[HotSnoJ]

Originally posted by vadar_1
What you need is a much better style of humor... theres many different kinds... but that just sucks ass... its not even a "ha ha... ah ... yeea" type funny. Its a "so ****ing lame i want to warm up my lightning gun" type funny. I suggest you read more webcomics to get the grasp of things. Bob and george handled mega man good. The ever popular Penny-arcade keeps their humor funny by good drawings and how their comics are always related to stuff thats new. Eskimo bob, which is actually a macromedia Flash series is funny because... well because they have a fish in a spaceship!

"Im a fish in a spaceship! You cannot defeat me! *evil laughing*"

edit: oya, dont forget a good title. Try not to leech of the popularity of other games to achieve success. Use my signature for tips on making a better title.

more editing: damn that fish is funny... "I will unleash my secret weapon! Its the claw, let the games begin!!"

I never said it would good. I just asked what you thought. And you did just that. And don't forget the comic is based on my twisted sense of humor.

Anyway here is #3 if you want to read it. http://hotsnoj.port5.com/hwcomic/HW_comic_3.png

[heretic]

Maybe he's intentionally trying to NOT be funny?'



either way, I miss freakspace

[HotSnoJ]

Originally posted by heretic
Maybe he's intentionally trying to NOT be funny?'

either way, I miss freakspace

That must be it. I'm intentionally trying to NOT be funny.

And I agree FreackSpace was great.

[Liberator]

Taken in context, #3 is better than number two.  It is kind of funny.  Try adding more characters.