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Off-Topic Discussion => Arts & Talents => Topic started by: Getter Robo G on August 23, 2004, 04:16:18 am
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Move if needed, I guessed...
I take a huge ass time to write anything, but in my head I had an idea even since a conversation on the bus in 1987 that went like this "So who would you pick ISD or the Enterprise-D?" Of course I picked Ent-D BUT that is not the point. The point is the beginnings of a story stuck in my mind of a total cross-universal epic. The main problem was how and why, not the story itself... Thanks to Sliders, SG-1 and The Sentinels, I finally had a solid idea that would eventually become the mother of all sick sci-fi and anime fanfics.
I'm no therou but I gave it my best shot. You either like how I and what I write or you don't here it is! (I may or may not include the FS universe.. I kinda have 4 or 5 plot elements guiding me, essentially the story is writting itself!)
http://kier.3dfrontier.com/forums/showthread.php?t=42590
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Wow, I only read a little bit but from what I can tell its pretty good!
Loving the story, and the fast paced reading of it. Reminds me of some other books I read, always fast paced. Reads like a movie.
Great work.
Keep up the good work mate!
-Grug
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Actually my writing style is more like your average animated episode of a 70's series.. I'm just trying to be more detailed with surroundings, minor characters, and thoughts in the character's heads.. I was never any good in school (D average in English type classes)... But it sounds like I got a LITTLE better and at least I got the feel I was going for!!!
TY very much!
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Wow, never thought I'd meet anybody who did worst in English than I.
(Creative writing?! Poetry?! Grammar?! Spelling?! :shaking: )
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Really, really good so far!
I actually had a plan to combine all the universes at one point of time as well; but it would be in a rather grandious sort of a way....if I could ever get my ass moving I'd write it.
Perhaps we can trade ideas though? :)
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whenever you feel like it... just say the word...
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Originally posted by Getter Robo G
whenever you feel like it... just say the word...
Are you on any irc channel or yahoo/Msn/anywhere else then? ;)
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Read thy Sig :D
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I'm actually reviving an old concept of mine that was lost when i got my comp reformatted. In every other story I've seen, Sol never does anything about trying to get in touch with Sol. Of course the stories like S:AH are awesome I just never figured out why they didnt do anything about it. But in my story, they DO do something about it. Project Gaia. I'll post a link once I find a host and make a teaser chapter.
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Yeah I am on yahoo: Getter_Robo_G_2004
anyway chaper 9 added...
http://kier.3dfrontier.com/forums/showthread.php?t=42590
kinda important chapter as earth and SDF-3 forces first get into real combat as well as the resolution of a some fueds. Plus there is a homage to an old series from the 80's you may or may not notice... I just thought of it as I was starting it yesterday...
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The HLP movie :)
http://www.3dap.com//hlp/staff/Windrunner/HLP_Movie.zip
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I thought it was a movie!!!!!
No matter as soon as I opened the file I HAD TO read it!
WOHOO! That rocked... One question, can I be in the sequel? (old name or new it don't matter) ;)
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Haha, if you search the forums, I got about 1/3 of the way thru the sequel. I might start it again if I have time (unfortunately I've got a bunch of stuf on my plate right now, so I might not).
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I curse thee, UT! For not finishing!
:p
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Haha, maybe later, if there's enough demand :)
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demand? UT, there's _heaps_ of demand for the sequel! just because you got lazy doesn't mean there's no demand! _i'd_ like to know what happens next and i'm not even here most of the time!
*cough* um, yeah, could you write some more please?
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Geesh I'm on a rool (ok not really) I write so infrequently but lately , for me, it's bee pouring out.
Chapter 10 done, I try to make them long enough to be interesting and show where things are headed but also not to overwhelm me with 1000 details I have no clue about.
http://kier.3dfrontier.com/forums/showthread.php?t=42590
Deals with the aftermath of Krell's insanity as well as changes on Earth...
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Originally posted by icespeed
demand? UT, there's _heaps_ of demand for the sequel! just because you got lazy doesn't mean there's no demand! _i'd_ like to know what happens next and i'm not even here most of the time!
*cough* um, yeah, could you write some more please?
If I wrote anything more, the original storyline would be script would be completely revamped, especially near the end.
If I wrote anything ;)
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Chapter 11 up
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Chapter 12 up
Finally finished, took 2 damn days!
http://kier.3dfrontier.com/forums/showthread.php?t=42590
Some character developement and plot seeds sown.
Lang has a surprise announcement, and don't forget: BEEF STEW !!!
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Had some serious writer's block..
Anyway Chapter 13 finally up!
http://kier.3dfrontier.com/forums/showthread.php?t=42590
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Personally...I hate and fear crossovers. Then again, that's because I've seen too many utterly insane and bad ones.
Excuse me for a few hours while read...
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Sorry man - I read up to blue haired man and closed the window. I mean, come on. Blue?
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........*sighs*
I hate the Wing Commander community and all, but still........
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Um Black Wolf, you were doing the RT to secret ops mod on WCIC right? If so then you should already know that Max Sterling has medium blue hair....
I can't believe you've never seen a single episode of Macross Saga...
(now answer me this, Miriya has Shamrock Green Hair, do you get a Blonde baby from blue and Green like crayola crayons? IS this Anime genetics? LOL)
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Originally posted by Getter Robo G
Um Black Wolf, you were doing the RT to secret ops mod on WCIC right? If so then you should already know that Max Sterling has medium blue hair....
I can't believe you've never seen a single episode of Macross Saga...
(now answer me this, Miriya has Shamrock Green Hair, do you get a Blonde baby from blue and Green like crayola crayons? IS this Anime genetics? LOL)
What? WC? Nope...
And while I have not seen any Macross, I am aware of the whole blue hair thing, but surely when you're writing something you want to go for at least some degree of realism?
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sweet ass
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Max dyes his hair, or so novels said. Miriya ain't human, so that covers that.
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Some questions are answered are the legacy of the Getter Rays begins to manifest and a REF officer faces a horrifying situation.
Props to Aldo and Trashman as ship names are dropped. (images to be posted someday)
http://kier.3dfrontier.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1906857#post1906857
enjoy!
(One vision many Universes)
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Chapter 15 up, timeline placement of B5 in releation to events, plus the fallout of recent events. Someone's got a secret!
http://forum.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?p=1962317#post1962317
enjoy I hope
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Critical cause Freespace finally gets mentioned...
I was wondering how to work it in, glad it works. IF you don't figure it out right away don't feel bad.
Lots of things happen in this chapter so sorry if it feels rushed...
Chapter 23: http://forum.spacebattles.com/showthread.php?t=42590&page=2
Would like to hear some feedback from more people.
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Didn't use edit this time cause I forgot to mention something:
If anyone wants to be in the FS section before I finish writing that arc let me know.
I need a complete dossier and profile of the character (Name, Rank current assignment and family background, plus any previous Second-War or Great-War exploits/injuries.. Send me a pm if you don't want it listed here in thread.
L8tr!
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Time is running out and I am about to continue the story arc so please have the info sent by next Friday, September 2nd... I don't want to have to repost an edited version on spacebattles for characters... I write when the muse hits me, that's why it seems sporratic so when I feel the flow the pen must go!
l8tr!
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Chapter 24 up so use previous post link.
Warning, this was an intense and explicit flashback so unless you got the stomach for it (or under 17) skip this chapter!
*Oh yeah, like that will work* :P
My concience is clear now...