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Off-Topic Discussion => General Discussion => Topic started by: Vortex on May 03, 2002, 09:01:04 am

Title: OT - Need your opinion
Post by: Vortex on May 03, 2002, 09:01:04 am

Ok I'm writing a parody for my writers workshop class, and I decided to do mine on Elton John's Can You Feel the Love Tonight.

Can You Smell Your Feet Tonight? :drevil:

There's a sigh of relief
With a deodorant spray
When the smell of some stinky socks
Can’t be turned away
An accursed moment
And it sees me through
It's enough for this unyielding lover
To run away from you

Chorus
And can you smell your feet tonight?
All covered in smut
It's enough for this wide-eyed wanderer
To spew out his guts
And can you smell your feet tonight?
As it's brought from rest
It's enough to make kings and vagabonds
Stand up and protest

There's a time for everyone
If you only see
That the smell of your reeking soles
Makes me want to flee
There's a perfect reason
To this sudden flight
When the nose of this faithful follower
Is threatened by this blight

Chorus

It's enough to make kings and vagabonds
Stand up and protest

Comments much appreciated...

Title: OT - Need your opinion
Post by: VW-Dynamo on May 03, 2002, 09:12:40 am

I want to hear an MP3 of you singing it before I comment on it. :p

Title: OT - Need your opinion
Post by: Stunaep on May 03, 2002, 09:21:51 am

pick your favorite smilies from the following list: :shaking: :drevil: :snipe: :wtf: :headz: ;7 :rolleyes: :p

Title: OT - Need your opinion
Post by: CP5670 on May 03, 2002, 09:30:32 am

Either :headz: or ;7.

Title: OT - Need your opinion
Post by: Ulundel on May 03, 2002, 09:54:26 am

:lol: Very good.
BTW, yes I can smell my feet tonight. UGH!!!

Title: OT - Need your opinion
Post by: Styxx on May 03, 2002, 11:41:09 am

Heh, funny. :D

Title: OT - Need your opinion
Post by: Gortef on May 03, 2002, 01:12:47 pm

I can't really "listen" how it sounds like because Rammstein is playing so loud :p

but according to the lyrics... funny :nod:

and as Dynamo said... one can comment better if one can hear someone (you :D) singing it ;)

Title: OT - Need your opinion
Post by: Vortex on May 03, 2002, 11:40:35 pm

I'll pass on the singing, but if someone else wants to do it, be my guest.