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Title: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Axem on December 24, 2008, 07:53:50 pm
Choose your preferred Corellian Gunship Midsection!

Option 1:
Cylindrical Style seen mostly in the EU drawings and schematics, this is the most commonly seen.
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v109/NarfPics/CGS1.jpg)

Option 2:
Corellian Corvette Style, seen in XWA, and my own favorite style.
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v109/NarfPics/CGS1a.jpg)

Choose wisely, for there are no Snuffleupaguses.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll
Post by: Stormkeeper on December 24, 2008, 08:06:46 pm
I vote Corellian Corvette. It's very familiar to me.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: swashmebuckle on December 25, 2008, 02:08:54 am
Yeah, keeping the same aesthetic for stuff from a certain planet helps tie the look together and makes the universe seem less like the work of a hundred EU authors of varying quality.  Looking good!
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Narvi on December 25, 2008, 02:20:38 am
I've never liked any of the EU book ships, so I say go with the XWA version. At least it's not ugly as hell.

Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: TopAce on December 25, 2008, 10:20:30 am
I vote for the Corellian Corvette Style.

Two reasons: First is that I like that design better. Second is that you said that's your preferred look. If you are to model something, it helps to match your preferences.

Hope to see something come out of it, textured, turreted, POFfed. :D
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Kyle_K_ski on December 25, 2008, 10:12:38 pm
The corvette style is, without question, visually stronger and more appealing. 

Keep up the solid work!
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Black Wolf on December 26, 2008, 03:13:51 am
I like the cylindrical style, but it looks like I'm solidly in the minority there.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: bobbtmann on December 26, 2008, 01:49:09 pm
I prefer the cylindrical one. The corvette style has appeal because the flanges on either side give it an orientation and a sense of stability. The cylinder feels more integrated than the corvette (which is a plus), and would get the corvette's sense of stability with the addition of a plane to connect the two cylinders together. Like so:

[attachment stolen by Slimey Goober]
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: shiv on December 28, 2008, 03:03:08 am
I voted second option. It's better IMO.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Mongoose on December 28, 2008, 11:02:23 pm
I'll have to abstain, as I don't know what either choice belongs to in context. :p
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: chief1983 on December 29, 2008, 11:32:39 am
We're talking about the Gunship (http://swc.fs2downloads.com/reference.php?subdir=Misc/Gunship/).  As you can tell, there's a lot of variations on it.  Therefore this one is up to Axem as to how to proceed for the most part, since there isn't really a definitive version to base it on.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: BS403 on December 30, 2008, 12:01:53 pm
personally i prefer the cylindrical design, but it appears that the voting has gone the other way. Also very nice work so far.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Axem on January 03, 2009, 01:31:42 pm
Sorry about the complete lack of any updates. I've been trying to get the Gunship engine block juuuuust right. Every pic is nearly contradictory to each other, so I'm not trying for a reference exact model. Still that didn't help matters. After a few rounds of "This Sucks, I'm Restarting!" here's what I got.

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v109/NarfPics/csg7a.jpg)
(Alternate cylinder style midsection) (http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v109/NarfPics/csg7.jpg)
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v109/NarfPics/csg8a.jpg)
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v109/NarfPics/csg9a.jpg)

And here's a past few rounds of "This Sucks, I'm Restarting!"
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v109/NarfPics/CGS3a.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v109/NarfPics/CGS4a.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v109/NarfPics/CGS5a.jpg
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Something on January 03, 2009, 03:58:11 pm
The ones in photobucket look ok to me. What was wrong with them?
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Axem on January 03, 2009, 04:25:18 pm
Well, nothing technically. The main problem for me was transitioning from a very round shape to a very blocky shape. I tried to make it look like a real design. 3a and 4a were alright in my opinion, but it I wanted to have big armor plates on the engines something like seen here: http://swc.fs2downloads.com/reference/Misc/Gunship/bts_bg.jpg

5a was getting closer, but the transition to the engine block still didn't do it for me. So I just made that cylinder bigger and make it the transition itself.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: StarSlayer on January 03, 2009, 04:53:10 pm
Thumbs up.  I think doing the burner cans like those in the concept art and consular ship from PM would look pretty good.  Any chance of a helicopter gunship-esq chin gun?  I really think it would add a bit of character to the flowerpot.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: FUBAR-BDHR on January 03, 2009, 06:55:54 pm
I wasn't positive about the weather the corvette or cylindrical style would look better.  After seeing both on the ship the corvette looks a lot better.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Axem on January 04, 2009, 01:39:01 pm
Small update

Starting adding finer detail, and made the armor that goes over the top and bottom of the engines into their own plates, like the the side plates.

