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Offline Rictor

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Would this convince you?
Doing an ad that's basically supposed to convince people to come and register on a forum for a site which I built for the magazine at which I work. Hell, as long as it catches people's eye, I'm happy. BTW, it's a double page spread, though the magazine is smaller than normal size.

It's all using quotes from the actual forum and random images of wierd people. I'm pretty satisfied with how it turned out. At least it's got tons of character. I don't usually post design stuff here, but I'm interested in what fresh eyes will see, since I can no longer look at it objectively.


 

Offline Unknown Target

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Re: Would this convince you?
:lol: Nice. Do one for HLP :D

But seriously, looks cool + funny :D

 

Offline vyper

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Re: Would this convince you?
Hehe, very good work. You might want to fix the photochop of the big fat guy - his hair is kinda cut-off at the top.
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Re: Would this convince you?
umm, not that funny IMHO, but good ad nonetheless...

btw, do you work at a college in California???

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"Take my love. Take my land. Take me where I cannot stand. I don't care, I'm still free. You can't take the sky from me. Take me out to the black, tell them I ain't comin' back. Burn the land boil the sea, you can't take the sky from me. There's no place I can be since I've found Serenity. But you can't take the sky from me." - Ballad of Serenity

 

Offline Rictor

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Re: Would this convince you?
Canada, eh?

 

Offline Mr. Vega

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Re: Would this convince you?
The fifth from the left (the girl) needs to be a bizzare philosophical musing. Other than that, perfect.
Words ought to be a little wild, for they are the assaults of thoughts on the unthinking.
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Offline BlackDove

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Re: Would this convince you?
Question.

Why exactly should I choose to shoot the **** over there?

 
Re: Would this convince you?
Query: Why are you so pissy today? Did someone neglect to give you a Bosch Beer?

\spartan hands BlackDove yet another stolen bottle of Bosch Beer, with wide-eyed, puppy-dog look

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"Take my love. Take my land. Take me where I cannot stand. I don't care, I'm still free. You can't take the sky from me. Take me out to the black, tell them I ain't comin' back. Burn the land boil the sea, you can't take the sky from me. There's no place I can be since I've found Serenity. But you can't take the sky from me." - Ballad of Serenity

 

Offline Rictor

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Re: Would this convince you?
Question.

Why exactly should I choose to shoot the **** over there?

You shouldn't. At least if you value proper punctuation and complete sentences. Honestly, I'm not claiming it's anything better or different than a thousand forums, but then again it's targeted at a very narrow demographic: college or university student in the GTA (Greater Toronto Area). So if they're going to waste their time somewhere, might as well be my somewhere.

 

Offline BlackDove

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Re: Would this convince you?
Okay, I think I get it.

I mean it certainly doesn't appeal to me, but then again if it wasn't meant for me intentionally, maybe someone who wasn't me would find it appealing.

 

Offline IceFire

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Re: Would this convince you?
umm, not that funny IMHO, but good ad nonetheless...

btw, do you work at a college in California???
.ca = Canada
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Offline Colonol Dekker

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Re: Would this convince you?
I likes it, The 5th from left girl looks a bit impressionable though :p
Campaigns I've added my distinctiveness to-
- Blue Planet: Battle Captains
-Battle of Neptune
-Between the Ashes 2
-Blue planet: Age of Aquarius
-FOTG?
-Inferno R1
-Ribos: The aftermath / -Retreat from Deneb
-Sol: A History
-TBP EACW teaser
-Earth Brakiri war
-TBP Fortune Hunters (I think?)
-TBP Relic
-Trancsend (Possibly?)
-Uncharted Territory
-Vassagos Dirge
-War Machine
(Others lost to the mists of time and no discernible audit trail)

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Re: Would this convince you?
umm, not that funny IMHO, but good ad nonetheless...

btw, do you work at a college in California???
.ca = Canada

spartan = ignorant American

which college?

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"Take my love. Take my land. Take me where I cannot stand. I don't care, I'm still free. You can't take the sky from me. Take me out to the black, tell them I ain't comin' back. Burn the land boil the sea, you can't take the sky from me. There's no place I can be since I've found Serenity. But you can't take the sky from me." - Ballad of Serenity

  

Offline brozozo

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Re: Would this convince you?
I like it.