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Off-Topic Discussion => General Discussion => Topic started by: Saturn2004 on September 20, 2005, 07:24:34 pm
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hey there folks
i will be starting school soon to study Production
and on the side i will be learning everything about webdesign and computer networks on the side
anyways, earlier today i came up with two new songs in my head today while i was at work
they are not totally worked out and complete yet, so will give you the "skinny"...
but please tell me what you think about it give me any and all of your opinions/ suggestions/comments]
the first one is about this girl who is attracted to this handsome man... and it goes like this....
come in and satisfy my heart.....
(heavyTechno)
i want you to stay with me all night
(heavy techno)
oh ,how you satisfy me with that touch....
you are my flame ,
you are my shinning star in the sky i i i burning so brightly all night long
[end song]
ok heres the skinny out of my second song
it is about a music professional that is late from work and kinds behind shedule
i only got one line on this one done and i think it is kinda stupid but it might work..
hey mr DJ ,
thanks for my song,
but i need you to call a cab so i can give you some DAP
[end song]
well thats it
what do you guys think?
is this pure crap
or does it rock
or does it make you say "meh" ?
Tell me all about it
please feel free to post all of you comments\thoughts\suggestions
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wtf are you on?
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Something potent by the looks of it.
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Meh.
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Needs powerchords and screaming.
or double bass.
or a quad-necked guitar.
or Yngwie Malmsteem.
EDIT: Or at least a key and some notes/chord progressions.
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C'mon guys, try and be supportive.
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No. I shall not lie. Quite honestly, these lyrics suck.
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I've got a fever...and the only cure...is more cowbell...
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Well, if you take a look at some of Coldplay's most popular songs the lyrics there suck too. :p
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Originally posted by Mongoose
I've got a fever...and the only cure...is more cowbell...
[color=66ff00]This man has seen the light.
These days if it isn't IDM it usually sucks, my mates are jungle fans but it's an aquired taste IMHO.
As for your songs they're not really even frameworks, it's a couple of lines and nothing else. Techno songs aren't famous for their lyrics in any case.
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come in and satisfy my heart.....
(heavyTechno)
i want you to stay with me all night
(heavy techno)
oh ,how you satisfy me with that touch....
you are my flame ,
you are my shinning star in the sky i i i burning so brightly all night long
[/q]
Hmm. heavy techno, eh?
Classy
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you should make these lyrics more diverse and post a whole text of the song not just 3/5 lines...
Then we could judge them better...
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I am sorry but the songs made me laugh :lol:
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well lol thanks for the input guys i appreciate it
and than you guys for being honest...
you were a great help
what you witnessed was the byproduct of a combination of very potent Cuban weed (the best stuff) LSD and some german beer :eek: :eek:
never mix that stuff togther or you will get pysched out
:thepimp: ;7
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Originally posted by Saturn2004
well lol thanks for the input guys i appreciate it
and than you guys for being honest...
you were a great help
what you witnessed was the byproduct of a combination of very potent Cuban weed (the best stuff) LSD and some german beer :eek: :eek:
never mix that stuff togther or you will get pysched out
:thepimp: ;7
:rolleyes: :blah:
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.... and suddenly I realise how some of his posts came together.
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Some?!
Techno Techno Techno Techno
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No No.
No. No. No. No.
No. No. No. No.
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I've got a fever...and the only cure...is more cowbell...
(http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b319/Mistah_Kurtz/MoreCowbell.jpg)
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Originally posted by Ford Prefect
(http://i22.photobucket.com/albums/b319/Mistah_Kurtz/MoreCowbell.jpg)
Yeah I remember that episode of SNL :lol:
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*is tempted to post anal c*** lyrics but doesn't want to get banned*