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v109/NarfPics/csg10.jpg)
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: swashmebuckle on January 04, 2009, 10:59:12 pm
That's looks really nice!  I like StarSlayer's idea of a chin mounted gun too...it just says "gunship".  Perhaps a quad laser turret or repeating blaster/fighter deterrent thing?  Might add some strategic element to fighting a ship that has an otherwise even distribution of guns.  Anyway, it seems like the extra work on the cowling has paid off; it looks like it belongs, but still has a style.   :yes:
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: StarSlayer on January 05, 2009, 12:10:38 am
Dunno know about the giant YT series bridge windows.  Granted the Carrack set the precedent of obnoxiously large bridges but the gunship's around the same size as the CR90 vette and the consular ship.  Personally I would advocate something a bit more smaller and subdued in addition to keeping the standard flowerpot shape, it seems more robust. If your looking for greeble ideas i would consider adding escape pods to the underside of the middle hull.

(http://i41.tinypic.com/293zjac.jpg)

Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: chief1983 on January 05, 2009, 12:14:05 am
I find that a bit more appealing StarSlayer.  Not sure about the chin turret though.  Anyway it would at least have to be omnidirectional.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Kyle_K_ski on January 06, 2009, 07:51:31 pm
Nice work thus far StarSlayer!

I have to agree with Chief1983 though in regards to the chin armament: personally, I'd make it protrude more and allow it to be more omnidirectional.  The lower hull portion that meets the back of it right now just seems too large, as it's already well established that the turrets we've seen in the films sit pretty much on their own and are only grounded at the base.

The windows of the C&C seem a tad off.  When I study that portion, I keep having visions of a sloped top angling upwards from the forward windows.  The top viewports would be seated on a slope, so I guess you could say that the top of the bridge's cylinder would be softened a bit by the sloped portion above the forward windows.  I hope this make sense.

I don't know how "canonical" or not it would be to make such an alteration, but as you've pointed out yourself numerous times, there seems to be no real consensus as to what the back end of this thing looks like, so if they're not worried about it, I wouldn't be.  In my opinion, most of the EU stuff is easy to eclipse design wise, so if you can make it look better (and I have no doubts that this is a feat you can easily achieve), just do so.

 :)
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: chief1983 on January 06, 2009, 08:56:52 pm
Uhm...this is Axem's model, StarSlayer was just posing a suggestion...are you meaning to congratulate just him on that specific idea?
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: StarSlayer on January 06, 2009, 10:12:15 pm
heheh yeah that about 5 minutes of me in MS Paint fiddling a image of Axem's model to show him what i meant about the smaller bridge.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: brandx0 on January 07, 2009, 03:32:27 am
When it's done, in the game we'll credit it to StarSlayer.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Axem on January 09, 2009, 10:49:16 pm
:(

Added Corvette like turrets and make the bridge windows more like the Corvette too.

I'll probably axe the turrets on the armor skirts. Those are way too big to fit in that small space.

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v109/NarfPics/gunshipturreted.jpg)
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: StarSlayer on January 09, 2009, 11:11:32 pm
Like i said on irc dead sexy, especially when you nix the side skirt guns.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: EtherShock on January 10, 2009, 03:46:44 am
I'm glad to see that chin gun removed. It broke the streamlined design of the ship, looks much sleeker without it. I love the engine block armor, very nice touch. It seems more intimidating that way, like you know this thing means business. Are you using the armament stats from Wookiepedia for the DP-20's guns?
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Axem on January 10, 2009, 10:22:52 am
I never added a chingun. That was just a drawing by StarSlayer to suggest some ideas.

