That does look quite a bit better. One thing I would suggest is trying to smooth out some of the lines. Right now from the views you've shown it has a bit of a 'crumpled paper' look to it. I usually spend more time smoothing the lines of a model I've made than I did making the origional geometry, but it pays off with something that looks really good and non-faceted without requiring a huge poly count. That said, that is just about the best looking and most origional first model i've seen posted here. Much better results then trying to crank out a model every day with only a couple hours of work put into it.