Post by: Thorn on December 03, 2001, 01:12:00 pm
This is what I came up with, I just want to know what could be improved, removed, added.
Its a scene from one of the missions in Cataclysm, you come looking for the Bentusi's help, but theyre all leaving through a massive slipgate to escape the Beast, you have to move the Command Ship in to block the gate and destroy the nodes around the gate. The Bentusi dont like that, so they proceed to kikc your @$$.
[This message has been edited by Thorn (edited 12-03-2001).]
Post by: Fineus on December 03, 2001, 01:21:00 pm
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Post by: Ryx on December 03, 2001, 03:01:00 pm
I know i put everything i had in front of the slipgate, so more of everything.
Still it does look good (http://dynamic.gamespy.com/~freespace/ubb/noncgi/smile.gif)
Post by: Eishtmo on December 03, 2001, 06:19:00 pm
Anyways, perhaps you should try a different angle, more under and just to the right of gate facing toward where the camera is now. Then add more of everything, opening up with all their weapons. Make it clear that the Bentusi want to go through that gate and the player's forces aren't about to let that happen. More ships, more weapons, more explosions. Many more explosions.
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Post by: Setekh on December 04, 2001, 05:13:00 am