stuff. more please.
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Originally posted by icespeed
hi. this is pretty. i don't get how mary knows it's luke if they were human before. i know if i were suddenly turned into a fox i'd have no other-fox-recognition skills whatsoever, especially of ones I've never seen before...
anyway, that was nitpicking. this is cool stuff. more please.
those ears do more than sit there my friend ;)
That said, could an admin unsticky this thread, and replace it with
This one (http://www.hard-light.net/forums/index.php/topic,17624.0.html)
Thx
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Unsticking complete :)