Let me see now...
1. I can order Alpha wing to cover me or to form on my wing. No other orders possible, not even Engage.
2. Alpha will not fire on the containers if ordered to defend me. Beta will.
3. Alpha will fire on the destroyer.
4. After Cancer wing goes down, Alpha 1 has the order "attack Alpha wing". It does nothing useful - it looks like it's trying to attack itself. 3 and 4 have no orders.
5. There seems to be no RTB directive if the NTD escapes even when the containers go down.
6. RTB is triggered if the NTD is down but not the containers.
7. Disabling the NTD by oneself (without the maxim) takes a lot of pounding. Seems not worth the effort.
8. The "destroy the Ross' beam cannon" directive remains open if the NTC Ross is destroyed.
9. The Ross chickens out after its beam cannon is destroyed. Realistic, but it does mean an objective will fail.
Maybe there should be some instruction to destroy the NTD beam attacking the GTC?
Otherwise looks like a decent mission. Seems quite doable without the maxim or infyrno (double HL-7s, harpoons, tempests), although completing all objectives is challenging, particularly both preserving the GTC and killing the NTC. There are too many instructions for the player to do (without maxim at least), and wingmen can't be ordered to help.
Edit: What am I saying? Fenrises are fragile. Ignore the Ross' beam, and just kill it.
The NTD's comms can die quickly from beam fire, preventing the NTC's arrival. Sometimes the NTD will escape, sometimes not - preserving the GTC and chasing away the NTC seem the difference. The NTD's fighter bay will I think usually go down to beams. The GVCv seems in no danger. I never felt in personal danger, except if I attacked the NTC at a poor angle and got hit by AAA beams. Perhaps some friendly fighters could be cut?