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Modding, Mission Design, and Coding => The FRED Workshop => Topic started by: NeonShivan on February 25, 2011, 10:43:31 pm

Title: Out too far? A random mission I made.
Post by: NeonShivan on February 25, 2011, 10:43:31 pm

Hello community of freespace 2 this is your fail messiah speaking lol. (The true messiah is  :v-old:)

I was bored so I decided to make a little freespace 2 mission using babloyn 5's Freespace Open (Long story) so I made a mission based on a small shivan fleet making it to Ribos through a infamous Vega gate and attacking a installation. This little mission does have its bugs but I wanted opinion on my fredding skills and see if I need any work (Do not and I say again DO NOT POST ANY COMMENTS BASED ON SPELLING AND GRAMMER! My god I just want to do this  :banghead: I am already fully aware of spelling and grammer issues and do understand that spell check fails!).

<Link soon to be posted, download must be approved by moddb and I need to "unlock" the mission file>

Title: Re: Out too far? A random mission I made.
Post by: FoeHammer on February 26, 2011, 06:40:29 pm

For clarification, will this require The Babylon Project? (I assume that's what you mean by Babylon 5's Freespace)

Title: Re: Out too far? A random mission I made.
Post by: Shivan Hunter on February 26, 2011, 07:55:09 pm

Quote from: BTA on February 25, 2011, 10:43:31 pm

grammer

"grammar". Sorry but that little rant of yours is just begging me to proofread it. Also...

Quote from: BTA on February 25, 2011, 10:43:31 pm

based on a small shivan fleet making it to Ribos through a infamous Vega gate and attacking a installation.

Wait, so why are you using TBP if this involves Shivans?

Also, If the Shivans are attacking, why would they go to Ribos from Vega? Sol and Vasuda are both closer, and Beta Aquilae is the new political center. Sorry if that seems like nitpicking, and it's fine if there's an explanation given in the mission.

Title: Re: Out too far? A random mission I made.
Post by: SypheDMar on February 26, 2011, 08:03:57 pm

fix your grammer plz. mission sux otherwize.

Title: Re: Out too far? A random mission I made.
Post by: achtung on February 26, 2011, 08:04:46 pm

Quote from: BTA on February 25, 2011, 10:43:31 pm

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Title: Re: Out too far? A random mission I made.
Post by: Nuclear1 on February 26, 2011, 08:13:20 pm

I wouldn't recommend putting up a thread until you have the link working.  Otherwise threads have a habit of going off-topic really quickly.

And honestly, it's not that bad to just ask someone here to proofread a mission for spelling and grammar.  It's like you're asking for FREDers or modellers...I could spellcheck/grammarcheck a mission in an hour or less.

Also, getting all agitated just opens yourself up to stupid flames.

Title: Re: Out too far? A random mission I made.
Post by: achtung on February 26, 2011, 08:15:53 pm

On second thought, I think I'll lock this. I already know it's not going to end well.

BTA, you can post again when you have something to show.