There is enough room on the model for Wookie's suggested armament, so I'll probably be using that.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: EtherShock on January 12, 2009, 01:09:37 am
Oh, well it looked like it was added, very good drawing to blend in so well at first glance, sorry about the misunderstanding.

I just realized, those stats are from WEG, so it might be a challenge to fit all those guns on there...if even possible or realistic for that matter.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: chief1983 on January 12, 2009, 01:19:25 am
I doubt we'll be using the WEG stats, although I doubt there's any real better idea of what to use.  It may just end up being what fits us best.  We can eyeball the turret setup somewhat from different references, but what about the supposed missile launcher?
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: brandx0 on January 12, 2009, 05:22:25 am
To be honest, missiles in general only barely fit into Star Wars, and even then, only fighters are ever shown using them.  If there's no missile Launchers on the Gunship (or any other capship for that matter) I certainly won't shed a tear.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: StarSlayer on January 12, 2009, 08:14:56 am
I doubt we'll be using the WEG stats, although I doubt there's any real better idea of what to use.  It may just end up being what fits us best.  We can eyeball the turret setup somewhat from different references, but what about the supposed missile launcher?

Depending on whether you include them, Axem and I were discussing it I thought adding a set of concussion missile tubes like submarine torpedoes tubes on the "cheeks" might look good.  Especially if you could add outer doors,  then it would just look like a set of panels that pop open and spew missiles.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: swashmebuckle on January 12, 2009, 01:13:35 pm
For me the most miserable parts of TIE fighter were where there was a cap ship firing missile after missile at you (with no lock warning!), and if they started close enough there would be nothing you could do but let them chase you around in circles until you got a clear shot or they blew up on their own, so they effectively took you out of the combat.  Torps/missiles might be used a lot in the EU and prequels, but in the Trilogy they are only employed against large, stationary Death Stars, so I'd say either forget them on cap ships or make them so that they detonate if they miss you rather than coming around for another pass.  There are an awful lot of random popcorn explosions in space in the view of Endor from the throne room--too many to all be fighters blowing up I think.  I guess that might also be some type of flack or shields being hit though...  Anyway, just my 2 cents.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Axem on January 12, 2009, 05:22:00 pm
While I am not the tabeller in charge, I could only think that missiles are more of a long range deterrent, meant to force any attacking ships to break away for a bit and let the cap ship deal with a temporarily reduced force.

In any case, I think I will add 4 tubes of "something" on the ship. Could they be missile launchers? Who knows? :p
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Axem on February 01, 2009, 12:35:14 am
'K Axem, you've had over half a month to do some work. What do you have to show for yourself?

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v109/NarfPics/csg100.jpg)
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v109/NarfPics/csg101.jpg)

Ugly! Restart!
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: brandx0 on February 01, 2009, 12:42:00 am
Axem is officially fired from the Fate of the Galaxy art team for producing something so ugly.

Heh, just kidding, fantastic work

You're still fired though.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Narvi on February 01, 2009, 12:58:36 am
It's beautiful.

I still love you, Corellian Corvette!
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: swashmebuckle on February 01, 2009, 10:25:38 am
Man, that's looking great.  Those quad lasers look perfect (and there's a chin mounted one!); you really seem to have the knack for Corellian ships ;7

Yeah, I want the Falcon...
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: EtherShock on February 04, 2009, 09:56:02 pm
Fantastic! The attention to detail is amazing. I can't believe I can see those quad lasers! But can we see a picture of the aft? I can't figure out where that turret is mounted back there.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Axem on February 04, 2009, 11:09:20 pm
There's just another quad laser turret at the front of the bottom engine block and a dual turbo at the back. There's barely anything to see there yet, but I'll post pix after I've detailed it.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Axem on February 09, 2009, 02:33:40 pm
Brace yourselves, I've gone into uncharted territory here:

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v109/NarfPics/gunshipwhatisthat.jpg)

Sure the Gunship's never been seen with a dish before, but I think it looks cool. I've already diverged so far from any Gunship schematics that I might as well keep going.

