[Nico]

hop! it's done, finally ( tho the scenes themselves are over half a year old already ).

[Stunaep]

mmm.... cel shading....

*ejaculates*

anyhow, although some of the character scenes are kinda... slow in movement, I really liked that. especially the part you have screencaped in the link

[wEvil]

Excellent!

You maybe need to tweak the timing and scene transitions a little and perhaps dub some voice in over the top but its very impressive.

If you're not happy with the voice considering cutting the narrative scenes out entirely - they arent really necessary for a trailer format, which is what you appear to be working to.

Also tweak the credits at the end and it'll be good showreel material.

[Nico]

Originally posted by wEvil
Excellent!

You maybe need to tweak the timing and scene transitions a little and perhaps dub some voice in over the top but its very impressive.

If you're not happy with the voice considering cutting the narrative scenes out entirely - they arent really necessary for a trailer format, which is what you appear to be working to.

Also tweak the credits at the end and it'll be good showreel material.

there were voices, but I cut them indeed ( quality sucked horribly, I just don't have the right gear for that ).
Anyway, as my 3d artist career is about to go down the sewer, I'll keep that as it is, I'm just doing it for fun
the credits at the end, well, there's not much to put in

[Stryke 9]

The Olestra wars were the bloodiest in history. With the power of not one, but several fantastic non-fat substitutes at its fingertips, humanity had the power to wreak low-caloric destruction on a scale unprecedented in all of time. But did it have the power to take responsibility for such a burden?

No.

[Nico]

riiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiight.

[karajorma]

Nice work there. Good choice of music. What is it originally from?

[Nico]

Originally posted by karajorma
Nice work there. Good choice of music. What is it originally from?

a cd  guess

[karajorma]

Actually I know it's from Ever After. I just don`t know what that is

[mikhael]

Originally posted by Stryke 9
The Olestra wars were the bloodiest in history. With the power of not one, but several fantastic non-fat substitutes at its fingertips, humanity had the power to wreak low-caloric destruction on a scale unprecedented in all of time. But did it have the power to take responsibility for such a burden?

No.

BEST. STRYKE. POST. EVAR.

[Ace]

Nice