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Title: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: BrotherBryon on September 16, 2011, 08:18:21 am
I give you the SSG Belial

(http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/6959/platform2s01pic1.jpg) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/850/platform2s01pic1.jpg/)

Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: headdie on September 16, 2011, 08:29:01 am
massive improvement, nice work
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: mjn.mixael on September 16, 2011, 09:38:13 am
Oh dang, nice work!  :yes:
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Mongoose on September 16, 2011, 12:46:08 pm
Heh, I almost forgot this gun existed.  Sweet.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: mjn.mixael on September 16, 2011, 12:59:41 pm
These are the last remaining Shivan assets that never got HTLs. I'm hoping to get them all done for the next MVPs. Here is the list.


This topic will serve as a place to discuss these models.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Rampage on September 16, 2011, 01:04:20 pm
Do we have an HTL Demon?  I know several were thrown out there but don't recall if any of them were accepted.

R
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: mjn.mixael on September 16, 2011, 01:06:44 pm
Peterv in FSU is actually working on one.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Dragon on September 16, 2011, 03:32:42 pm
That sounds great.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: NeoKnight on September 16, 2011, 03:36:27 pm
The new model looks fantastic, looking forward to seeing it in action!
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: JCDNWarrior on September 16, 2011, 03:41:53 pm
Wow, things are only getting better. I greatly look forward to see these assets released, as well as the fighters and later on, INFR2's Shivan stuff. Then I'll finally have enough variation to make Shivan fleets and formations look the way I want them to - big, imposing, diverse. Keep up the great work as usual.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Trivial Psychic on September 16, 2011, 09:08:17 pm
I have a suggestion for this model as an upgraded version.  I'm sure that there are more than one campaign designer out there that would appreciate a version of this model with a simple button turret on top of the red light at the center, and possibly another on the opposite side.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: mjn.mixael on September 16, 2011, 09:19:41 pm
I have a suggestion for this model as an upgraded version.  I'm sure that there are more than one campaign designer out there that would appreciate a version of this model with a simple button turret on top of the red light at the center, and possibly another on the opposite side.

That's really simple to add with PCS2 and probably something that should be left to mods who need it.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Mobius on September 17, 2011, 02:18:53 pm
Please upgrade the Rahu, I'm pretty sure it would become great!
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Rodo on September 17, 2011, 02:59:53 pm
wasn't the Rahu already being htl'd?
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: mjn.mixael on September 17, 2011, 03:04:31 pm
If it was, we don't have a mesh.

We will HTL these things based on how terribly they look now. The Rahu, while still retail, holds up quite nicely next to other more recent models.

If we get around to it before the next MVPs release, it will be done after the others are finished.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Aardwolf on September 17, 2011, 09:05:47 pm
Since you're discussing "Miscellaneous Shivan Assets", I reckon I might as well remind you guys that at one point I made a Shivan countermeasure (http://www.hard-light.net/forums/index.php?topic=67088.0) which uses the existing Shivan missiles texture. It would be neat to see it in the next mediavps.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: mjn.mixael on September 17, 2011, 09:27:30 pm
It will be considered. I've added it to our WIPs folder.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: mjn.mixael on February 01, 2012, 12:26:12 am
 :bump:

There are still a few Shivans I'd love to get a work over. Most notably the Comm Node and Trident. Rahu if someone is up to it.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: BrotherBryon on February 01, 2012, 08:43:07 pm
Oh crap, I forgot I was working on the trident a while back. I was having a problem working out the angles on the arms but I solved that tonight and here it is.

(http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/553/gunplatform03pic1.jpg) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/444/gunplatform03pic1.jpg/)
(http://img37.imageshack.us/img37/9292/gunplatform03pic2.jpg) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/37/gunplatform03pic2.jpg/)

Also, were you able to finish UV mapping the Belial?
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: SypheDMar on February 01, 2012, 08:52:11 pm
I don't know about this model. It's very odd. The sharp angles and the prisms don't look too great. It seems like it can't decide whether it's supposed to be mechanical or insectoid. The compromise is unpromising.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Hades on February 01, 2012, 09:18:52 pm
What really bugs me is the connection of the turrets to the main body. I'd try to beef it up and make it look sensible there.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: mjn.mixael on February 01, 2012, 09:32:43 pm
I haven't done the Belial yet, but it's on my todo list.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: BrotherBryon on February 01, 2012, 10:05:20 pm
I don't know about this model. It's very odd. The sharp angles and the prisms don't look too great. It seems like it can't decide whether it's supposed to be mechanical or insectoid. The compromise is unpromising.

Umm, you have seen the original right?

What really bugs me is the connection of the turrets to the main body. I'd try to beef it up and make it look sensible there. The body was just the square in the middle

Are you talking about the canons to the turrets? That kind of bugs me too but that is the way it is on the original and I'm not sure how much to deviate from that. The canons just seemed to be floating on top of the turret.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: SypheDMar on February 01, 2012, 10:31:54 pm
I don't know about this model. It's very odd. The sharp angles and the prisms don't look too great. It seems like it can't decide whether it's supposed to be mechanical or insectoid. The compromise is unpromising.

Umm, you have seen the original right?
I'll rephrase what I've said. The original was unimpressive. Yours might look better if the prism arm things weren't prisms. Feels too low poly, and it doesn't fit with the new body.

In other words, it looks like you reimagined the middle turret section but then decided to do little to the arms. They don't seem to go together.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: CommanderDJ on February 01, 2012, 10:53:45 pm
By itself, I'm not too fond of the new model, but I think if the textures are done right they have a potential to really sell it.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: BrotherBryon on February 02, 2012, 01:35:28 am
I can try beveling some edges but this thing is so small already I doubt it would be noticable any where else outside the tech room. Hence the reason I didn't throw polygons at it from the get go. You may notice that those arms are not just straight prisms. The parts of the arms that will be red glow are all recessed or cut away from the rest just like I've done in the all shivan models I've done to date.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: SypheDMar on February 02, 2012, 10:55:31 am
Ah, well. Fair enough. I was a bit worried that depending too much on texture would be a bad idea, but I wasn't thinking about how small it would it in-game.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: mjn.mixael on February 07, 2012, 09:59:09 am
Updated List.

Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: BrotherBryon on February 14, 2012, 09:27:58 pm
Better?

(http://img824.imageshack.us/img824/5958/gunplatform03pic4.jpg) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/824/gunplatform03pic4.jpg/)
(http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/4025/gunplatform03pic5.jpg) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/405/gunplatform03pic5.jpg/)
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Rga_Noris on February 14, 2012, 10:52:50 pm
******* ANALYZING *******


******* APPROVED *******


...Good work. You did a good job to take the more mundane aspects of the original and make them worth a look.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: mjn.mixael on February 14, 2012, 11:15:29 pm
******* ANALYZING *******


******* APPROVED *******


...Good work. You did a good job to take the more mundane aspects of the original and make them worth a look.

Agreed.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Mongoose on February 14, 2012, 11:27:34 pm
I will ram those to death with pleasure. :yes:
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Hades on February 15, 2012, 01:27:00 am
oh mongoose you dirty boy you

yeah, i think that is a lot nicer honestly, gj
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Skarab on February 15, 2012, 04:13:47 am
I'd recognize that as Shivan without even knowing what the topic of this thread was.  Good job indeed.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: mjn.mixael on March 20, 2012, 08:11:50 pm
Textured Trident. Belial tomorrow.

(http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/kk264/mjnmixael/Private/ImageBin-6.jpg)

Woops, sorry, looks like I had FXAA off for these shots.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: mjn.mixael on March 21, 2012, 12:50:27 pm
Double post for Belial.

(http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/kk264/mjnmixael/Private/ImageBin-7.jpg)

Updated List.

Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Rodo on March 21, 2012, 01:54:15 pm
How's the Rahu coming? is it in an advanced state or just started?
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: mjn.mixael on March 21, 2012, 02:21:54 pm
Ask Axem.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Ulala on March 21, 2012, 03:02:36 pm
Those look great, the Belial especially looks much improved. :yes:
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Mongoose on March 21, 2012, 03:36:16 pm
I like that big red "Shoot me!" bullseye on the Belail. :D
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: T-LoW on March 21, 2012, 04:16:24 pm
They're beautiful and the belial looks actually threatening...
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: BrotherBryon on May 17, 2012, 10:23:18 pm
Shivan Comm Node!

(http://img831.imageshack.us/img831/6240/comm2s01pic1.jpg) (http://imageshack.us/photo/my-images/831/comm2s01pic1.jpg/)
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Cyborg17 on May 17, 2012, 10:34:26 pm
 :yes: :yes:

I would only just change the alternating parts on each of the arms. I'm not sure exactly how you should treat it instead, but it doesn't quite look shivan.  This is one hard model to tackle though.  Kudos!
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Commander Zane on May 17, 2012, 10:35:05 pm
Oh damn.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Kolgena on May 17, 2012, 11:17:48 pm
Looks very protoss. I think it's too round.

Despite that, still looks pretty good.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: rscaper1070 on May 18, 2012, 12:57:11 am
I think it looks perfect. I wouldn't change a thing. :)
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Rodo on May 18, 2012, 08:15:42 am
Looks great, don't change a thing.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: General Battuta on May 18, 2012, 08:25:29 am
Excellent work.  :yes: The core and spinner look great. I'm not a big fan of the arms; I think the curves and 'scimitar tip' cutouts are a little uninspired. That's all the feedback I've got, keep it up.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Hades on May 18, 2012, 10:55:32 am
Excellent work.  :yes: The core and spinner look great. I'm not a big fan of the arms; I think the curves and 'scimitar tip' cutouts are a little uninspired. That's all the feedback I've got, keep it up.
I have to echo this. The arms look off to me as well.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Droid803 on May 18, 2012, 11:44:51 am
You must construct additional pylons.
Looks nice though. I do also share the sentiment about the "arms".
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Dragon on May 18, 2012, 12:32:14 pm
Indeed, they certainly didn't "feel" like that on the retail model. They were less like blades and more like some sort of "umbrella". The core and arms both look great though.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: FSW on May 18, 2012, 01:40:45 pm
The Comm Node looks very cool, but the big smooth curves on the main arms seem stylistically incongruous with the rest. Could the tips of the arms be made more jagged and vicious?
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: BrotherBryon on May 19, 2012, 01:19:29 am
Well I might be open to doing something like Axem did on the mid section of his gas minor with the shield like structure punctured by a spike in the center on the ends. The arms on the other hand are limited, I'm open to suggestion on the top part of the arms but the bottom part would require altering the entire bottom structure of the center piece as well and that would be entirely too much work. It took forever to get the concave arches of the bottom structure to work and I'm just not willing to part with them. Especially considering that was the part I struggled the most with, the angles and structure in that area are with out doubt the hardest part to do any thing with that doesn't involve just making it a simple boxy strut with a few panels or recesses.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: BrotherBryon on May 27, 2012, 02:04:03 am
So, a week and no viable suggestions other than I hate the arms change them. I find myself loosing interest in this project.....

Not being pissy here just stating that I'm lost, have no idea how to proceed and I'll even consider reworking the whole damn top and bottom sections at this point if a very good, community tolerable suggestion comes my way.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: SypheDMar on May 27, 2012, 10:59:33 pm
I thought Battuta gave some nice critiques on the arms. What I'd suggest is making the jagged indents underneath less regular/uniform and more angular. I'm thinking of a Nightmarish Clam Shell or a Batwing-looking thing. That's the best I can describe what I'd like to see. As been said before, everything else looks great.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: The Dagger on May 28, 2012, 07:00:43 am
The only thing that comes to my mind is to make it look more like a claw.
That's the feeling I get from seeing the original shivan comm node:

(http://i1169.photobucket.com/albums/r503/Dagguerreotype/Misc/CommNode1.jpg)
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: General Battuta on May 28, 2012, 07:42:28 am
Yeah, I can definitely get behind that.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: redsniper on May 29, 2012, 01:18:39 pm
Definitely needs some kind of sharp corner or "joint" in it instead of just being a smooth sweeping curve like in that WIP pic.

Everything else seems spot on.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: BrotherBryon on May 29, 2012, 10:09:36 pm
I'll give the claw thing a go and see how it turns out.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: BrotherBryon on June 01, 2012, 12:13:42 pm
I like the results, did some additional detailing on some of the other pieces as well.
(http://i.imgur.com/k5IYp.jpg)
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: General Battuta on June 01, 2012, 12:16:40 pm
Massively more awesome. Well done.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: mjn.mixael on June 01, 2012, 12:25:29 pm
Wow. Yes. Now THAT I can get behind.

Quoting it here so people don't have to keep flipping back pages.

(http://i.imgur.com/k5IYp.jpg)
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Droid803 on June 01, 2012, 12:28:11 pm
The claws are too thin.

(plzdon'tkillme)
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: headdie on June 01, 2012, 12:31:25 pm
The claws are too thin.

(plzdon'tkillme)

/me takes Droid803 down the nearest side alley and introduces his head to a cricket bat

on a more pleasant note, very nicely done and keep up the good work
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: SypheDMar on June 01, 2012, 12:47:35 pm
Much better!
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Tomo on June 01, 2012, 01:39:42 pm
That's amazing. Beautiful. Perfect.

Frightening.

Everything it should be.

I can't wait to see it textured. Well done!
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: The Dagger on June 01, 2012, 01:40:10 pm
It looks great and definetily more Shivan-style.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Mongoose on June 01, 2012, 01:52:35 pm
unf
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Kolgena on June 01, 2012, 02:05:53 pm
Fantastic. Really captures the vibe of the original.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: CommanderDJ on June 01, 2012, 07:31:39 pm
There it is. Oh yeah. That's it. That's it right there.

Perfect.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: ssmit132 on June 01, 2012, 08:13:35 pm
That looks brilliant, great work!
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Al-Rik on June 02, 2012, 07:52:31 am
Whoa ! Awesome  :eek:

Those Stings are much better than the Claws of the first draw.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Legate Damar on June 02, 2012, 08:40:16 am
Very nice, I could make use of this
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Rampage on June 02, 2012, 03:21:03 pm
Superb job!  Speechlessly good!

Very nice, I could make use of this

Not everything is about you.

R
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Legate Damar on June 02, 2012, 03:23:39 pm
I was just praising him for his work and saying it was useful... if someone is demonstrating their work isn't that what they want to hear anyway?
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Scourge of Ages on June 02, 2012, 03:38:44 pm
I was just praising him for his work and saying it was useful... if someone is demonstrating their work isn't that what they want to hear anyway?

Saying "it's good" is enough. Because this is the FreeSpace Upgrade, anything good enough will get included in the MVPs and we'll all be using it anyway (generally).
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: mjn.mixael on June 02, 2012, 03:49:02 pm
This is a silly argument about nothing. Just FYI. Move on...
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Ulala on June 03, 2012, 04:44:00 pm
I like it. Less "blade-y" and more "claw-y" :yes:
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Crybertrance on June 04, 2012, 12:48:30 am
Oh crap, I think I need to change my pants... Just Epic... Umm, on a side note, when do we get to see it explode again?
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: redsniper on June 04, 2012, 11:41:03 am
Yes.... YES! That's pretty much exactly the kind of change I was hoping for.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Rga_Noris on June 07, 2012, 02:51:28 am
I like spinning claws and I cannot lie!
You other brothers ca--

Okay, I wont start that again ;)
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: CommanderDJ on June 07, 2012, 03:01:28 am
I like spinning claws and I cannot lie!
You other brothers ca--

Okay, I wont start that again ;)

Awww.  :(
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: mjn.mixael on April 20, 2013, 07:47:09 am
Finished the Comm Node a while back and never posted pics, so here it is.

(http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/kk264/mjnmixael/Private/screen0433_zpse5ad3cb8.jpg)
(http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/kk264/mjnmixael/Private/screen0432_zps11edda32.jpg)
(http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/kk264/mjnmixael/Private/screen0431_zps8856d68f.jpg)
(http://i282.photobucket.com/albums/kk264/mjnmixael/Private/screen0430_zps4bf674d7.jpg)
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Oddgrim on April 20, 2013, 07:54:55 am
Very pretty and shiny ^^ It's a real crime that you did not show it off earlier! :p
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: headdie on April 20, 2013, 08:07:29 am
very nice, not so sure about the brown, but then it's not my model, either way I like it.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: mjn.mixael on April 20, 2013, 08:17:41 am
The gold and purple are staple Shivan contrast colors going all the way back to the Scorpion from FS1.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: An4ximandros on April 20, 2013, 08:26:42 am
Can't wait to be slapped away for flying too close! It looks great! Only suggestion I'd have is that the center crystal looks a bit "plastic"-ish. It would be nice if it looked more like a crystal or metal.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Rodo on April 20, 2013, 10:16:12 am
awesome comm node :yes:
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: BrotherBryon on April 20, 2013, 11:04:31 am
That thing just looks far to menacing now to be an unarmed installation.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Kolgena on April 20, 2013, 01:10:42 pm
Can't wait to be slapped away for flying too close! It looks great! Only suggestion I'd have is that the center crystal looks a bit "plastic"-ish. It would be nice if it looked more like a crystal or metal.

I second this. Would it be trivial to give the crystal some translucency or not? Either way, that is a badass shuriken sandwich.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: mjn.mixael on April 20, 2013, 02:14:33 pm
If you're gonna ask for something.. be sure it's not there first. You see those bright glowpoints.. riiiiight in the center of the crystal? Yeah, those. Those are inside the crystal because it already has translucency using a -trans texture.
Title: Re: Miscellaneous Shivan Assets Upgrade
Post by: Cyborg17 on April 30, 2013, 10:54:35 pm
Eeets aliiiiiive!!!! Muahahahaha!!!  (I love eet.  :D)