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Off-Topic Discussion => Arts & Talents => Topic started by: Ransom on September 07, 2005, 01:18:26 pm

Title: The Broken Child
Post by: Ransom on September 07, 2005, 01:18:26 pm

An awkward attempt at soft shading.

I hate the eyes, I hope they die.



(http://img332.imageshack.us/img332/7887/emptyfinal3yb.jpg)

Title: The Broken Child
Post by: Martinus on September 07, 2005, 01:23:50 pm

[color=66ff00]Very, very cool.

As for the eyes, I think you need to make them simpler and more defined but that's a guess.
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Title: The Broken Child
Post by: BlackDove on September 07, 2005, 02:02:00 pm

Oooooooo Haibane Renmei gone bad.

:yes:

The eyes should die though. Or they want me to die. I can't decide.

Title: The Broken Child
Post by: Fineus on September 07, 2005, 02:05:29 pm

I think it's the highlight below the eye on the left... it looks out of place. Also, perhaps make the expression more blank and the pupils darker...

Aside from that though, very nice indeed. Lovely detail, particularly on the robe.

Title: The Broken Child
Post by: BlackDove on September 07, 2005, 02:20:03 pm

Particulary on the blood.

And that's a good thing.

The Eyes.

THE EYES.

They want me.

Title: The Broken Child
Post by: Liquid Fire on September 07, 2005, 03:27:38 pm

Looks good, but the eyes....

the eeeeeyyyeeeesss..........:shaking:

Unless you're shooting for a really surprised-looking anime type thing, eyes probably shouldn't take up 30% of the face real-estate ;)

Just think how big they must be. It's like having two softballs in your head!

Beyond that, seems good, although the neck is at a bit of a crooked angle...

Title: The Broken Child
Post by: Col. Fishguts on September 07, 2005, 03:51:10 pm

Sorry, the eyes commanded me to do it....

(http://n.ethz.ch/student/ebuerli/download/eyes.jpg)

Title: The Broken Child
Post by: BlackDove on September 07, 2005, 04:16:33 pm

:nervous:














(http://web.comhem.se/~u72302126/emptyfinal3yb.jpg)

Title: The Broken Child
Post by: Ransom on September 07, 2005, 10:44:46 pm

Quote

Originally posted by BlackDove
SCANNING!!!!

:lol:

Quote

Originally posted by Liquid Fire
Unless you're shooting for a really surprised-looking anime type thing, eyes probably shouldn't take up 30% of the face real-estate ;)

Yeah, that's mainly what I don't like about them. Also the pupils are pretty underdetailed, but I couldn't get them to look right so I just left them alone.

Title: The Broken Child
Post by: MicroPsycho on September 09, 2005, 08:45:49 pm

I think the eyes are freaky, but they are appropriate for the picture, they portray a sort of false innocence...but fix the pupils

Title: The Broken Child
Post by: Gortef on September 12, 2005, 04:20:18 am

too much w33d?

otherwise nice one :yes:

Title: The Broken Child
Post by: NGTM-1R on September 12, 2005, 04:51:15 am

The eyes are the best part, if you're going for that "Holy carp, she's freakin' me out!" effect...

Title: The Broken Child
Post by: Mefustae on September 12, 2005, 05:06:54 am

Quote

Originally posted by Liquid Fire
Looks good, but the eyes....

the eeeeeyyyeeeesss..........:shaking:

(http://img365.imageshack.us/img365/3484/theeeeeeeyes2au.jpg):D
Courtesy of VGCats

Title: The Broken Child
Post by: Liquid Fire on September 12, 2005, 11:50:15 pm

I suppose I shouldn't be surprised that somebody caught that reference...

Title: The Broken Child
Post by: Sapphire on September 15, 2005, 11:16:24 am

 :drevil:

Title: The Broken Child
Post by: vyper on September 15, 2005, 12:47:12 pm

I'm getting flashbacks to the F.E.A.R. demo