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Hosted Projects - Standalone => The Babylon Project => Topic started by: GZero on October 09, 2006, 07:06:34 pm

Title: Mission demo, pls test
Post by: GZero on October 09, 2006, 07:06:34 pm

Hello everybody,

here is my first try to create a mission, it is also planed that this will be a mission of my own created campaign.
Pls test this missions and give me a feedback what i can improve. Especially i hope there is somebody who can help me to improve
or correct my english in this mission ;)

Here is the DL for my mission http://rapidshare.de/files/36157041/demo.rar.html (http://rapidshare.de/files/36157041/demo.rar.html)
This mission was created with Fred 3.6.9

Title: Re: Mission demo, pls test
Post by: Rhythmic on October 09, 2006, 08:41:11 pm

My gripe with it would have to be the fact that nothing happens for like 5-6 minutes stright. I ended up using time compression just to see something happened. Fill up the dead time with something else. Add some more background.


I like the idea to push "j" to do a quick scan. That was cute.

Title: Re: Mission demo, pls test
Post by: GZero on October 10, 2006, 02:50:27 pm

Thx for your feedback.

I have one Problem, this should be a search and rescue mission, so there have to be a search phase.
Perhaps you have a better idea to improve this mission, when yes pls post, i'm thankful for every help.