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Off-Topic Discussion => Arts & Talents => Topic started by: pecenipicek on November 12, 2005, 08:37:01 am
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well, since i wasnt here a looooong time, time for an art dump.
Pretty self-exlanatory, NX-01 versus my favourite ship(some of you may or may not remember it...) the NX-01 mesh is courtesy of Axeman.( http://www.axeman3d.com )
(http://img92.imageshack.us/img92/8981/closeshotfinal9ae.gif)
a ship i made for a member of SpaceBattles.com(the blue one) vs my huge ship...
(http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/9849/lcshipsvsfireflyandesc3tk.jpg)
self explanatory
(http://img184.imageshack.us/img184/286/fs2fleetmaneuver1zr.jpg)
2 ships of my own devising...
(http://img261.imageshack.us/img261/2338/heraldfirefly6lg.jpg)
manuevers of my ships...
(http://img490.imageshack.us/img490/8622/fleetmaneuversangle1bypecenipi.jpg)
and a mug :p
(http://img490.imageshack.us/img490/3664/anothermugbypecenipicek0ib.jpg)
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Overall not bad, but your space shots seem to lack shadows and thus lose a lot of their potential. Also, pay attention to your composition. Most of those images are way too crowded. Keep working, you'll get better over time :)
Oh, and if you used someone else's work on a render it would be nice if you put in credits.
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Overall not bad, but your space shots seem to lack shadows and thus lose a lot of their potential. Also, pay attention to your composition. Most of those images are way too crowded. Keep working, you'll get better over time :)
dont understand, there were always shadows included in the stuff i rendered, but obviously the placement was such that it didnt show it the way it should have... meh...
Oh, and if you used someone else's work on a render it would be nice if you put in credits.
well, i always posted a link to the persons website if i used his/hers work, always, i dont steal art like some people on some other boards
thanks for the comments tho :)
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Your composition definately needs work - it's too crowded and has no contrast, so it's almost impossible to see what's what (for instance, I'm still not sure what your ships look like :p), but good renders otherwise :) Melikes :yes:
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^yeah, on the first one i thaught that disc shaped thing was a small fighter flying over the nt E until i realy examined it.
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whee :p
well, when i dont clutter stuff together, my ability to completely suck at making decent backgrounds comes into play :D
whee
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Well maybe you should try working on that then... post some backgrounds and get some criticism.
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okay.
will do soon, after i complete the scene i'm currently working on...
ahem, a WIP of the scene.
(http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/1724/3dcgpersp21511051zl.th.jpg) (http://img166.imageshack.us/img166/1724/3dcgpersp21511051zl.jpg)
details about it will come when i finish it. deadline is 28th november...
whee.
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well, here is the finished scene from above
(http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/3496/3dcgconcept10bypecenipicek1xb.th.jpg) (http://img529.imageshack.us/img529/3496/3dcgconcept10bypecenipicek1xb.jpg)
my current project- a space/atmospheric fighter.
(http://img472.imageshack.us/img472/6098/asfighter09120519nu.jpg)
thoughts, comments?
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I saw that fighter over on SpaceBattles. :) Looks interesting :)
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thanks :)
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a minor update. moved the canards to the front, and am currently trying to get them to look like they have some hard edges...
(http://img322.imageshack.us/img322/8409/asfighter1812058dy.jpg)