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Off-Topic Discussion => Arts & Talents => Topic started by: TrashMan on December 29, 2005, 08:55:55 am

Title: What do you think of this?
Post by: TrashMan on December 29, 2005, 08:55:55 am

>>>Sketches<<< (http://dj.rogueserv.com/TRASHMAN/Sketch/)

Being inspired by several web comics I sat down and started drawing a little. In the begining I used ..erm.. not a pencil but that plastic thingy (with a long & thin carbon tip that extends) and only later switched to a pencil.

I think I made quite a progress with women faces and expression and am now working more on male faces.

Do tell what yo uthink :D

Title: Re: What do you think of this?
Post by: Ulala on December 29, 2005, 03:59:02 pm

Way better than anything I could ever do.  :yes: Keep it up, you can only get better. The only thing that caught me and I'm not sure of is the ship(?) in the first page of sketches. It reminded me of the fluid feel of the Wells class from 29th century Trek, until I saw the fin/wing/thing on the stern. I guess they didn't quite fit together. *shrugs* But for sketches, not bad at all.

Title: Re: What do you think of this?
Post by: TrashMan on December 29, 2005, 04:09:57 pm

I had space left on that paper and just started doodling a little and the ship came out..

I have to work on my drawing(sketching) style...the lines are to hard and stiff giving it a too childish feel..but then again I allways was childish  :D

Glad someone is loving it..

B.T.W. - if any pics seem familiar that's becouse I used hte Outsider comic for inspiration

Title: Re: What do you think of this?
Post by: Martinus on December 29, 2005, 08:37:44 pm

Your facial proportions are good but the head shape goes a bit awry sometimes. Keep it up though there's potential there. I think this is better placed in the art forum though.

Title: Re: What do you think of this?
Post by: Unknown Target on December 29, 2005, 08:53:31 pm

Looks good. You need to look up some anatomy though, your proportions are off in several places, and your heads are a bit awry :)

But yea, nice job, melikes :yes:

Title: Re: What do you think of this?
Post by: Grug on December 29, 2005, 09:53:36 pm

Looks good. :D

Some of those sketches remind me of ye 'old Star Trek even...

Title: Re: What do you think of this?
Post by: TrashMan on December 30, 2005, 08:53:43 am

Thanx for the comments..

I've only been at it for 2-3 days. Hope I get all the kinks out :D

Title: Re: What do you think of this?
Post by: pyro-manic on December 30, 2005, 10:36:38 pm

My only comment is keep it up - looks like you could get rather good if that's the only stuff you've done. :)

I'd love to be able to draw well, but I don't have the time to dedicate to learning... :(