(Alternatively, it's a death ray, it can blow up an ISD in one hit)

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v109/NarfPics/gunshipblock.jpg)
And beginning work on the engine block. And those things are not missile tubes, they are reverse thrusters!
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: chief1983 on February 09, 2009, 03:26:03 pm
Diverging or not, it's still brilliant.  You're doing exactly what I hoped someone would do with a poorly defined EU ship, making it frickin' sweet.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: StarSlayer on February 09, 2009, 03:37:53 pm
seriously frickin' sweet. 
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: aRaven on February 09, 2009, 04:47:58 pm
i'd like to command that ship ^^
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: bobbtmann on February 09, 2009, 08:05:11 pm
Just out of curiosity, how many triangles does this ship have?
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Galemp on February 10, 2009, 12:21:49 pm
What inspired you to mount the dish on a long tube like that? I would think it would be sitting on just a small cylindrical extrusion, like the quad laser turret on the bottom, to better match the Corellian design.

I like the concept, and I like the execution locally, but I'm not convinced about the placement on the hull.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: StarSlayer on February 10, 2009, 12:35:17 pm
I think its based roughly on the sensor dish on the Consular class ships from PM.  Thats a CEC product and probably one of the few ships in the prequels to look like a precursor to the original trilogy.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Axem on February 10, 2009, 12:36:45 pm
The idea was taken from the Consular ship which had a similar forward facing dish. Originally it was mounted directly on the front, but I moved it off to the side so the front could still possibly be a docking port. I just extended the base to go into the ship itself, so that's why its a long tube.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Galemp on February 10, 2009, 03:31:30 pm
*opens Wookieepedia* Aha, I see now. However that dish was stuck onto one of an existing pair of wings, not booleaned directly into the hull. It fits better up there, but there's no similar opportunity on this ship.

I agree that the dish shouldn't be directly on the front, but it shouldn't be growing directly out the side either. Maybe you could put where the port-side docking ring is now?
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: maje on February 10, 2009, 05:45:08 pm
Bravo, Axem!  This is a really cool rendition of the Gunship and I like what you've done in terms of adding tons of detail that help add to the design and make it as detailed to any film model.

Keep up the good work!
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Pred the Penguin on February 10, 2009, 09:23:04 pm
Have my doubts about the dish, but everything else looks superb!
'Specially like the reverse thrusters. ^_^
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: EtherShock on February 16, 2009, 12:16:15 am
Great idea, but I think it would look better in a location similar to the corvette. Those reverse thrusters are a very nice addition, although now everyone will be looking for those on every starship I'm betting, which means you've inadvertently created a monster.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Axem on March 15, 2009, 06:42:23 pm
Schmall updaten. The right half was deliberately unarmored to show how much work I'm putting into detail's you'll never see. :p

(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v109/NarfPics/moararmoar.jpg)

(However destructible subobjects would be rad for these...)
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: swashmebuckle on March 15, 2009, 08:04:17 pm
That is so sweet.  And yes, destructible armor plating (though awesome on any starship) would be perfect for gunships/corvettes because they are the right size of vessel for the player to make meaningful torpedo runs on but they are also unlikely to be blown away outright by your attacks (like a shuttle or transport might).  Looking great!  :yes:
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: EtherShock on March 15, 2009, 10:06:27 pm
Only if you can get destructive subobjects will it pay to model anything that won't even be seen, so maybe you want to make two varieties for when it is?
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Pred the Penguin on March 16, 2009, 09:03:10 am
Those supports look somewhat.... "flimsy" to me. Are you sure they're connected to the main hull? XD
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: jacek on March 16, 2009, 03:58:09 pm
nice :) how many polys does it have?
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: Axem on March 16, 2009, 05:31:07 pm
No comment!

Any answer I give you now would be inaccurate since I haven't been caring about optimization. I probably should optimize as I go, but I like to have fun making detail, and eventually going back and taking anything out that's too poly rich.
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: rhettro on March 16, 2009, 08:17:26 pm
Looks good! :)
Title: Re: Corellian Gunship Poll + WIP Pix
Post by: jacek on March 17, 2009, 05:12:03 pm
ok Axem I would like to only ask  :p It's really hard to create detailed mesh with low polycount...