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FreeSpace Releases => Mission & Campaign Releases => Topic started by: TopAce on June 18, 2005, 03:58:21 pm
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Now that there were words about standalone missions, I was inspired.
I spent three complete hours working on this mission. I am confident I could produce something good in such a short time. The mission's structure is not complicated.
Download here (http://freespaceserver.cjb.net/topace/SA-1_TopAce.rar)
Feedback is welcome.
[EDIT]Mission updated, following pyro-maniac's suggestions.
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I'll give it a spin. :)
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Before I forget: I did not give it to anyone to grammar check it. You can comment on that, if it's constructive, with examples.
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Will do. I'll post my opinion as well as any corrections shortly...
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*is curious to see this 'any corrections.'*
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Straight forward escort the partially damaged cap ship mission.
I enjoyed it, but the enemy seemed to jump in a bit too close to the damaged ship, but that is just an opinion not a knock.
:cool:
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OK: I liked the mission - nice and simple, nothing too flashy, just get on with it. Nicely done. :yes: The only thing I picked up on was the timing and positioning of the attacks. Perhaps have the delays between waves a bit longer, but make the waves more powerful? If anything, the Nephilim seemed to be too close to launch their bombs. Make them arrive further away, have 6 per wing, and have slightly longer gaps between the waves. :)
On to the corrections - I've gone over the messages and brief/debrief quickly, and I've corrected and/or re-written them to what I think is better. I've tried to keep them similar, but some of your structures were a bit awkward so I rearranged them. Bear in mind that these are only my opinions, so ignore anything you don't like. Hope I've been of some help. :)
http://www.freewebs.com/pyro-manic/Topace.rar
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Thanks for the help, the delays between the waves are usually between 5 seconds and 80-100 seconds, so I don't think making the delay higher is necessary.
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I like it! But I have a question, how do I upload my own mission so people can download it?
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You need an FTP(File Transfer Protocol) server. I suggest you go to: www.game-warden.com/forum and make a request for an FTP server.
To use an FTP server, you must have an FTP-controlling programme, I have SmartFTP(Search in Google and you will find it, it's free to download). I am pretty sure that is a nice programme, easy to learn.
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thanks
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Or an easier way is to sign up for some free webspace (eg freewebs.com or geocities or something), upload the mission file there and then link to it. :)
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Submit it to Hades Combine (http://hades-combine.com/web/index.php?ind=downloads&op=submit_file).