Mission 1 -
Command Breifing, Stage 1
Welcome to the GTD Minnow pilot. I'm Admiral Palardy, and I'll be in command of you and your squadron. Because of your brother’s recommendation, you have been assigned to Alpha wing.Untill your skills are up to spec, Commander Suppa will fly as Alpha 1, and you will be Alpha 2. We have no doubts that you will gain the skills required to command the squad.
Stage 2
*Quarterdeck Breifing
Briefing Stage 3
The fighters of Kappa wing will assist your srike force in any way possible.
Stage 4
There are also several wings of fighters in the system, possibly capeable of jumping to your area.
And that's just mission 1. I'd go further, bu I don't want to give away spoilers. Mission 1 also red alerts for no perceptible reason, and then tells you you'll be flying Anubises, though the nature of RA missions means you fly exactly what you flew last mission. There are other small errors and such all through the parts I played.
I'm not trying to be overcritical here. It's just that yu have to realize, the plot, mission and mod design etc. etc. may be the most incredible in FS history, but it's the little details that people notice, and it's the mistakes that people remember. Pay attenbtion to the little details, eliminate the mistakes, and you could have a great campaign here. Without them, well, it isn;t so great.