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Off-Topic Discussion => Arts & Talents => Topic started by: icespeed on July 13, 2005, 07:54:09 pm

Title: angel
Post by: icespeed on July 13, 2005, 07:54:09 pm
i haven't done anything this hols, and now its almost over. which is as it should be. but this is one of the things i haven't done. her name's aixen, and she's a character from a story my bf intended to write about a year ago, but never did.

(http://tinypic.com/73p5lg.jpg)
Title: angel
Post by: Grug on July 14, 2005, 07:06:09 pm
Nice. :yes:
Good proportions and style.

You should ink and colour it. :D

/me likes the spear thingo. ^_^
Title: angel
Post by: WMCoolmon on July 14, 2005, 08:57:07 pm
Hmm.

I'm not an artist, but something strikes me as a bit wrong about the left hand; her arm there looks a little bit to thin.
Title: angel
Post by: Grug on July 14, 2005, 09:33:25 pm
Its just the elbow is bent, yet is a little difficult to spot.
Title: angel
Post by: pyro-manic on July 17, 2005, 10:18:58 am
Very nice. :yes: That's a great pose. I think the perspective/depth issues (nothing wrong, just that it's a bit hard to make some things out because it's all pencil) would be solved if it was coloured and shaded. :nod: