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Title: A Tank only fears four things: New Battutafiction
Post by: The E on May 07, 2014, 04:01:19 am
Read it at Lightspeed Magazine! (http://www.lightspeedmagazine.com/fiction/a-tank-only-fears-four-things/)

I also recommend checking out the short interview Batts did about this story, to be found here (http://www.lightspeedmagazine.com/nonfiction/author-spotlight-seth-dickinson/).
Title: Re: A Tank only fears four things: New Battutafiction
Post by: Luis Dias on May 07, 2014, 04:20:33 am
aye aye commander
Title: Re: A Tank only fears four things: New Battutafiction
Post by: CKid on May 07, 2014, 12:11:28 pm
Great story, I have been looking forward to this one for a long time now.
Title: Re: A Tank only fears four things: New Battutafiction
Post by: General Battuta on May 07, 2014, 12:42:16 pm
Can't get over the awesome art

(http://i.imgur.com/RMCkAsH.jpg)

She actually took time to not just sneak a tank in but also cover it in Kontakt-5 bricks. Seriously impressed.
Title: Re: A Tank only fears four things: New Battutafiction
Post by: The E on May 07, 2014, 12:43:43 pm
Yeah, that art is ****ing amazing.
Title: Re: A Tank only fears four things: New Battutafiction
Post by: Luis Dias on May 07, 2014, 05:36:24 pm
The funny thing about english not being my first language is that sometimes I have some difficulty beggining reading stories that are written with a lot of allegorical or metaphorical allusions, I never really know whether if the allegory is just psychological or actualized. Only by the middle of the story had I understood that the tank only existed psychologically. This ambiguity in the beggining for me usually creates weird Kafkaesque confused spaces where for instance, and specifically here, actual tanks speak with people as if they are still people, talking about PTSD issues, having jobs, smoking and drinking.

Then, when the inconsistencies are so many, the Kafkaesque interpretation shatters and a much clearer simpler one remains. At that point I have to read it again. And I enjoyed it!
Title: Re: A Tank only fears four things: New Battutafiction
Post by: InsaneBaron on May 07, 2014, 06:14:22 pm
The funny thing about english not being my first language is that sometimes I have some difficulty beggining reading stories that are written with a lot of allegorical or metaphorical allusions, I never really know whether if the allegory is just psychological or actualized. Only by the middle of the story had I understood that the tank only existed psychologically. This ambiguity in the beggining for me usually creates weird Kafkaesque confused spaces where for instance, and specifically here, actual tanks speak with people as if they are still people, talking about PTSD issues, having jobs, smoking and drinking.

Then, when the inconsistencies are so many, the Kafkaesque interpretation shatters and a much clearer simpler one remains. At that point I have to read it again. And I enjoyed it!

^^  :lol:

Good read. Of course I might be completely missing the real point, but it struck me as a really thoughtful treatment of the question of cybernetics: how much of our humanity do we loose?
Title: Re: A Tank only fears four things: New Battutafiction
Post by: Luis Dias on May 07, 2014, 06:21:10 pm
Cybernetics? Not really, I think it's really just about trauma and encounter. How should we be with our friends, invincible for them or fragile, sharing their struggle? How to overcome traumas and remain human? Tanks and surgeries here were just allegory.
Title: Re: A Tank only fears four things: New Battutafiction
Post by: Scourge of Ages on May 07, 2014, 07:19:07 pm
Awwwww, from the first few paragraphs, I thought it was a BOLO story...

Also: your Wargame habit is showing, General :)
Title: Re: A Tank only fears four things: New Battutafiction
Post by: AdmiralRalwood on May 07, 2014, 07:28:29 pm
The interview more-or-less baldfacedly admits that the story was inspired by playing Wargame (unless there is some other series of Cold War strategy games made by Eugen Systems).

EDIT: I know I already said this on IRC, but very nice story, Battuta.
Title: Re: A Tank only fears four things: New Battutafiction
Post by: swashmebuckle on May 07, 2014, 07:40:49 pm
Hard to believe being a tank could actually get in the way of making sweet boom but I'm convinced. Great story!
Title: Re: A Tank only fears four things: New Battutafiction
Post by: InsaneBaron on May 07, 2014, 07:46:27 pm
Cybernetics? Not really, I think it's really just about trauma and encounter. How should we be with our friends, invincible for them or fragile, sharing their struggle? How to overcome traumas and remain human? Tanks and surgeries here were just allegory.

Unless Battuta says otherwise we might both be right :P

To be sure, there's more than one point made in the story; it's just one point that happened to strike me (given it's something I thought about as a kid: I'd love to have cool robotic arm with gadgets, but what would it do to my mind?).

Title: Re: A Tank only fears four things: New Battutafiction
Post by: General Battuta on May 07, 2014, 07:48:18 pm
The author is dead, it doesn't matter what I think
Title: Re: A Tank only fears four things: New Battutafiction
Post by: InsaneBaron on May 07, 2014, 08:38:06 pm
The author is dead, it doesn't matter what I think

So I guess Luis and me are both right :P

Good story to be sure.  :yes:
Title: Re: A Tank only fears four things: New Battutafiction
Post by: Mongoose on May 07, 2014, 09:41:24 pm
The author is dead, it doesn't matter what I think
zomg battuta's speaking from beyond the grave!
Title: Re: A Tank only fears four things: New Battutafiction
Post by: StarSlayer on May 07, 2014, 10:15:35 pm
I'd rather be a T-64BV!   :p
Title: Re: A Tank only fears four things: New Battutafiction
Post by: Luis Dias on May 08, 2014, 04:02:13 am
The author is dead, it doesn't matter what I think
zomg battuta's speaking from beyond the grave!

Its called death drive. Better than Alcubierre's.
Title: Re: A Tank only fears four things: New Battutafiction
Post by: perihelion on May 08, 2014, 09:01:53 am
Zombieauthortutta!  :shaking:
Title: Re: A Tank only fears four things: New Battutafiction
Post by: SypheDMar on May 10, 2014, 05:31:07 am
Did you realize you made it on mainstream io9?

http://lightspeedmagazine.kinja.com/io9-is-proud-to-present-fiction-from-lightspeed-magazin-1572148836/+charliejane
Title: Re: A Tank only fears four things: New Battutafiction
Post by: Scotty on May 10, 2014, 12:00:14 pm
Judging by his comment down at the bottom I'd say yes he did. :P
Title: Re: A Tank only fears four things: New Battutafiction
Post by: Black Wolf on May 10, 2014, 07:50:29 pm
Saw this on io9 - congrats on the exposure. Story was a tad hard to follow for me, until I read it a second time. But it was really well written. :yes:
Title: Re: A Tank only fears four things: New Battutafiction
Post by: X3N0-Life-Form on May 13, 2014, 10:57:12 am
Just finished reading it, going through the author spotlight now. I must say that I loved it.

Am I allowed to be in pain? Wouldn’t I be a better friend if I were invincible, always happy, always able to help?
That's my life in a nutshell. These are issues I face everyday: always looking out for my friends, ready to support them if needs be, and yet I usually hide it when I could use help or moral support, using smoke screens, mirrors and decoys if necessary.

People often grossly underestimate the effect of repeated stress and anxiety, be it in war, in the street, at home or at work. To me, this story is a good showcase of what can happen to people that reach their breaking point, so to speak. Exacerbated, irrational fear of things that we know to be harmless, or sometimes shielding ourselves from any sort of fear or usual emotional response.

I like the fact that while !tank Tereshkova is unable to feel fear, but still obviously cares about her friend and what she thinks of her. And in the end, it is desperation that forces her to fall back when Yorkina confronts her and pierces through her armor. And I think it is a form of fear, or dread of having to "operate without support" that, ironically, prompts her to leave the safety of the tank and feel the familiar, traumatic anxiety & fear, so that she can be with someone.

tldr; I really liked it, it's a story I can relate to.