that's an intense mission! check the typos only. and add some directives for the final part of the mission.. something like
jump at the node .. or RUN RUN RUN for your life
the mentu fires onto the sobek when the moloch arrives, change the mentu to a different altitude so it doesn't hit the sobek.
make the final messages from the Aeolus to come separately and in every sexp evaluate if the cruiser is destroyed before sending, since I got a message from command in mission (which i guess was supposed to come from the Aeolus but it was destroyed on the process).
nice mission, quite entertaining :)
Interesting mission. I like the story. I think it's worth updating :)
You could find some names for cruisers. For example search the wikipedia for Egyptian or Greek gods names. There's a lot of them ;)