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Off-Topic Discussion => Arts & Talents => Topic started by: FireCrack on November 24, 2004, 12:35:20 am
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A few days ago i drew this then just doday i scanned (well actualy used a digital camera) and colored it...
I'm not a man of many words, but they say a picture's woth 1000
big pic, click links (this board neads screenshot tags)
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v66/FireCrack/HercWall.jpg
Let's make that 2000, by showing the original pre-colored version
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v66/FireCrack/HercPlain.jpg)
actualy i think it's more dramatic this way arounds, seeing the uncolored one first
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I prefer the uncolored version, myself...coloring lost some of the detail and shading.
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Prefer the pencil version myself too. That one is pretty cool :D
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I think you should try & ink in some black lines-stroke-highlights to the coloured version - tend to lose the contrast & detail from the b&w version in that one, I think :)
Nice work, regardless.
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Originally posted by aldo_14
I think you should try & ink in some black lines-stroke-highlights to the coloured version - tend to lose the contrast & detail from the b&w version in that one, I think :)
Nice work, regardless.
try to shade/highlight in some areas, but otherwise, pretty good.
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Don't take any of this as offense, it's a good drawing, but:
The nose needs to be fatter, it's way too skinny.
The cockpit is way wrong, it should come up and out, not be flat inside the nose.
The perspective is off, the back of the engines look fatter than the front, like they flare outwards.
The missile thingies are good, tho, I like 'em :)
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1: ok no offense taken
2: drawn from memory, so some things arent acurate
3: as above
4: didn't notice that, but the left engine's intake is horribly mangled
5: even the middle "dildo" one ;)
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I like! :yes: Perspective is slightly off, but apart from that I can't really fault it. Good stuff :)
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mmmm nice thick missile trials