Hm...
The Good:
- Pretty background
The Bad:
- Not much else
Recommendations:
I would say that it needs some action. Some comm chatter to listen to and some empty space background isn't very interesting, especially if this is meant as a trailer for people who haven't heard of the terms before, its kinda pointless (ie. "WTF is a Lucifer?").
The video started out excellent, building the atmosphere, but then, it just never takes it anywhere. I was expecting a cut to the action the whole time...but no such thing happened. Instead, I got more and more chatter, *yawn*. The best way to improve, is to cut the empty space/chatter in half, make it more and more messy chatter (lots of voices on top of each other), then pan the camera around to a massive battle (preferably hi-def using HTL models/textures, with pretty beams, projectiles, flak etc flying everywhere). Though, that is noticable harder to do...but it would make the trailer epic.
